Star Vault: Bu Li Is a Good Guy, but Starts by Enslaving Fei Xiao

Seeing Feixiao: Gua! This is the single female protagonist I want! See Yue Yu: If it were two heroines, there would be no need to take a knife. See Kageryu: The great sea star returns to his heartfelt empire with his three heroines (bushi.) ------From the crumbs of Starfish, no matter how the heroine plans to write it

The logic is passable, the information is well aligned, the characters are successfully created, the plot arrangement is reasonable and detailed, and the pacing is okay. So I gave it four stars. The one star difference is because I feel like something is missing... Just one suggestion: I hope the emotional line can be strengthened. I was originally looking forward to Yue Yu or Fei Xiao's emotional line, but it seems that the protagonist has no such idea. The following is only my personal opinion and the author may refer to it as appropriate. Putting aside the emotional line, Bai Ye's ability is enough to change the direction of the Third People's War of Harvest. It is inevitably inconsistent with the plot in the game, or the author is ingenious and has other whims, so this chain can be ignored. In short, the main thing I want to express is that I hope to emphasize the emotional line. After all, in addition to fighting scenes, I also like emotional scenes. I hope the author can adopt it. Thank you for your patience in reading [Love]

I really enjoyed reading this book. There is no pretense of deliberately concealing one's identity, there is no inexplicable pulling, everyone's IQ is online, and what's rare is that the protagonist is a charismatic person, not a rare precious thing in heaven and earth that has no results and is separated from the golden thread.

Very nice! The character creation makes me want to draw cards 😭 Killing for the sake of mutual survival. I happened to watch Luo Xiaohei's War Notes 2 in the past two days, which contains anti-war stories. I was thinking about it myself, and later I discovered that peace requires the maintenance of evenly matched forces, and that it is necessary to become a particularly strong person and stabilize the balance of peace with one's own strength. As long as there is anyone who tries to break it, just kill it and let the balance be balanced.

This is definitely the best fanfic I've read so far. 1: The author does not simply write about game-related plots, but writes a lot of content himself. It looks very fresh, and there is no feeling that you will know what will follow after reading the previous text. 2: The character creation is also very good. The image of each character is well created and the words are not repeated. One or two words are not used repeatedly. 3: I think the most important thing is that this book can really convey emotions very well. It can convey good emotions to you, and it can really make some people who have the same experience empathize and empathize. (It's just my personal opinion. Please forgive me if there are any discrepancies. Finally, I'd like to add: Don't criticize if you don't like it, please be merciful)

It looks good, but I feel that Bu Liren is the heroine, and Feixiao is more like a part of the play between the male protagonist and Bu Liren [laughs]

It's nice to look at, but there's a knife in the front, but luckily it's revived. I really feel for the protagonist. In addition, I would like to ask the author whether it is a single girl or a harem, or if there is no girl, it is only ambiguous. If there is no girl, it is only ambiguous. It should not be the case. It doesn't look like the development. As for single girls, I saw a few girls liking the main character (although I'm not sure yet), and it didn't feel like a harem. To be honest, I really like Fei Xiao, both in the past and in person. (I especially like the beast mother [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly])

As it should be Okay, I reflect on it. I misunderstood it when I first saw the title. I realized it after reading the introduction. The protagonist saves people, the protagonist is good Hu Lei infects the protagonist, Hu Lei is bad Ahem, this is a serious book worth reading. Although I'm not sure if it's a single or no heroine, it's definitely not too many. It's a double hit, but it's unlikely. Why are they in pairs? I remember there used to be a single female lead label

Very interesting, a good piece of fan fiction. Originally, I didn't like to read fanfics, because I felt that any author would intentionally or unintentionally add his or her own thoughts and expectations to the character image and main story when writing fanfics, which would make the characters and stories have the author's own color, and even lead to a far cry from the settings in the original work, which would easily arouse the resentment and disapproval of someone like me who is a fan of the original work (a gaming fan). However, this book selects stories that happened before the main storyline of the game, and the character descriptions are very close to the original work, and the emotional progression is also good. It is a very worth reading fanfic. I hope the author can stick to it!

After reading most of it, I realized that I had also read the author's previous book, but it felt a bit familiar when I was reading it. I really like the author's writing style [Sending Hearts]

It's very interesting. I want to watch General Fei Xiao's love story.

The emotional line is very well written and has the same taste as before. The author's writing style is also good, but it's a bit draggy, but compared to the quality of the article, it's still tolerable.

In terms of plot, the long-term narrative is constantly interjected to enrich the protagonist's personality, and the main character has no OOC. It is in line with the intuition of a player (reader) who wants to know more about the plot of Star Iron - this is how this thing should develop.

The content is very novel. Super nice, recommended. Fei Xiao was quite cute when he was a child, even though he was just making history

Tomatoes' Many Fertility Orders is one of the best books to read. It would be a huge loss not to read it.

The writing style of these pictures is quite good, and the writing is okay. Why are the ratings so low? It must be a tomato problem!

So far, it looks good. I wonder if there will be more single female protagonists. If there are more, I will take emergency measures.

I hope to see the two female protagonists, Yue Yu is indeed worth it

The structure is clear, the content is substantial, the characters and plots are well described, but the update is a bit comical, and it is worth appreciating [Like][Like][Like]

Guangzhui: "The Moon Sets on the Red Sun", "Only the Sound of the Wind", "The Last Deception". Good looking Not enough stamina, a bit boring

Can the author of the code be faster? [Smile] The emotional foreshadowing is very good, and the plot is also touching. Can the author of Code Gobi not be confused and be faster?

The writing is good, the pace is also good, the content of the novel is basically independent, and the data evaluation is very high. Except for the emotional line, there are no big problems. I have been following it, but why did it stop updating? [Cry]

It's very good-looking, but all the CPs in the book are a little strange [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker] and it's full of fun, and it's also very friendly to fun people.

It's so good. It's my first time to post a book review. It's really good. I love it. The character creation is very detailed. Highly recommended! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I feel that this is a very good one among Feixiao Tongwen. I personally recommend it.

It looks good, and the style of writing suits my taste very well.

It's a very good book. The character descriptions are very good. There is basically no OOC in the character (mainly General Yue Yu, I don't know what her character is). The only shortcoming is that there are too few chapters, which makes me scratch my head and scratch my head.

I haven't read a lot so far. From what I've seen so far, it's good. It's considered a masterpiece among fans, but I don't have any expectations for the rest of it, and I don't think the author can write it well. Cheng Lingshi has a bit of an invincible style. Is the rest of the story just about killing Bu Liren, reuniting, and then having a sweet harem? Anyway, I can't imagine what I can write in the rest. The protagonist can be seen to be invincible after resurrecting the monster, but it's too fast (-ι_-) I really can't continue writing, so I'll stop [face covering]

The writing is very good! ! ! ! Open a new track! ! Can only say one word! Women look! ! ! ! ! (Highly recommended!) Give it a thumbs up!

Nice, the writing is very good, and it really has that sense of mission to live for the common people. More, you bastard