Tianlong Xiao Feng: Kill the Sweeping Monk with One Palm

It's pretty good, but the gap between him and Qiao Feng, a man who is indomitable in my mind, is too big. It fully demonstrates that if you don't care for yourself, you will be punished by heaven and earth.

Let's make money together and jump into pitfalls together.

The subject matter is very good, I like the outline, forget about the content, two stars for the loan...

The writing technique needs to be improved. Don't read too much into the character's psychology. Don't explain it better than the narrator, otherwise you can only read it in the introduction! A good book does not depend on the number of words, but on the description technique, concise content, twists and turns in the plot, and adding some of your own ideas and plot extensions. It also relies on the multi-faceted operations of characters in different locations that affect the main plot. Appropriate foreshadowing!

I have an idea to awaken Qiao Feng to a world of spatial spiritual treasures and fairy houses. A broken bead bought in the antique street in his previous life turned out to be a fragment of the chaos bead. After Qiao Feng's cultivation reached a certain level, he finally awakened and could absorb internal spiritual energy through the Beiming Divine Technique. It continues to grow and expand, transforming into the innate true energy, allowing Qiao Feng to absorb it, so that Qiao Feng can inhale deeply. When the world accumulates a certain amount of energy, the function of traveling through the heavens can be enabled. It is recommended to travel through the eternal world. After all, there are too few Tomatoes writing about the eternal world.

If you don't have to practice physical skills, what's the use of just having internal strength?

Qiao Feng: My life is like walking on thin ice.

After reading Chapter 126, the plot experience is okay. The author combines some pre-plots from the history of the Song Dynasty and Jin Yong's Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon, and has his own design. At present, I think the only problem is that there are a lot of irrelevant details describing the number of words. For example, the part about shopping and falling in love with Li Qingluo [laughing and crying]

Good-looking is good-looking. I have a question. Li Qingluo and Murong Fu are different generations. They are not on the same timeline. Murong Fu should be only about 10 years old at the current time.

Come on, author, come on, come on

The writing is good, but the main character is not as good as Xiao Feng's legs.

The narrative progresses step by step and the story is fascinating. The psychological description is delicate, and the joy and hatred can be freely expressed!

Seeing this, it is wonderfully layered, the characters are full, the images are full, and it has the style of the master "Jin Yong". 👍

The book "Rebirth of Xiaofeng" gives me a better feeling. If you want to express your gratitude and enmity, kill if you should.

It's a very good book, why is the rating so low?

Very good, a rare good book

It's so good, neither vulgar nor flattering, it comes and goes in a reasonable manner, and it makes people want to stop!

It looks quite new now

Very good, pretty good

Come on, come on, come on!

Very well written

Wonderful, can't stop, good.

The person in front of me is wandering around the world, which is pretty good. I will see the person behind me later.

Yes, it's just that age growth should be accelerated and skipped.

6Those who work hard will succeed.

It's very exciting, but Qiao Feng's protagonist aura is not enough, and the identity and knowledge of the time traveler are not fully utilized.

Well written, Jianghu is all about grudges and grudges, traveling across the world, and the protagonist did it!

The concept is unique, combining martial arts and fantasy very well, extending the martial arts characters and achieving a breakthrough from human to immortal. I look forward to continuing to write.

Good-looking, clear ideas, novel plot! Worth a look

The protagonist has modern thinking, not the Virgin! Worth recommending