A Magical Time Travel

The writing is not bad, but it's very frustrating. It's so frustrating. Damn it. After watching it, my chest feels tight and I can't breathe. How can I be so depressed? It's so frustrating. You must be a ninja, the heroine. Damn, this life is so frustrating. I really feel the feeling of death. Damn, it's so frustrating. Being called a mudblood and not replying but still giving gifts as a token of appreciation. Brother, this is so frustrating. . . There is no lesson at all. It's so frustrating. Damn it, it's frustrating. I'm completely depressed and frustrated. Although it's said that ordinary people are in danger when they enter the magical world, but this is too frustrating.

I cried when I read it [I almost cried]. The writing is really good. The heroine has a distinct personality, and the story is unconventional. In fact, when writing HP fan fiction, it is easy to write the protagonist as a bystander or a tool. The highlight and character arc are all on Tom, but the author is not like this at all. The most impressive thing in the whole story is the heroine Li Yin, who has greatly succeeded in creating a flesh-and-blood character [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The heroine gives people the impression that she is a kind-hearted person who can communicate with others in a casual way. She takes some feelings very seriously, which is a bit inexplicable. A time-traveled person's mother abandoned her in an orphanage. She is actually a stranger to the other person, but the heroine will use money to help the mother of the original body. She will take the initiative to contact the mother of the original body and give her monthly living expenses. He is the hard-tongued and soft-hearted kind. This is also reflected in her interactions with Anna's family. She used her modern snack recipes to help Anna's family live a wealthy and comfortable life. In this way, she obtained the purpose of leaving the orphanage. Their relationship was originally a relationship of mutual use. It can be said that the life of Anna's family is all thanks to the heroine. In fact, the heroine is doing her best and planning for Anna's family. She will also consider the war and take precautions to help Anna make more money. But the heroine finally said that she was a little resentful towards Anna... I still don't quite understand why she wants to bring Anna's family into the magical world. It always feels like she's showing off in a secret way. The heroine is indeed a very kind-hearted person with a changeable personality.

To be honest, it's quite good-looking, and the author's writing can make readers sympathize with the heroine. Some comments say that the entanglement between the heroine and Tom is very stomach-ache. Indeed, most books about Tom's CP have twists and turns in the relationship. This is caused by Tom's setting. As long as the author respects the setting of the original work and the OOC is not serious, the emotional line will be like this. Regarding Li Ke's death, the heroine did not correctly realize the price of Tom, and the heroine's original wish to curse and become immortal before death was also the heroine's helplessness. Her feelings for Tom are too complicated. After all, they have been together for so many years, and there are only more than ten years in life. All those who are nice to the heroine are dead, and everyone around them wants to take advantage of the heroine. Whether it is Anna, Tom or Dumbledore, no one really cares about the heroine. If the heroine is willing to abandon everything and stay away from all anonymity, then it is possible to live a good life. But when I think about it, it's impossible. Tom's madness, the heroine's inability to let go, and the things that she couldn't let go of all the time held the heroine. The heroine is like a grass struggling to stand in a storm. She wants to live without fear of wind and rain but still can't resist the influence of the environment. Just like our real life, the feeling of helplessness and powerlessness [crying]

It's quite good. I hope it won't stop updating. It's been a long time since I found a novel that suits my taste. I won't say much, I must let Lao Fu BE [send my heart]. I don't have any objections to him, I just want to see him cry and shed tears [send my heart] I feel sorry for my little sister, sister, you must go home [crying] Damn it, why did I encounter this short and shallow new pit? I showed off all at once. The protagonist controls readers to read with caution It ended so decisively, I thought I was going to save it, but who knew it ended suddenly. The protagonist described in the early stage is really likable, well-organized, sober and independent, but later it is discovered that the protagonist has jade syndrome, which makes all the aggrieved plots reasonable, so it is over. Now it is not only the protagonist who is aggrieved, the readers are also aggrieved, because this is not about suppressing first and then rising! ! This is where you fall and die! ! The ending is BE, Soft Knife, the retribution given to Lao Fu. The heroine succeeds spiritually, fails materially, and finally feels relieved. Hahaha, that's great. I've been wronged just like Li Ke's family [sad][sad] You say the heroine is selfish, she treats the abuser [Malfoy] lightly, you say she is cold-hearted, she blesses the murderer [Lao Fu] Although immortality is a curse, I can't forgive Lao Fu at all. I just can't stand the way he got what he wanted in the early stage [Punch out][Punch out] I thought the frustrating plot at the beginning was because the heroine was not as knowledgeable as a mentally retarded person, but at the end, hahaha, I was just a pure idiot. To the heroine and Lao Fu: Blessings and locking [love] [love] [love] In general, It's one of the better HP fics I've found recently, but it has a lot of quirks. The head is removed and can be eaten. It's perfect! !

What can I say about this book? It's very complicated. Human nature, interests, emotions. The writing is not that thorough, but if you say you don't understand it, it can only be your own fault. Very subtle yet very realistic. The most cruel point is that Tom revealed the origin of the heroine's mother. Don't you hate the heroine? Impossible! Is there any way? No! Can't beat it! Bear it down! The saddest thing is that we still have to contact each other later, and we still have to be conciliatory. Faced with Malfoy's insults and provocations. What to do? He's a fucking pureblood, let alone a family, and what's even more disgusting is a magical family! Is there any way? No! Ok endure it That's it? ? It's strange to be able to survive without mental illness! ! In the end, why did the heroine give Tom eternal life instead of damning him? I'm also curious. Really, maybe some people think that living forever in a world is the most vicious curse. . . Maybe. But that's really not the case for Tom! ! ! I hope the heroine will have her own strength behind her and become really powerful!

Haha I support the heroine's choice, and I will make that choice even in that situation. The heroine is someone who dares to try and give up boldly. Pursuing something is just a part of life. Getting it is a good thing, but forgetting it if you can't get it. It's okay to die and live again. Death is to leave things you don't want to think about to others, and living is because there is no strong reason for you to die. No matter how you live, you are still alive. As long as things do not become irreversible, you can still live. But without Tom, Li Yin, who married Li Ke, would be very happy.

The writing is very realistic. The author was not very good to the heroine. He gave her some things and then took them all away. What remains unchanged is sadness and helplessness. The only thing she can do is to stick to herself. There are too few moments that can make the heroine laugh. I hope that the follow-up can make the heroine happier, have a friend or a group of friends, find a career that she loves, and be less intrigued. Hard to comment... I felt a little bit empty after watching it.

Wonderful, wonderful. The article seemed short but fascinating. I kept reading. Whether it was the characters, the plot, the rhythm, or the final ending, it made me feel at ease. The author handles the details very well, and the writing is smooth, short and concise. I like the heroine here, and I also approve of the author's various treatments. It deserves a good review! This is probably the Tom in my heart, leaving a suspense to see whether his soul will rot in eternity. I still hope the author will make a distant sequel to this conclusion.

I watched the latest update in one go. It's very interesting and not cliché. I don't know where the plot is going. Both the male and female protagonists have serious psychological problems, one is more "cold" than the other, but the female protagonist is obviously more painful because she still has a conscience. The author of blind guessing will not let Tom get his wish. He has immortality, but he will never get love, right? Well, that's what I expected. I feel sorry for Li Ke, just like I feel sorry for Cedric in the original novel. The knife really hit me. Woohoo. . . . .

The author's writing style is very good, the heroine's character is very three-dimensional, and the people around her are also very warm. Anna is a gentle, lively and lovely person. Although she also has some selfish motives of her own, it is very real! She is really a good person; Li Ke, a gentle and sunny boy, unfortunately it ended before it even started. In this article, it is a regret and a regretful beauty; Tom, he really never looks back until he hits the wall. Although the heroine has caused some changes to him, he is still who he is; the heroine always knows what she wants. Some of her thoughts and the author's expressions, It makes me feel some resonance... (There is still a lot to say. After reading it so far, I think it is an excellent novel. The characters are three-dimensional, the characters and the environment are harmonious, and the author's expression makes people feel complete and comfortable. Of course, there will be tears in some places. Although I don't like reading sadistic stories, his expressions made me unable to help but read [cry])

It's very interesting. This book is different from all the HP fanfics I've read. It's very novel. The heroine has neither extremely high magical talent nor a superior family background, nor does she have a charming appearance. She has her own unique personality charm, the character is very vivid, and she has a clear understanding of herself. She is very beautiful and I like it. (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ

Wow, the author's brain is so wide open. It's so powerful. I'm completely attracted to it. Please update it quickly. I never imagined a story like this, a completely different direction. The heroine is so handsome, has a clear goal in life, and knows what she wants. He lived at the same time as Voldemort and was two years older than Snape. If you want to know what Voldemort will be like after immortality, take a look here. It's really wonderful! Hope Lily is alive!

Author, although your book is very interesting, the ending is too sad for me, so dropping one star is an affirmation of your cruelty [love] [love] [love] [love] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh]

It's very common, but there is a kind of heroine who is forced to stay here, like a jellyfish that is hung in the air but someone sprays water on it to keep it alive (?), Restrained and half-dead.

Why doesn't it count as he? What a good he. The two protagonists have a crush on each other, a redemption-oriented kind. Although they haven't seen each other for many years, I believe they will meet in the end. Li Yin x Li Ke

Looks good... The heroine's name seems to have a profound meaning too? Yin, the ancient traditional timekeeping method, from three o'clock to five o'clock... Are there any small details? Looking forward to reply! !

It's just that Li Ke has hundreds of millions of opinions and it's hard to get over them.

The whole book is very good, but it is not the kind of beautiful and complex book that I like. It feels so choked that I can't even put it into words. The author's writing is quite good. I jumped back and forth between giving up and not giving up, but I finally finished reading it. (Purely personal feelings, I have a strong personal preference for reference only)

It's really well written. If you can only bring the perspective of the heroine when reading the full text, it will be a good read. This book is logically self-consistent and has a compact plot. It pays more attention to the protagonist's own feelings than following the original plot step by step. The heroine is more concerned about her own feelings than following the plot, and is a very self-consistent person.

Very good, the writing is not childish

It's such a pity for Li Ke, at least let them love each other for a few more years [crying]

I'm infatuated with you... The author... It's so beautiful... Highly recommended... Get it now! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's pretty good, at least it makes me interested in reading it.

It's a very comfortable fanfic. The heroine has her own trajectory and is great at focusing on her own thing. A book that I didn't feel wasted my time after reading it [Like] Follow up

The writing is smooth and not stiff, and the characters' perspectives are reasonable. Ah, both endings are possible. But I still prefer the second one. Time really heals everything. Those who can't let go will be drowned in the long river of time. Greedy, greedy [love] is over, and the flowers are scattered.

Good looking. Awesome, come on!

Come and see them all! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Nice looking, very unique idea

Looks great, looking forward to the follow-up.