Zhu Yixiu Is Reborn in Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace and Slaughters Her Way Through the Harem

The overall structure is good. It can be seen that the author wanted to write the book well when he first started it. Maybe he ended it hastily because the data in the later period was not good. Let's talk about the good points first. The plot is well written, with tension and relaxation. The heroine adapts quickly to the rebirth and time travel, and she clearly knows what she wants, what she should do and what she shouldn't do. The heroine has a great mind. In fact, there are many shortcomings. There are many typos, words, and sentences in the article. The author has corrected a lot of them after being persuaded, but there are also some things that he did not take into account. It is actually quite uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, after more people entered the palace in the later period, the titles of the palaces were often written incorrectly. This is really wrong. This is the most basic thing that does not involve the quality of writing. There are so many mistakes that will definitely dissuade many readers who have high requirements. Moreover, many of the foreshadowings were not reflected in the later stage. I remember Qingying mentioned her younger brother Neli before, and wanted to support him to serve in the previous dynasty to break the dilemma of the Ulanara clan only having a harem position and no one in the previous dynasty, but it turned out that it was never mentioned again. There are also too many petty fights among the lower-ranking concubines, but many of them are mindless. Without the deep palace battles to attract people, it seems long-winded and boring. Also, the description of facial expressions and outspoken thoughts is a bit too immature. A large number of words such as "surprise" and "weird" appear repeatedly, which will make readers tired. They will also feel that the author's writing style is poor and cannot describe psychological fluctuations, mood swings, etc. Overall, the article is good. I have also read the author's two foreign books. The concept and framework are both good. It would be better if it could be more detailed, bury more threads, and add some unclear points to make readers think.

Yes, Yixiu's rebirth into Qingying is very good. I think the author is great @ Su Xue. You seem to have studied everyone. When I read the novel, I felt like I was reading a cool novel. I have been addicted to it. I want to write more books. 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦

Wow, I found that I have read three of the four books written by the author! I haven't read it except the one about De Fei! Of course, if I were to choose among those three books, I think the one about Hong Hui is the best and most exciting! That novel could definitely be published or remade into a TV series! Because the impression is so profound!!!!! Ahhhhhhh, so excited! Regarding this book, I think the subject matter is very novel. Yi Xiu in the original book and Yi Xiu in the Legend of Zhen Huan. Yi Xiu in the original book travels through Qingying. The child looks very much like Hong Hui. Is it possible that this is foreshadowing? Is Honghui really back? Is it possible to write Honghui into memory? Well, I'm really looking forward to the author's ideas! The most thoughtful thing about this novel is the relationship between power, love and calculation!!!

Yixiu's rebirth as Ruyi is a relatively new subject. It's so cool to reveal Zhen Huan's affair after her rebirth.

From a very novel perspective, Yixiu got rid of his obsession with feelings, picked up Qingying's good cards again, renewed the fate of mother and son with his son, and also saved himself in another time and space. Anyway, it would be great to have a world where no one shakes mushrooms.

Unknowingly, I have followed so many chapters. Although I don't like the TV version of Qingying, the Qingying written by the author makes me feel that this is her original life. The author's writing is very good. I have seen Gong Douwen who does not rely on appearance and relies entirely on his brain. It is an article that I look forward to updating every day. Come on, author.

It's good-looking, but not enough to read at all. It came from An Lingrong's book.

Overall, it's a good read. The only drawback is that the emperor always had a favorite female partner. After she finally died, the concubine chased her as a concubine, and finally replaced her daughter to continue dancing... The middle and early stages are really good to watch, but in the later stage, the fight between the concubines and the monsters is annoying, and the heroine becomes a background.

I have read other books by the author and they are all very good. The writing style of this book is still online. I feel that the story design is not as good as the previous one. The main reason is that the established characters of Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace are offline too early. It is very enjoyable to watch at the front. There are too many new characters in the back. It feels like it is not a time-traveling Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace. The main characters are offline. It was too early and there were no stories related to Yuan Ju to be written. Otherwise, the scenes of the Queen Mother of the two palaces, cooperating with her aunt to make the emperor trust her more, and the scene of Empress Fucha, where different camps cooperated with Zhen Huan to fight for power, and the scene of Jin Yuyan, who did so many bad things, and the early scenes were very heavy. After ascending the throne, why don't they let them die again? This makes Bai Ruiji stand out. How can she be so brave without the support of the Queen Mother? With these people gone, Qingying will have no difficulty. Also, I think reading fan fiction is partly because you are interested in the characters of the book, but partly because you don't want to remember so many characters. I sincerely suggest that the author writes this kind of article in the future. It's fine, but don't delete too many previous characters prematurely and add too many new characters too soon.

It's not enough to read, one link after another, it's so exciting. I've read the big book before, Yi Xiu is reborn before Honghui was born, and now I'm following this one again. I open Tomato every day and read it, and there are no updates!! Looking forward to the follow-up plot! 😘