Desert Island Survival: in the Beginning, All the Possessions in One Hand Depend on Rubbing

It is the author's self-evaluation and demining: If the author reads this book himself, he feels that the writing style in the early stage is relatively immature, and the subject matter feels relatively niche. But the author can guarantee that the production methods and biological data of every survival skill item in the article have been verified. And the author doesn't just want to make the heroine the number one in the server from the beginning. It feels a bit boring. I like to see the protagonist fight for it based on her own strength. The author tries his best to assign prominent roles to women, and so far there are only three men among those who have appeared. (Haha, actually there were very few people on the show, but the proportion of men was even smaller.) Point out anything you don't like. The author will try to avoid it as much as possible in the subsequent writing process.

So far, it looks pretty good, with nothing unusual about it. The heroine is a lone wolf, with strong hands-on skills and a wealth of survival knowledge. Although it is a live broadcast, the barrage is not very long and the viewing experience is great.

Are there many men? Are there any good female supporting characters? Wait a moment

This article looks really good. The author needs to work hard. I like to read this kind of heroine who is uniquely beautiful. I like this kind of live broadcast of island survival, as well as popular science about seafood and plants. It's really great, but there are too few and not enough to watch.

Good-looking, no cp. The heroine also has a lovely sister in her memories. In the previous chapter 91, the heroine was suddenly abducted and taken to the wilderness to survive. She worked hard in front of the live broadcast, and a world view slowly unfolded. She worked hard and even grabbed a few employees to work for her. This boss is not evil. In the interstellar age, she discovered that she was different from other survivors. They were all natives. She was not sure. She didn't know whether the pictures in her memory were her own, or whether she was an artificial person. She had been vague before, and the plot was like an American movie where the male protagonist works in a space station for 3 years before he can leave the deserted space and return to Earth to reunite with his wife. He counts the days every day, hoping that it will be time to go home. One day, he discovers something is wrong. Several people have died in the space station, and they are about to die. When they find themselves in the space station who have not awakened their consciousness, the moment he collapses, everything is fake. He is just a clone. The memory of the earth and the memory of his wife are not his. They are all his original memories. It is that sense of desolation. When I saw the main story of the interstellar chapter, I thought of this voltage. It felt very similar to his or her experience. The corpses looked cold [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

This book looks great so far (づ ●─● )づ, and it can be seen that the author is making great progress. But I have some suggestions: 1. Many of the sentences are not fluent, and there are a lot of grammatical errors, typos, etc. Although I won't be too obsessed with this when reading the novel, too many typos and the like will affect the perception (´-ω-`)~ 2. In the first few chapters, the heroine's interaction with the audience was a bit stiff. If it was intentional, I didn't say it. ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ Overall, it is very good. It can be seen that the author has done a lot of homework and can learn some knowledge while reading the book. There are no thunderstorms at the moment, so keep up the good work! ! !

Don't stop updating, please don't take it off the shelves even if the update is stopped. My magical book to help you sleep has no big surprises, no stupid plot, and the supporting characters are all normal. It's really rare. Sleep aid reading is not a curse, it is my highest praise for survival writing. Come on, come on, this is the book I have been relying on to sleep for the past half month [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

It's very beautiful, with many details. It feels like the heroine is really like a desert island survivor. The author is a blogger who has eaten a lot of desert island survivors.

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

It's good-looking, I haven't seen any uncomfortable plot so far, and the wording is very particular. Slow-paced daily island survival story, very appetizing

I like this style very much. The heroine is uniquely beautiful, has very strong hands-on skills, and has an above-average IQ.

It feels pretty good, and the protagonist doesn't have any very powerful golden fingers. The whole thing is relatively logical, but there is one place where I have doubts. Will there really be schools of fish on the coast with sandy beaches? Will a net of fifty or sixty people be too many?

The heroine works very neatly, is strong and decisive, which is great! The plot progresses layer by layer, which is exciting and interesting to watch.

The heroine is serious about surviving on the island. There are no messy people or things to disturb her, and there are no obvious insults to her. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement [laughs]

It is rare to see such detailed survival stories in female videos. The heroine is very serious about survival. It can be seen that the author carefully researched the information. I was so lucky to come across this book. I received a five-star review.

It looks pretty good so far. Keep up the good work

It's okay, I like the daily writing.

It's pretty and very thoughtful.

[Almost crying] Don't give up, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

It's nice to read. The comments in the barrage are friendly and not as violent as other articles. The female protagonist has strong hands-on skills and a good personality. The author writes well.

Not bad, not bad, it's like surviving while playing. I work for a short time in the morning and then take a nap, and work for a short time and then sleep in the afternoon. I feel very relaxed and unhurried.

Very beautiful, the details are well handled! Big cheers for the author! [Blowing kiss][laughing]

Because the author is rigorous and full of details, it seems that the heroine's baby is also very smart.

It looks good, I give it five stars.

It feels good, save it