[Rebirth+Game+Monster Slaying+Group Portraits]
Fang Chen was reborn into the world of the online game "Demon Slayer" and came to three years before the plot of the game started.
He became a scholar who could die at any time.
Relying on the player panel and past life memories, he escaped from death and embarked on the road to slay demons and become stronger.
In this world, there are great monsters and humans are like food.
There are foolish kings who cede territory and pay compensation just to survive, and there are treacherous people who accept evil and make decisions just to live a long life.
Fang Chen used the demon sword in his hand to suppress the chaos in the world, punish the traitors in the court, reverse the fate of heaven, and restore peace to the world!
The Commander-in-Chief of the Demon Suppression Department said:
The one who can save the human race is never some illusory God, but the human race itself!
Volume One: The Wind Rises in Panlong Town (320,000 words completed)
Volume 2: The First Arrival of Players (340,000 words completed)
Volume Three: Heroes Emerge in Troubled Times (Serialized)
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Reader comments
This is a very ink-filled novel, with memories and explanations happening at every turn, and very little useful information! (I didn't expect this novel to surpass Hei Liaozhai·Protagonist·Ji Chang at first, but unfortunately, it's not even close to one and a half stars!) Where is the protagonist? Not many protagonists in the beginning let people know what a clown is. Yes, the protagonist is a clown, drinking wedding wine, drinking wedding wine, but the protagonist insists on provoking the police (knowing that practitioners are very sharp, why should you watch him when he has nothing to do?), And he is still full of talk. Running on the train, running, the policeman actually knows the real owner, but when asked in the village, the main character is guilty of fraud. In ancient times, those who deceived officials would be disabled even if they didn't die. The main character still deceived and cultivated officials and died, how could he not die (unfortunately, he has the halo of the main character)? This shows how stupid the protagonist is! You have to tell the truth when you are talking about falsehoods. You will know what is false when you ask. Coincidentally, the falseness is the most fatal. Under the questioning of the police, our clown protagonist can only break into a cold sweat and remain silent. Because of his own stupidity, he handed over the fatal information to others, saying that the protagonist is stupid? Or is it arrogance? Maybe both!
I thought it would be a good book, and Tomato did not disappoint me.
Do you think it's reasonable based on the strength of Panlong Town? Not to mention those foreign aids, Sun Zhenshou has a lot of people in the third realm. Before the protagonist came here, there were not as many people in the second realm as others in the third realm. The strongest one named Song was still in the second realm and could not break through. They had tens of thousands of troops, and there were not even a hundred people here. With this strength In comparison, he sent someone to drag down the guy named Liu, and directly attacked with a blitz, and everything was already in hand. If you want to say that the strength is about the same, in this layout, the result is that before the protagonist came, except for the guy named Liu, Sun Zhenshou completely crushed the Monster Catcher Division, and he had to wait until the protagonist had developed for a few years before taking action.
I stopped reading after only reading chapter 67. Let me tell you my feelings.
The procrastination, the procrastination, there are only four or five main characters in these 60-odd chapters, and a lot of space is spent on writing the background. The key is that these characters are almost passers-by in other novels. When you were fighting silkworm monsters, you created a fantasy world and wrote 7 or 8 chapters. It was too clumsy.
Then there are the skills. The protagonist has mastered a sword technique. Every time he uses it, he will lose strength. In the worst case, he will be on the verge of death. Is there something wrong with my understanding? Shouldn't the sword technique enhance the level-A damage? Isn't this your trick? I can easily understand you saying that you have mastered a unique skill, but it is a sword skill. Every time I see this, I am very surprised.
Unhappy, specifically referring to the plot related to the character Song Zhiping~
I quite like the theme of being reborn before the game is launched, but this one is a little different. The first protagonist regards the others as NPCs. So what is the protagonist himself, an NPC with the identity of a player? There are also main tasks, the penalty for failure is death, not free at all? It's okay if you don't answer!
It looks good, I will keep following it. I would like to give a small suggestion to the author. I know that the author wants to portray the characters as full as possible. For example, the Silkworm Demon also wants to write about her feelings. But writing about fantasy here is really a bit unreadable. The story of the fantasy world is very well written, and it still maintains a strong writing power. It can be said that if it is placed in other novels, it can contain the outline of an entire novel. However, if it is placed in this book, the reader's mood suddenly transitions from the tense critical stage of defeating the silkworm monster to the "new world" of about 8 chapters. It is really impatient and has a bad impression. I personally suggest that the author try to focus on the main line in the early stage of writing (after all, there are not many chapters now, so you should work hard to get high scores first). If you really want to add a branch line similar to the fantasy world, a little trick is to put a sentence in the text before entering the branch line to remind the reader which chapter to which chapter is the branch line. Skipping will not affect reading. This will make it more acceptable to most impatient readers. I hope the author can see this comment [blowing kiss]
There is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages of this book, and the rhythm is not the fast-paced and refreshing style that is currently popular, which may cause discomfort to some readers, so I also explained this problem in the introduction and the first chapter.
When I outlined the outline and set up the characters, I made a decision. The protagonist, supporting characters, and characters in the book are not static, so I will use more pen and ink to describe some events. These events will affect the changes in the thoughts of the protagonist and supporting characters.
The protagonist Fang Chen, from the beginning regards the people around him as NPCs, to later fighting for these NPCs, this change in thought must be described slowly.
After all, there is a saying that the two hardest things are to take other people's money and put your thoughts into other people's heads.
I have buried a lot of foreshadowing in the book, some of which I have filled in, and some of which I am still digging out. I don't know if I can keep writing it, but if one day I can't hold on and finish it, I will write a single chapter to fill in all the holes.
Finally, what I want to say is that Red Persimmon is an open and free platform that is very tolerant of authors and readers. Therefore, I wrote the book I wanted to write without pursuing the hottest routines and templates today. Naturally, I did not expect everyone to like it.
What I hope is that the brothers and sisters who watch it can gain some different happiness and touch.
I am telling the story of a hero in my heart. If you in front of the screen can also like it, that would be great!
Not bad, not bad. I can't help but lecture you while you're standing.
The front part is mediocre, and sometimes the main character doesn't want to watch it, but I often get excited after seeing the back part, really.
You have to catch the main character from the front. If I wasn't bored, I would be ok reading it. But the front is a bit unsightly and a little bit irritating. I'm fine. I'll read the rest and finish it. There are no other novels. I just read it a little bit. It's good. The front is mediocre and a little clumsy. There will be many people who won't read this.
The plot is over in more than seventy chapters. It's too protracted. I wrote nearly sixty pictures of one masterful point. There are also rich supporting character arcs that are almost forced to have a background story. It's very fragmented. Some dialogues are enough.
If you are writing a short article, the plot is very good, but the long-term development, I bluntly say, is too stretched. Although the characters are well-developed, they are too far-fetched and out of time. In addition, I wrote nearly 50 chapters for a small plot. These 50 chapters only span 2-3 days. Do you think my rating is enough?
It was so frustrating to watch, and so watery that everyone wanted to read the entire memoir.
It seemed quite exciting at first, but a dream and hallucination confused me. He was fighting the Silkworm Demon when he suddenly did this. It's uncomfortable, bye👋🏻
Wow, how long can it take to write a boring fantasy?
Not good-looking......
The biggest problem with this book is that the overall structure is not good. As a time traveler, you should have a short and fast plot.
A plot goes on for dozens of endless chapters, and a supporting character is foreshadowed by a large amount of text. This is completely putting the cart before the horse.
The first few chapters were okay, but the overall pacing was still not well controlled.
I'm here to watch the main character, there are probably too many supporting roles.
Is the positioning of the Demon Suppression Division a little outrageous? The highest combat power of a vassal town's chief constable was equal to that of the three generals guarding it. In its heyday, the manpower was only over 60, which was supplied by all the dynasties. Regardless of the financial resources and manpower, they could not be compared under the same conditions. Why should they be outside the independent dynasty? You can say that the commander-in-chief has the highest combat power, but under the commander-in-chief, the system construction of each vassal and town is completely inadequate and the combat power is lacking. How can it support this big stall?
Author, you must win the Easter match
It looks good, but it's not good enough.
See if it's okay! Just a little bit frustrated
[Laughs] Dressing as an NPC is an interesting story that players are looking forward to entering.
Beautiful and well written👍🏻
Generally speaking, if you look at it, the summary is that everything is fate! [Sinister smile]
It's very good. There is nothing poisonous about it after reading it. I hope the author will work harder and not collapse.
It's quite interesting. The background of the story is similar to that of the late Qing Dynasty.
Very good, the story is quite interesting
It's quite interesting. I can read the latest new books.
The plot direction is very good, and it is not brainless but refreshing. There may be a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. The overall framework needs to be constructed, but it is a little bit less. Overall, I feel it is okay. Although it is a game, it is similar to fantasy but not a traditional fantasy novel. For a taste of it, please read five chapters.
It's okay, but I feel like the author is not very good at smoothing out the story's development and conflict, and I have higher requirements.
This is a very ink-filled novel, with memories and explanations happening at every turn, and very little useful information! (I didn't expect this novel to surpass Hei Liaozhai·Protagonist·Ji Chang at first, but unfortunately, it's not even close to one and a half stars!) Where is the protagonist? Not many protagonists in the beginning let people know what a clown is. Yes, the protagonist is a clown, drinking wedding wine, drinking wedding wine, but the protagonist insists on provoking the police (knowing that practitioners are very sharp, why should you watch him when he has nothing to do?), And he is still full of talk. Running on the train, running, the policeman actually knows the real owner, but when asked in the village, the main character is guilty of fraud. In ancient times, those who deceived officials would be disabled even if they didn't die. The main character still deceived and cultivated officials and died, how could he not die (unfortunately, he has the halo of the main character)? This shows how stupid the protagonist is! You have to tell the truth when you are talking about falsehoods. You will know what is false when you ask. Coincidentally, the falseness is the most fatal. Under the questioning of the police, our clown protagonist can only break into a cold sweat and remain silent. Because of his own stupidity, he handed over the fatal information to others, saying that the protagonist is stupid? Or is it arrogance? Maybe both!
I thought it would be a good book, and Tomato did not disappoint me.
Do you think it's reasonable based on the strength of Panlong Town? Not to mention those foreign aids, Sun Zhenshou has a lot of people in the third realm. Before the protagonist came here, there were not as many people in the second realm as others in the third realm. The strongest one named Song was still in the second realm and could not break through. They had tens of thousands of troops, and there were not even a hundred people here. With this strength In comparison, he sent someone to drag down the guy named Liu, and directly attacked with a blitz, and everything was already in hand. If you want to say that the strength is about the same, in this layout, the result is that before the protagonist came, except for the guy named Liu, Sun Zhenshou completely crushed the Monster Catcher Division, and he had to wait until the protagonist had developed for a few years before taking action.
I stopped reading after only reading chapter 67. Let me tell you my feelings. The procrastination, the procrastination, there are only four or five main characters in these 60-odd chapters, and a lot of space is spent on writing the background. The key is that these characters are almost passers-by in other novels. When you were fighting silkworm monsters, you created a fantasy world and wrote 7 or 8 chapters. It was too clumsy. Then there are the skills. The protagonist has mastered a sword technique. Every time he uses it, he will lose strength. In the worst case, he will be on the verge of death. Is there something wrong with my understanding? Shouldn't the sword technique enhance the level-A damage? Isn't this your trick? I can easily understand you saying that you have mastered a unique skill, but it is a sword skill. Every time I see this, I am very surprised.
Unhappy, specifically referring to the plot related to the character Song Zhiping~
I quite like the theme of being reborn before the game is launched, but this one is a little different. The first protagonist regards the others as NPCs. So what is the protagonist himself, an NPC with the identity of a player? There are also main tasks, the penalty for failure is death, not free at all? It's okay if you don't answer!
It looks good, I will keep following it. I would like to give a small suggestion to the author. I know that the author wants to portray the characters as full as possible. For example, the Silkworm Demon also wants to write about her feelings. But writing about fantasy here is really a bit unreadable. The story of the fantasy world is very well written, and it still maintains a strong writing power. It can be said that if it is placed in other novels, it can contain the outline of an entire novel. However, if it is placed in this book, the reader's mood suddenly transitions from the tense critical stage of defeating the silkworm monster to the "new world" of about 8 chapters. It is really impatient and has a bad impression. I personally suggest that the author try to focus on the main line in the early stage of writing (after all, there are not many chapters now, so you should work hard to get high scores first). If you really want to add a branch line similar to the fantasy world, a little trick is to put a sentence in the text before entering the branch line to remind the reader which chapter to which chapter is the branch line. Skipping will not affect reading. This will make it more acceptable to most impatient readers. I hope the author can see this comment [blowing kiss]
There is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stages of this book, and the rhythm is not the fast-paced and refreshing style that is currently popular, which may cause discomfort to some readers, so I also explained this problem in the introduction and the first chapter. When I outlined the outline and set up the characters, I made a decision. The protagonist, supporting characters, and characters in the book are not static, so I will use more pen and ink to describe some events. These events will affect the changes in the thoughts of the protagonist and supporting characters. The protagonist Fang Chen, from the beginning regards the people around him as NPCs, to later fighting for these NPCs, this change in thought must be described slowly. After all, there is a saying that the two hardest things are to take other people's money and put your thoughts into other people's heads. I have buried a lot of foreshadowing in the book, some of which I have filled in, and some of which I am still digging out. I don't know if I can keep writing it, but if one day I can't hold on and finish it, I will write a single chapter to fill in all the holes. Finally, what I want to say is that Red Persimmon is an open and free platform that is very tolerant of authors and readers. Therefore, I wrote the book I wanted to write without pursuing the hottest routines and templates today. Naturally, I did not expect everyone to like it. What I hope is that the brothers and sisters who watch it can gain some different happiness and touch. I am telling the story of a hero in my heart. If you in front of the screen can also like it, that would be great!
Not bad, not bad. I can't help but lecture you while you're standing. The front part is mediocre, and sometimes the main character doesn't want to watch it, but I often get excited after seeing the back part, really. You have to catch the main character from the front. If I wasn't bored, I would be ok reading it. But the front is a bit unsightly and a little bit irritating. I'm fine. I'll read the rest and finish it. There are no other novels. I just read it a little bit. It's good. The front is mediocre and a little clumsy. There will be many people who won't read this.
The plot is over in more than seventy chapters. It's too protracted. I wrote nearly sixty pictures of one masterful point. There are also rich supporting character arcs that are almost forced to have a background story. It's very fragmented. Some dialogues are enough.
If you are writing a short article, the plot is very good, but the long-term development, I bluntly say, is too stretched. Although the characters are well-developed, they are too far-fetched and out of time. In addition, I wrote nearly 50 chapters for a small plot. These 50 chapters only span 2-3 days. Do you think my rating is enough?
It was so frustrating to watch, and so watery that everyone wanted to read the entire memoir.
It seemed quite exciting at first, but a dream and hallucination confused me. He was fighting the Silkworm Demon when he suddenly did this. It's uncomfortable, bye👋🏻
Wow, how long can it take to write a boring fantasy?
Not good-looking......
The biggest problem with this book is that the overall structure is not good. As a time traveler, you should have a short and fast plot. A plot goes on for dozens of endless chapters, and a supporting character is foreshadowed by a large amount of text. This is completely putting the cart before the horse. The first few chapters were okay, but the overall pacing was still not well controlled.
I'm here to watch the main character, there are probably too many supporting roles.
Is the positioning of the Demon Suppression Division a little outrageous? The highest combat power of a vassal town's chief constable was equal to that of the three generals guarding it. In its heyday, the manpower was only over 60, which was supplied by all the dynasties. Regardless of the financial resources and manpower, they could not be compared under the same conditions. Why should they be outside the independent dynasty? You can say that the commander-in-chief has the highest combat power, but under the commander-in-chief, the system construction of each vassal and town is completely inadequate and the combat power is lacking. How can it support this big stall?
Author, you must win the Easter match
It looks good, but it's not good enough.
See if it's okay! Just a little bit frustrated
[Laughs] Dressing as an NPC is an interesting story that players are looking forward to entering.
Beautiful and well written👍🏻
Generally speaking, if you look at it, the summary is that everything is fate! [Sinister smile]
It's very good. There is nothing poisonous about it after reading it. I hope the author will work harder and not collapse.
It's quite interesting. The background of the story is similar to that of the late Qing Dynasty.
Very good, the story is quite interesting
It's quite interesting. I can read the latest new books.
The plot direction is very good, and it is not brainless but refreshing. There may be a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage. The overall framework needs to be constructed, but it is a little bit less. Overall, I feel it is okay. Although it is a game, it is similar to fantasy but not a traditional fantasy novel. For a taste of it, please read five chapters.
It's okay, but I feel like the author is not very good at smoothing out the story's development and conflict, and I have higher requirements.