[Travel + Magic + Academy + No slap in the face + No system] Leon accidentally traveled to a world full of steam and magic. Facing an unknown new life, how will he start a wonderful adventure? Maybe it would be good to go to a magic academy and become a teacher first. . .
Reader comments
Only personal subjective opinion
Main highlights
The protagonist explores the world slowly, rather than pushing it head-on. His daily life is very pyrotechnic, and the environment does not feel impetuous. In addition, the plot is plain with twists and turns, and the writing style is relatively good. The writing is generally smooth.
Shortcomings
The protagonist's personality is slightly flawed, but there is no sign of growth or change. The description of the growth process of the minor characters is good, but a bit draggy.
The combat description is insufficient, especially for the protagonist. I know he is very powerful, but I can't tell how strong he is in fighting. I think it is because the protagonist lacks changes in the battle. His personal theory application is not very prominent in the battle. It is a bit like releasing skills. I will describe it later. (You can refer to the battle of the Lord of Mysteries)
The plot development is sometimes interspersed with too many meaningless character descriptions, which feels too slow. The author should be improving his writing skills and techniques, but it is still unfamiliar at the moment.
Overall it's pretty good, I'd like to encourage you [please give me more updates]
The writing is good, but I really want to complain about whether the tear ducts of these people, including the protagonist, are too developed and they cry at every turn. "A real man can only shed tears after everything is over!"
It feels like the author wants to write a narrative structure similar to that of Lord of Mysteries, linking each character's experience story to the protagonist's growth process. In terms of writing style, it is quite good among new writers. The only shortcoming is that all the stories have a tragic color, which is somewhat unreasonable and will make readers feel a little uncomfortable. After all, the tragic endings of most supporting characters will also bring a lot of negative emotions to readers. Overall, it is a novel that makes people want to continue reading. Come on, author.
Very good. If you've read enough, it's a pretentious novel that slaps the system in the face. And you happen to like novels with somewhat developing characters. Wait a minute and I like the kind about magic. You can come and read this book. It's a worthwhile trip. The premise is that the author can write well.
I have seen Chapter 46. There is a knife, and there seems to be a female protagonist. The protagonist is powerful but not invincible. Then today I saw that the author has published a new book. This one is very suitable to my taste. I hope the author will stick to this book. You should also pay attention to rest [crazy] [punch hard]
I'll give the new book a good review, but does it have a female protagonist?
The author is awesome. Currently reading the second volume. So awesome. An indescribable feeling. 6. As a newcomer, the author shocked me. Alas, forget it, come and see for yourselves. And the author, don't stop updating.
This book is really great, the plot is fascinating, I can't stop reading it, I highly recommend it to everyone!
There is nothing wrong with the book. The author must have read Lord of Mysteries. I always feel that many settings are similar to Lord of Mysteries. I would like to give five stars to support the new author.
I like this style very much
The book is very good, but the power level needs to be clarified quickly [smile]
The writing is pretty good. The first two may be a bit embarrassing, but the latter ones are much better.
Teacher➕Full marks for no system. However, the narrative technique is not perfect and the writing style is slightly poor. It's time for a newcomer to write a new book. Support a wave
The narrative is smooth and the article is very powerful. The story is relatively old but the writing is good and very beautiful.
Very nice and refreshing article [like] [like] [like], support it
The plot and narration of this book are very good, the character creation is also very perfect, and the author's writing is also very smooth. I recommend this book to book friends.
The author puts himself into the protagonist's position and shows the growth process very well.
There is a knife [almost crying], one point will be deducted [angry]
So well written! Come on, author! ! ! Must come on!
This book is very good. Why is it rated so low? This tomato scoring scale is completely confusing. I give it a five-star rating and hope the author will not stop updating it.
Come on, come on, come on
Well written and very interesting
Don't worry, it's an absolutely good book. The author studied at Hogwarts.
Very interesting, looking forward to the follow-up
It's quite good. The second volume is not good. It's better not to write it. Update it quickly 👍🏿
Why did you cut off the root? What are you doing?
The world view of the work itself is excellent enough, and the early pace is slightly fast, but the plot later makes up for this, and the plot is fascinating.
Overall, it looks good, I love reading it, and I'll update it soon!
Holy shit, this is the most exciting thing I've ever seen in another world. I really, really recommend you to watch it. Both the characters and the plot are top-notch.
It's quite good, the content is relatively novel, I prefer the academic-style suggestions to read on, and I hope the author can persist and not give up.
The content and name are similar to that Korean comic [laughing and crying]
I just discovered a treasure book. It is the first time I have seen it narrated in this way. The content is very exciting and it can stimulate the desire to read. Good luck to the author.
It's a pretty good book, but I feel like it's too tactful and makes me feel a bit young. To be honest, novels that use your brain are a rare breed.
Riqing has seen this kind of thing before, but the male protagonist there is a bit useless and funny, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch.
This book is well worth reading, and the pace is slower than other novels. The magic is not so pure, with a bit of realistic physics, it is considered a new genre.
Only personal subjective opinion Main highlights The protagonist explores the world slowly, rather than pushing it head-on. His daily life is very pyrotechnic, and the environment does not feel impetuous. In addition, the plot is plain with twists and turns, and the writing style is relatively good. The writing is generally smooth. Shortcomings The protagonist's personality is slightly flawed, but there is no sign of growth or change. The description of the growth process of the minor characters is good, but a bit draggy. The combat description is insufficient, especially for the protagonist. I know he is very powerful, but I can't tell how strong he is in fighting. I think it is because the protagonist lacks changes in the battle. His personal theory application is not very prominent in the battle. It is a bit like releasing skills. I will describe it later. (You can refer to the battle of the Lord of Mysteries) The plot development is sometimes interspersed with too many meaningless character descriptions, which feels too slow. The author should be improving his writing skills and techniques, but it is still unfamiliar at the moment. Overall it's pretty good, I'd like to encourage you [please give me more updates]
The writing is good, but I really want to complain about whether the tear ducts of these people, including the protagonist, are too developed and they cry at every turn. "A real man can only shed tears after everything is over!"
It feels like the author wants to write a narrative structure similar to that of Lord of Mysteries, linking each character's experience story to the protagonist's growth process. In terms of writing style, it is quite good among new writers. The only shortcoming is that all the stories have a tragic color, which is somewhat unreasonable and will make readers feel a little uncomfortable. After all, the tragic endings of most supporting characters will also bring a lot of negative emotions to readers. Overall, it is a novel that makes people want to continue reading. Come on, author.
Very good. If you've read enough, it's a pretentious novel that slaps the system in the face. And you happen to like novels with somewhat developing characters. Wait a minute and I like the kind about magic. You can come and read this book. It's a worthwhile trip. The premise is that the author can write well.
I have seen Chapter 46. There is a knife, and there seems to be a female protagonist. The protagonist is powerful but not invincible. Then today I saw that the author has published a new book. This one is very suitable to my taste. I hope the author will stick to this book. You should also pay attention to rest [crazy] [punch hard]
I'll give the new book a good review, but does it have a female protagonist?
The author is awesome. Currently reading the second volume. So awesome. An indescribable feeling. 6. As a newcomer, the author shocked me. Alas, forget it, come and see for yourselves. And the author, don't stop updating.
This book is really great, the plot is fascinating, I can't stop reading it, I highly recommend it to everyone!
There is nothing wrong with the book. The author must have read Lord of Mysteries. I always feel that many settings are similar to Lord of Mysteries. I would like to give five stars to support the new author.
I like this style very much
The book is very good, but the power level needs to be clarified quickly [smile]
The writing is pretty good. The first two may be a bit embarrassing, but the latter ones are much better.
Teacher➕Full marks for no system. However, the narrative technique is not perfect and the writing style is slightly poor. It's time for a newcomer to write a new book. Support a wave
The narrative is smooth and the article is very powerful. The story is relatively old but the writing is good and very beautiful.
Very nice and refreshing article [like] [like] [like], support it
The plot and narration of this book are very good, the character creation is also very perfect, and the author's writing is also very smooth. I recommend this book to book friends.
The author puts himself into the protagonist's position and shows the growth process very well.
There is a knife [almost crying], one point will be deducted [angry]
So well written! Come on, author! ! ! Must come on!
This book is very good. Why is it rated so low? This tomato scoring scale is completely confusing. I give it a five-star rating and hope the author will not stop updating it.
Come on, come on, come on
Well written and very interesting Don't worry, it's an absolutely good book. The author studied at Hogwarts.
Very interesting, looking forward to the follow-up
It's quite good. The second volume is not good. It's better not to write it. Update it quickly 👍🏿 Why did you cut off the root? What are you doing?
The world view of the work itself is excellent enough, and the early pace is slightly fast, but the plot later makes up for this, and the plot is fascinating. Overall, it looks good, I love reading it, and I'll update it soon!
Holy shit, this is the most exciting thing I've ever seen in another world. I really, really recommend you to watch it. Both the characters and the plot are top-notch.
It's quite good, the content is relatively novel, I prefer the academic-style suggestions to read on, and I hope the author can persist and not give up.
The content and name are similar to that Korean comic [laughing and crying]
I just discovered a treasure book. It is the first time I have seen it narrated in this way. The content is very exciting and it can stimulate the desire to read. Good luck to the author.
It's a pretty good book, but I feel like it's too tactful and makes me feel a bit young. To be honest, novels that use your brain are a rare breed. Riqing has seen this kind of thing before, but the male protagonist there is a bit useless and funny, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. This book is well worth reading, and the pace is slower than other novels. The magic is not so pure, with a bit of realistic physics, it is considered a new genre.