Elf******************

It looks good. The writing in the Pokémon novel is passable. The elves also have their own personalities. The characters are quite fleshed out. You fight when you have to. The plot is smooth and smooth. If you can keep writing it, it should be a good Pokémon novel.

It's very well written. It's the best female protagonist elf novel I've seen on Tomato. It's better than the male protagonist novels recommended by many people. The writing is pretty good on Tomato. The plot is smooth. There are no poisonous points at the moment, but there are too few. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a rare Pokémon fan novel with a female protagonist as the main character. Five-star praise. Please support the author. The ideas and imagination of this book are very interesting, but it lacks some emotional turns and character creation and the characterization is a bit flat. Even the first few dozen pictures of Watari, who is a key supporting character, left me with a relatively one-sided impression.

Not bad, it's the first time I've seen the heroine Sandstorm Team

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. The setting of the initial Pokémon is different from other Pokémon fan stories. The plot and characters are also very good. I hope this article will get better and better.

It's good to watch. I'm looking forward to the next plot of slapping the Xi family in the face. Just can you change the scene where you meet Lambda for the first time? The heroine claims that Ali is pretending to be cute, which almost made me abandon the book.

A pretty good Pokémon novel, describing the growth of a Pokémon trainer at the bottom

It looks good~~~~ I'll reward you when I get paid. I must finish updating it! ! ! !

In a fantasy world, I also want to take risks

Big cheers for the author! I'm really like the dodo and the heroine's cp [shy] Please author please update quickly! Please, I can't wait any longer! ! ! ! (Book addiction) (screaming) (crying) (twisting) (crawling) (twitching) (slurred speech) (hissing at the top of his lungs)

It is rare for a female protagonist to have a dark style without CP, and the bloody elements can be ignored. Overall, she is still good-looking.

Looking at the comments I posted, cheers for the author, I hope I can reach the end of the book and not end it in a hurry.

It's not easy! ! Finally found a Pokémon fanfic that I like to read! ! I hope the author will not stop updating, I really like this Pokémon fan book

Personally I think it's very good, but it's a little short, only 100 chapters [crying][crying]

It's super beautiful. As long as the author can update a few more chapters, everyone in the comment area will do anything [love] [love] [love] If you can't see Chapter 88 of "Pokémon: Counterattack from the Bottom" today, Watasi😭😭😭😭

It's a very good Pokémon fanfic, but if the author wants to form a Sandstorm team, it should be more difficult to get Bangela and Happy Egg, or should he just use Big Rock Snake instead? From the current point of view, there is actually no need to get Happy Eggs. After all, there is already Cradle Lily, and with the future Charizard, it should not be a simple Sandstorm Team, and Bangira should not be difficult to get. Is the author considering adding a Boss Cordora? [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's good-looking, really good-looking, not the kind of mindless mythical beast that would be a quasi-god.

Looks good, very satisfied

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good. It would be better if I deleted the part about my biological parents.

It's pretty good. Don't cheat me, author.

The taste is very picky. This book is the only one I have seen the ending. I like it.

The only flaw is that it's too short! ! !

It's beautiful, work hard [you taste it carefully]

Apart from anything else, it looks good [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Two chapters a day is not enough

So pretty

It's okay. To encourage you, give me 5 yuan and 5 stars.

I won't stop updating it just because the data is bad. I don't want that kind of thing [crying]

Very good looking author, cheers