Urban Pokémon after the Century War + Black and White Path Take All + System + No Heroine + Vest
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On the day "Pokémon Legends Z-A" was released, Shi Hua suffered a car accident and accidentally reincarnated into Blue Star two thousand years later with his memories. At this time, Blue Star had just recovered from the last century war. Technology was also developing rapidly. Trainers were no longer the first choice for countries to reserve power...
In such an era where Pokémon and technology go hand in hand,
The Lucheng cultivation genius "Hua" who developed the SS-level energy cube formula?
The extremely popular gorgeous contestant "S Knight"?
"Shadow", a member of the "Secret Door" organization who emerged out of nowhere? "Dark Mei?"...
The devil's envoy who saved China time and time again? Poseidon's envoy? …
Until the Qiou Galaxy came to attack, Shi Hua finally stopped hiding, gave up all his trump cards, and declared to the entire Blue Star that he was...
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The ultimate goal: one Pokémon in each evolutionary chain must be written into the article.
Reader comments
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I personally like the writing. I asked the author if there is a Gardevoir behind it [eating melon] [laughing evilly]
Give me some encouragement [eat melon]
The content is okay, but it's a bit redundant. If you filter it out, it will sound smoother.
Come on, your early writing is pretty good so far.
In fact, it's not bad, but you can give some due consideration to the plot. It's okay if you don't write cool articles, and not everyone must read cool articles. The plot is a bit unclear. If you don't write a cool novel, there is no need to deliberately write some plot points in the cool novel. The black market in front of you clearly knows that the other party has bad intentions and does not avoid it (it feels like this is a conflict in the cool novel type). The overall feeling is that you have not seen it, and you have not seen it, and it is not like a daily novel. It has a little bit of everything. But I still hope that the more I write, the better. In fact, you can keep writing if you like it. There is no need to care about bad comments, it will always get better and better.
I personally like the writing. I asked the author if there is a Gardevoir behind it [eating melon] [laughing evilly] Give me some encouragement [eat melon]
The content is okay, but it's a bit redundant. If you filter it out, it will sound smoother.
Come on, your early writing is pretty good so far.