Zhu Yixiu Is Reborn as Qingying, and There Is No Hysteria

The overall structure is good. It can be seen that the author wanted to write the book well when he first started it. Maybe he ended it hastily because the data in the later period was not good. Let's talk about the good points first. The plot is well written, with tension and relaxation. The heroine adapts quickly to the rebirth and time travel, and she clearly knows what she wants, what she should do and what she shouldn't do. The heroine has a great mind. In fact, there are many shortcomings. There are many typos, words, and sentences in the article. The author has corrected a lot of them after being persuaded, but there are also some things that he did not take into account. It is actually quite uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, after more people entered the palace in the later period, the titles of the palaces were often written incorrectly. This is really wrong. This is the most basic thing that does not involve the quality of writing. There are so many mistakes that will definitely dissuade many readers who have high requirements. Moreover, many of the foreshadowings were not reflected in the later stage. I remember Qingying mentioned her younger brother Neli before, and wanted to support him to serve in the previous dynasty to break the dilemma of the Ulanara clan only having a harem position and no one in the previous dynasty, but it turned out that it was never mentioned again. There are also too many petty fights among the lower-ranking concubines, but many of them are mindless. Without the deep palace battles to attract people, it seems long-winded and boring. Also, the description of facial expressions and outspoken thoughts is a bit too immature. A large number of words such as "surprise" and "weird" appear repeatedly, which will make readers tired. They will also feel that the author's writing style is poor and cannot describe psychological fluctuations, mood swings, etc. Overall, the article is good. I have also read the author's two foreign books. The concept and framework are both good. It would be better if it could be more detailed, bury more threads, and add some unclear points to make readers think.

Yes, Yixiu's rebirth into Qingying is very good. I think the author is great @ Su Xue. You seem to have studied everyone. When I read the novel, I felt like I was reading a cool novel. I have been addicted to it. I want to write more books. [Cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Wow, I found that I have read three of the four books written by the author! I haven't read it except the one about De Fei! Of course, if I were to choose among those three books, I think the one about Hong Hui is the best and most exciting! That novel could definitely be published or remade into a TV series! Because the impression is so profound! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhh, so excited! Regarding this book, I think the subject matter is very novel. Yi Xiu in the original book and Yi Xiu in the Legend of Zhen Huan. Yi Xiu in the original book travels through Qingying. The child looks very much like Hong Hui. Is it possible that this is foreshadowing? Is Honghui really back? Is it possible to write Honghui into memory? Well, I'm really looking forward to the author's ideas! The most thoughtful thing about this novel is the relationship between power, love and calculation! ! !

Yixiu's rebirth as Ruyi is a relatively new subject. It's so cool to reveal Zhen Huan's affair after her rebirth.

From a very novel perspective, Yixiu got rid of his obsession with feelings, picked up Qingying's good cards again, renewed the fate of mother and son with his son, and also saved himself in another time and space. Anyway, it would be great to have a world where no one shakes mushrooms.

Unknowingly, I have followed so many chapters. Although I don't like the TV version of Qingying, the Qingying written by the author makes me feel that this is her original life. The author's writing is very good. I have seen Gong Douwen who does not rely on appearance and relies entirely on his brain. It is an article that I look forward to updating every day. Come on, author.

It's good-looking, but not enough to read at all. It came from An Lingrong's book.

I have read other books by the author and they are all very good. The writing style of this book is still online. I feel that the story design is not as good as the previous one. The main reason is that the established characters of Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace are offline too early. It is very enjoyable to watch at the front. There are too many new characters in the back. It feels like it is not a time-traveling Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace. The main characters are offline. It was too early and there were no stories related to Yuan Ju to be written. Otherwise, the scenes of the Queen Mother of the two palaces, cooperating with her aunt to make the emperor trust her more, and the scene of Empress Fucha, where different camps cooperated with Zhen Huan to fight for power, and the scene of Jin Yuyan, who did so many bad things, and the early scenes were very heavy. After ascending the throne, why don't they let them die again? This makes Bai Ruiji stand out. How can she be so brave without the support of the Queen Mother? With these people gone, Qingying will have no difficulty. Also, I think reading fan fiction is partly because you are interested in the characters of the book, but partly because you don't want to remember so many characters. I sincerely suggest that the author writes this kind of article in the future. It's fine, but don't delete too many previous characters prematurely and add too many new characters too soon.

Overall, it's a good read. The only drawback is that the emperor always had a favorite female partner. After she finally died, the concubine chased her as a concubine, and finally replaced her daughter to continue dancing... The middle and early stages are really good to watch, but in the later stage, the fight between the concubines and the monsters is annoying, and the heroine becomes a background.

It's not enough to read, one link after another, it's so exciting. I've read the big book before, Yi Xiu is reborn before Honghui was born, and now I'm following this one again. I open Tomato every day and read it, and there are no updates! ! Looking forward to the follow-up plot! [Blowing kiss]

The two Yixiu were killing each other like crazy, hahaha, the others were not on the same level at all, they were just having fun! There is a saying that those new concubines are really brave to go crazy, but the ending is a bit too hasty, but overall it is still worth watching.

I personally value writing, which is 10,000 times better than many illiterate books with scores of eight or nine on Tomato. I don't know why it is so low, what with the world. . This writing style is very comfortable, mature and comfortable to read. It is much better than the tacky elementary school student writing style written casually by cats and dogs.

It looks good. I like it. I like it. This book is a powerful combination of the original Zhu Yixiu and the TV series version Ulanara Yixiu. They have an online IQ and are ruthless in their attacks. It feels great to catch up on the latest chapter.

Author, I'm here too [Adoration] An Lingrong's book is my favorite, even though the ending is rushed [face covering] I always thought there was an extra [laughing and crying]

The author writes very well, but having a son-in-law during the Qing Dynasty is off-putting. The real Qianlong scum is not a waste! Those who didn't know thought Gao Bin was Huo Guang. Jin Yuyan was afraid of offending Li Chao when dealing with her.

Good-looking and smart people are different. Even Qingying's body can't hide her own charm!

This author's books are all great! ! ! ! Very beautiful, a completely different version of Qingyingden

Zhu Yixiu is smart and sharp, cautious, can act well, knows how to employ people, understands pharmacology, has the ability and means. After transforming into Qingying, he is like a king who accidentally entered the bronze game. He digs holes everywhere and wins everything. It is really fun to watch! The child is very similar to Zhu Yixiu's eldest prince and Yixiu's Honghui. It can be regarded as making up for the shortcomings in their hearts. Moreover, with a common goal, the two kings join forces to slay the dragon and ascend to the throne. Isn't it easy to catch them? I look forward to it!

I have read several completed works by the author, and this one is the most enjoyable and smoothest, and the writing style is getting better and better! He just likes high-ranking palace battles and won't feel angry at all. Although the husband-in-law had doubts in the end, the love between husband and wife has always existed. Nice!

The strongest lineup is very exciting, but there are a few regrets. The first one is that after the first draft, a bunch of rookies started to fight each other, and Fucha's endless monsters seemed a bit tiring. The second one is that the personalities of some characters did not stand up, such as Gao Xiyue. Logically speaking, he should be a member of the Qingying Gang and the strongest mouth substitute, but the difference between before and after is a bit big.

It looks good. Although the language is simple, it is very interesting to read. The characters are well developed. Although it is a fanfic, it has its own reasonable design and arrangement. Generally speaking, it is very good-looking. The score is a bit low now. I can give it a minimum of 8.5. The author writes quickly and I look forward to finishing it soon.

It's a big book, and I love the one by Yixiu the most. Keep up the good work! ! !

I laughed so hard. I saw the update and found out that the author is a familiar wife. I asked how I found such a well-written article [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Good-looking, very good-looking, very consistent with the feeling of Yi Xiu Ruyi in the original work Why doesn't anyone write a review? This book is particularly interesting.

I have read the author's other books, and I feel that the writing style is great. The full length of the setting is on my heart. It's so fun to read it, hahahaha. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง[Love]

Although there are many typos, the article is still very interesting. Editor, your name is so familiar.

Give myself a thumbs up [blowing kiss]

Yixiu was reborn as Qingying, which felt a bit overkill.

Protagonist Chapter 170 I didn't even see anyone

It looks good, but will Xiyue have a happy ending?