Time Travel: the Daily Life of a Merchant's Son in the Ancient Imperial Examination

The writing is very good. I love to read comments. I feel that the author really cares about the readers. The author will quickly correct some unreasonable or flawed things raised by readers [laughs], but I also want to tell the author that your writing is really great [like]. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people. Everyone has a different perspective on things in different living conditions. In my opinion, you really write well, with clear organization and reasonable story development, so just stick to your own ideas and write. I believe people will continue to appreciate it. Come on!

It looks good. The male protagonist is a very qualified and wise patriarch of a feudal society. I often forget that he has traveled through time. When the male protagonist was a child, his family was just an ordinary merchant making tofu. There was no family protection in the local area. They were alone, very fragile and helpless. Small, any slightest disturbance can cause the Lin family to be in turmoil, and any force that raises its hand can destroy the Lin family. When the male protagonist realizes the importance of family clan power, he begins to make plans and organize his own family power. Although the male protagonist has many small thoughts. It can be said that he is very scheming, but he also attaches great importance to love and justice, and exchanges sincerity for sincerity, so the friends around the male protagonist will be willing to help him. Of course, sincerity is not enough, but you must have the matching strength and ability to make people see your value. Every time the male protagonist goes, Every step is just right. He is really smart. As a parent, he is really awesome. Think about it hundreds of years later, when you open the Lin family tree, the first page will be all the great achievements of the male protagonist. The Lin family prospered because of him. It is really awesome [Like] [Like] [Like] Looking forward to the follow-up

It's pretty good. The plot is not cliché and the writing is fluent. Each character has his or her own characteristics, but I would like to make a suggestion. The protagonist sometimes says some very modern words that make me a little confused, such as conditioned reflexes and experiments [Thinking] I hope the author can read my article🙏

Everything else is fine, but the content is a bit complicated. It's not like the writing by modern literary authors, but more like the writing by ancient Confucian scholars. It's complicated and troublesome, and it's annoying to read. Low ratings are normal. The author can read other imperial examination papers. I have a follow-up version of it. It has more than 300 chapters and is updated twice a day. I can't get enough of it. The protagonist has no system and does not have a six-yuan grade. Although it is also a bit of a cool article, at least it is comfortable to read. And later on, the father and son thanked each other. This was too polite, right? And the two brothers Lin Yuan. It's true that the protagonists are brothers, but to outsiders they are just servants. After a long time, will there be no problems in their hearts? There is also a younger brother who changed his surname. It seems to be no problem for modern people, but in ancient times, haha? Changing one's surname was a big deal in ancient times. It was a big deal to abandon one's ancestors. It was so easy to just change it at the drop of a hat. In fact, it was all a small problem. If a modern person traveled to ancient times, you wouldn't have the consciousness of being a subordinate. Nor did your parents and teachers. Could it be that they are all modern people? That's outrageous

Halfway through the book, I found that there were many mistakes that readers had marked out, but the author did not correct them, or only changed this paragraph, leaving the same mistakes in the previous and next paragraphs uncorrected. However, the plot of the novel is still good and worth reading.

The novel is great! The structure is clear and the logic is clear and rigorous. The protagonist is well portrayed. He is positive and optimistic, responsible, knows how to advance and retreat, is calm in his work, and can lead his family and friends to make progress together. I really like this kind of protagonist! However, there is a small flaw. Most of the supporting characters are not deep enough and have no memorable points. It also gave me the illusion that without the protagonist, the supporting characters would not be able to live their own lives on their own. But it's also possible that this is the reason why the story is written from the protagonist's point of view. All in all, it's a very good article, worth reading!

In fact, the writing is okay, 8.7, But the novel is relaxing and feels a bit suffocating.

More real and close to life! The male protagonist is not as smart as other time travel stories and has real fingers.

I have read a lot of imperial examination papers, and the biggest difference between this one and other papers is several. 1. The father who married into the family. Most families are perfect families in the secular sense. The author did not describe much about family emotions, just a quick brushstroke. But can you understand the imperial examination essay? For example, I am following a serial imperial examination essay. The author described the male protagonist's emotions towards his family very strongly, as if there is such a family in a parallel world, which makes people feel warm. However, the author of this article has few descriptions of family emotions, so it doesn't matter. After all, imperial examination documents 2. Some things after the imperial examination. Most authors describe the events after the imperial examination and focus on describing the messengers to announce the good news, family members being happy, family members giving rewards, running water mats, etc. But the author of this article has written a lot of content that other authors have not written. For example, scholar clothes need to be purchased specially And the Deer Ming Banquet will be described in more detail. Usually at this time, the male protagonist will become a disciple. Hahahaha, there is also the blind date part, hahaha, it's an old routine. Also, if the male protagonist's sister or sister has a brother, you can marry him (a good man with a better family status) This article does not write such old routines, which is good and good Also, most imperial examination writers rent a yard, but this article actually went to live in a temple. It opened my eyes as a northerner. The writing style has been popular in the south since ancient times. I didn't expect that the imperial examination business (black and white) around the temple has developed so modernly. The wisdom of the ancients cannot be underestimated.

I like this kind of article where everyone makes progress together. There are no three aunts or six wives, and there are not too many filthy parents. It's very interesting, please keep updating. I've added it to my bookshelf. Don't let me forget about it. If you wait too long, you won't have the desire to read it.

The writing is very wonderful, the plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and it makes people forget to leave.

First of all, I personally think that some people will not like the setting of this novel, and some people will find it okay. It's the author's setting that the male protagonist's father is a married man. (It is assumed that there is no man in the Lin family to continue the family relationship, so the male protagonist's father is chosen to marry him. The male protagonist's father has four sons in his family, and the three of them are married and have children. The family is very crowded, and there is little money. The male protagonist's father has been making money outside to support the family. He just happened to like the male protagonist's mother, and he married after many considerations. This article is fictitious, and there is no need to bring in the various restrictions of the dynasty~) This is the author's idea. I personally think it doesn't matter, because this is fictional literature and does not involve any dynasty, so there is no such thing as the descendants of the parents-in-law who cannot participate in the imperial examination (this is what I saw someone commenting below) I personally think that if you are just obsessed with this matter, I actually don't think it is necessary, because the focus of this story is not on this setting, but on the male protagonist's path to the imperial examination. And this setting does not affect the male protagonist. Then there is another drawback: they say that the man wants his younger brother to change his surname to his father's surname. Why doesn't the male protagonist change himself and insists on asking his brother to change? I feel that this shortcoming does not count, because the male protagonist also said something at the time, and the male protagonist's mother also agreed. This was not decided privately. It can be said that the opinions of all parties were obtained, and then I felt that this was also beneficial, so I made this decision. I think it's okay, but if you don't like it, don't enter. In fact, this novel is about time travel, and the plot of Wenzhao Gong is less. And the male protagonist has no golden fingers, and is more hard-working and serious. The most important thing is that in this novel, except for some points where it can be seen that the male protagonist has traveled through time, it is actually not very exaggerated. You can tell at a glance that the male protagonist is a time traveler, and you can tell at a glance that the male protagonist knows a lot of things. (I just don't know how to describe my language) And the author is actually quite rigorous. Many things in it have been checked out, and there are also notes. That is, how did I write the information after checking it? There is even an explanation with the pictures. So I personally think it's pretty good and helpful for understanding. For example, sometimes I look at the card that they play that is similar to Landlords (I forgot the name, it seems to be a leaf card). When I looked at it, I felt it was a bit confusing, but the author wrote an explanation. So I personally think it's better. Finally, the storyline is quite good. But what I am more curious about is whether there is CP? Because I have also read novels similar to this, are there any cp ones? Because I personally have that protagonist aura and preference for the male protagonist, and the male protagonist's unique thoughts, I am very worried about the subsequent female protagonist's thoughts. And I personally feel that if there is a female protagonist, she will more or less hinder the male protagonist to a certain extent. Anyway, the male protagonist will worry about the female protagonist's thoughts. And I also like the kind of non-CP. My personal preference is that the male protagonist is constantly pursuing a career, so I am very curious about the idea of ​​CP, because this will affect my subsequent viewing, and I feel that once there is a female protagonist, there will definitely be several chapters about the love between the male and female protagonists, and what kind of ambiguous and beautiful atmosphere the male protagonist creates for the female protagonist. Then this chapter is an unknown, because if you write too little, I will feel that the heroine has no emotional drama, but if you write too much, I feel... It's just very contradictory, so I hope it's cp-free

I feel that the writing is very good, I followed it all the way, and the progress of the plot is well grasped. I finally managed to catch up with the imperial examination papers for entering the officialdom. I was really looking forward to Lin Xiangan who was killing everyone in the court, but it ended up [crying] [crying]. I look forward to the next wonderful story [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

Without strength and status, you cannot stand out. Otherwise, how can you hold on? My personal thoughts. If you like this kind of article, you can read it...

Not bad, why is the score so low?

Well written and step by step. It feels very close to the background of the times. I like it, I hope there can be more

It looks ok so far, there are some minor flaws, but overall it's ok, you can follow up and keep reading, keep up the good work

I like the character setting of the male protagonist very much. He is generous and broad-minded, and at the same time clear and quick in thinking. He is particularly affectionate with family, friendship, and colleagues. He handles all aspects of relationships. He is smart and wise, and has a big picture. It is a good book. [Like][Like]

So far, it seems to be well written, and the daily plot is comfortable to read. It is a rare imperial examination essay. Family and classmates are all plus points.

Very good, no emotional line, looking forward to the next one

After reading an article before, I have been unable to find a book on the imperial examination that I can read. I feel like reading your article now.

I've read Chapter 182 so far, and overall it's pretty good. I really like the experience of the male protagonist discussing knowledge and making progress together with a group of friends. I admire the male protagonist's perseverance in studying and martial arts. However, there is one thing I want to complain about, and that is the character's micro-expressions and similar renderings. There are too many, which is especially obvious in the last confrontation between the male protagonist and the Wu family. I feel that similar descriptions are okay occasionally, but too much makes it feel weird. It is better to use simple language to describe the protagonist's strategizing and a series of operations, so that readers can experience it on their own and it is easier for people to feel that it is awesome from the bottom of their hearts. For example, the following (maybe I personally value actions more. I think actions are more convincing than words, so I prefer words that do not praise the protagonist so much, but directly show a series of actions of the protagonist, so that readers can marvel at the power of it): Sun Wenshi looked calm and narrowed his eyes slightly. He raised his hand to straighten the cuffs, and gently twisted the wrinkled fabric with his fingers. He moved slowly and slowly, and then slowly spoke: Lin Qiao nodded, his eyes deep. Lin Xiangan sneered, his eyes as sharp as ice blades He whispered instructions in a calm and decisive tone, while quickly scanning the enemy's position. Lin Xiangan's expression was as usual and his eyes were deep.

The author writes very rigorously, and the protagonist's growth is steady and steady, but there are too many various introductions and explanations.

The writing is ok, and I consulted a lot of information, but the information can be placed at the end of the article, not in the middle. People who are interested will read it, but I skipped it.

I saw the updated part. It seems to be well written and the subject matter is very novel.

It is indeed good, but some are incomprehensible. For example, regarding the children, I accepted two children and changed their surnames, but in the end, I separated my children. Only one of the five children in the family was named Wang, which made me feel inferior. It feels like there will be hidden dangers

It's very interesting. The editor is quite strict about the knowledge related to the scientific examination. Please give it a thumbs up.

I just watched it at the beginning, it's pretty good, keep up the good work

It's worth getting into, the plot is clear and logical, although it's a little brainless but reasonable.

The plot is reasonable and the writing style is delicate. It's really good.