Holy Land Daozi at the Beginning, You Want Me to Follow the Waste Material Flow?

Close to a masterpiece. The plot is logically advanced, the language is humorous, both the protagonist and villain have online IQs, and the dialogues often reveal unexpected wisdom. The author should be a senior pen writer in the company, and his writing skills are very good. I have read 81 chapters so far and can rate it at 9.6. The current score of 7.6 Is a serious underestimate, and it also shows that the tomato sunspots have no lower limit! It collapsed at Chapter 86. The dignified Jindan Zhenren was described as a minion. The disciple who was known as the First Holy Land actually did not have the magic to restrain evil spirits and needed to grit his teeth and call for help. This is an imaginary thought. . . The author is afraid and does not understand what "cultivation" is. Those disciples of the Demon Sect in the Qi training period each have a ghost flag, but when it comes to the foundation flag, there are hundreds of thousands of ghosts, and the souls of top masters must be collected to be effective. You, the wife of the city lord, turned into a ghost, can cause harm to the real person Jin Dan, and even risk your life? This is an acquired skill. Maoshan Taoist priests like Uncle Ying can do a beautiful job. Can you kill Jin Dan? I'm afraid it will make us laugh to death! I thought I could write a masterpiece, but this really messed me up. This idea is worth 8.2 Points at most. It's so ignorant and narrow-minded.

A very good book, very well written. It is much better than those monks who cultivate immortality. Why do people cultivate immortality? In addition to immortality and power, the biggest reason is not to give up the world of mortals. I repeatedly look for opportunities to retreat and practice throughout my life. Finding opportunities to practice until I reach the peak is of no use.

It's a very interesting book about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and the male protagonist and other characters are also intelligent, unlike many Tomato books which are full of cuties. The male protagonist is a holy son. Although he hides his identity, he is not aggrieved. If a villain comes out to make a show of his face, he will find an opportunity to kill him quickly. When it's time to make use of your own background, you make use of it decisively, and it's a pleasure to watch. Even with my critical eye, most books on the bookshelf contain a lot of logical loopholes, but I have hardly found any logical loopholes in this book until now. Overall evaluation: Very nice

To be honest, it's really okay to put it on Tomato, the writing is smooth and the writing is smooth. Before the protagonist dealt with the seven-star grass, the logic and plot were very good. You can just subscribe at 7 o'clock. After the protagonist dealt with the seven-star grass, the plot was quite funny, but the logic was not good and it was a bit nonsense. Still worth a look though.

4.5🌟 The first 150 or so chapters (before the Demon Sect) are very fun, with interesting system settings, alternative pretense and slaps in the face, and various funny characters (all kinds of crouching dragons and phoenixes, hahaha) and the nonsensical events that happened because of the strange counterattack system mission are very interesting. After the Demon Sect chapter, it became a little weak. The IQs of the supporting characters generally began to decline. The nonsensical tasks were not as interesting as before. There were too many female characters (too scumbags). But overall it's still interesting Advantages: Funny and easy, really pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, there are many beautiful girls Disadvantages: There are too many female vase cultivators, the IQ of the Demon Sect disciples is worrying, and the protagonist has become a ruthless mission machine

Okay, okay, I read it and got the most likes. So far, Chapter 57 is not as bad as the comment said. Not to mention how smart all the characters are, at least they are not brainless. The comments can only be used as a reference. You still have to read it yourself to know whether it suits your taste [exploration][exploration][exploration] I can't stand it anymore. Is the protagonist going to act for the rest of his life? A real heir of the stinky Demon Sect has stolen the Holy Son's token from another holy land. A third-rate sect who joins in on a mission behind the protagonist wants this and that. Whatever he can't give, he'll do whatever he wants. There are a few pictures, he is playing a female channel, he has to prove his identity, put aside the debate, he insists on proving that he is fake, he has the highest combat power in the audience, and he also supports the protagonist and only listens to the protagonist. If you want me to take it first, the little Kalami makes me feel uncomfortable listening to the book in the middle of the night.

The protagonist of this book is both black and white. [Chigua] can be regarded as a funny article about cultivating immortals. The system is based on traditional cultivation of immortals. The protagonist feels like a charitable version of the Great Love Immortal! The moral bottom line of the protagonist needs to be improved, it is recommended to watch [laughter]

Very nice There are no logical loopholes. Although he conceals his identity and pretends to be a pig, he does not ignore or lose his original identity. When encountering difficulties, he does not simply use the golden finger to pass the level. When he needs to use resources, he also uses his brain. The characters are quite clever and have a bit of humor, but they are not forced to be funny, nor do they pretend to be "deep" or "brainy", nor are they "ruthless". They are really one of the few normal protagonists. I think the characters stand up. The writing style is crisp and clear, without elementary school-like narration or voice-over or verbose "foreshadowing". I don't understand why I gave such a low score. I really don't like many of the nine-point ones. However, the update speed is indeed a bit slow. No matter how new the book is, it should be updated at least three times a day.

It's good to read. I've seen it on the recommendation list a few times, but I wasn't interested because of the name. There are too many of this genre, and the routines are too old, which makes it boring. Then one time I finished listening to the book and it automatically switched to this one for me. I found it to be really good. The shortcoming is that it's not a new book, and the plot is not particularly cliche. The writing is quite interesting, and I highly recommend it.

I caught up to chapter 380 in one go and started to update. The plot is very interesting, it doesn't fall into clichés, and it doesn't have the experience of bitterness and hatred. It can be regarded as a kind of refreshing novel. The plot is very compact, and there are no secret realms, caves, martial arts competitions, etc. There are hundreds of chapters of this kind of rubbish. IQ is online, at least there is no plot where you look at me, I look at you and then get into a fight, there is no plot about being hunted down at the auction, and there is no plot about cerebral palsy where the young one gets old. There is a harem, not like Long Aotian, the kind where a bunch of nymphos eat Tang Monk's flesh. It was only after the two parties exchanged interests and emotional values that they came together. For me, there are no big betting points at the moment. There are some small flaws, but the flaws are not covered up. Nice!

This book is really good. In my opinion, the 8.9 Rating is far from the true level of this book. In other words, this book is seriously underestimated. This author's creative style is actually very unique, making some clichéd plots (including slaps in the face, etc.) Vivid, refreshing, and ever-lasting fun. The reason for this "feature" is inseparable from the author's level and ingenuity: On the one hand, let's talk about the author's "excellent style" of very few words. By intentionally omitting unnecessary plots (capturing Team Leader Shen through blood magic) and narrative (rarely writing about things like character panels), the coherence and immersion of the article are ensured. This is not an easy task. We know that accurate and pure expression is a writer's ability, but it may not be so applicable to online articles. Few authors are willing to sacrifice the number of words in exchange for a false and ethereal "immersion", but he @ is different. Although he updates very slowly, I still hope that he can maintain his current level and become bigger and stronger! (Damn author, although I can understand it, this is not the reason for your slow update!) On the other hand, the author never copied existing formulas mechanically, but instead worked hard on performance. If you read carefully, you will find that the focus of this book's perspective is very interesting. According to his unique creative ideas, the author cleverly switches the omniscient perspective (including those explicit foreshadowings) and the limited knowledge perspective to make people's eyes shine. The development of many plots actually far exceeded my expectations as a reader who has read many books. But if you think about it carefully, the author has actually given hints a long time ago, which is very ingenious. After saying so much, it seems that he didn't explain why. But this is actually a kind of magic in itself. In this materialistic year, there is very little time for quiet reflection. Maybe we don't have time to carefully appreciate the connotation of an online article, or maybe the advantages I wrote are meaningless in themselves. However, I believe that there is always some inexplicable content in this book that will arouse your initial enthusiasm and passion.

It is refreshing but not brainless, the story is light-hearted and humorous, and the writing is really good. Most readers should like this book. I also hope that this book will be favored by more readers, and that the author can get good remuneration. The only thing I hope is that it doesn't collapse later! ! ! Don't collapse! ! ! Don't collapse! ! ! Say important things three times [laughing and crying]

It's good to watch, the plot doesn't drag out, and although there are various stitching sensations, it doesn't go against the grain. At first I thought it was similar to "Counterattack System Only in the Mahayana Period", but I didn't expect that the author wrote it in his own style. A rare masterpiece.

Heard Chapter 216. A novel about systematic cultivation of immortality. The background of the story is a very traditional world of cultivating immortals, the plot is relatively coherent, and the characters currently appearing are relatively normal. What is very interesting is that the setting of the system binding the wrong person provides a lot of interest to the story and is also the key to promoting the storyline. The traditional fantasy style is very strong, and the system appears less frequently in the later chapters, which is not quite like the style of a system novel. There is also the feeling that the harem was opened too quickly. Will there be hundreds or thousands of harems by the end of the novel? Overall this is a novel with great potential. Give me a five-star encouragement first, and then add comments after seeing what happens next. Come on, author! Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

I watched The Bold Party last month and I found it sometimes heartwarming and sometimes joyful, which is good. Later, someone recommended me to watch a so-called funny old show, Blue Sea. After watching the first two episodes, I couldn't laugh at all. Several characters just giggled and put on a show when they were put together. I felt it was boring and rubbish. A few days ago, my colleagues and I went to watch Donnie Yen's Misjudged, and I was quite moved. It was good. And today, this novel made me very happy and laughed, which is not bad. I find that as long as a work can arouse any emotion in me, be it excitement, touching, sadness, happiness, or sweetness, I quite like it.

I like this novel, it's quite funny, and it's not such a boring exercise

What a fairy tale! ! ! It's so well written! The plot line is seamless, the language is witty, the rhythm is exciting, and the characters are also very full! Read it in one sitting! The author of Qiuqiu hurry up and update! ! !

The plot is lighthearted and funny, and the writing is good. What impressed me most was the Mahayana ancestor fighting on a treadmill [covering his face] [covering his face]. Of course, there are also shortcomings, that is, the plot is not attractive enough, and it does not feel like you have to read it even if you forget to eat and sleep. However, compared with other high-scoring books, it is already very good, and giving it 5 stars is not excessive.

Overall, it's pretty good. The reversal plot and counter-routine are very exciting. Among the piles of routines in this novel, this one is fresh and refined, and it's not a pile of bad jokes. It can be seen that the plot is indeed well polished. Especially regarding the relationship between Qi Yuan and Yuan Wu, I personally think this description is very exciting. Although others are not very satisfied with it, I feel that the previous foreshadowing has just been withdrawn. This is a very exciting point. Although, I personally don't like reading harem novels very much. That's because I used to read harem novels until the end, and many of the harems in the front were forgotten. However, this novel is different. Even when I write to the ending, the harem in the front is not forgotten. It can be said that the protagonist is indeed a person who values ​​love, and is much better than the stallion protagonists in other harem novels. Just looking at the character settings, I feel that each character has flesh and blood, and the contrast between the main character Daozi and the Holy Son, as well as the Evil Alchemy God, etc., Are all very well written. As for the combat power system, I actually didn't feel it collapsed much later on. If the ending wasn't so sloppy, I feel the score could have been higher. However, the author's disadvantage is that the ending is too sloppy. I don't know why. The various foreshadowings are pulled back too tightly. The ending is difficult to understand and the rhythm is a bit unfinished. Although the happy ending is also very good, I feel that the plot could be richer. Maybe the author has some hidden agenda, so he ended it hastily, or maybe he was tired of writing. And to be honest, some of the foreshadowings were not taken back particularly well, but maybe the ending was too tight and sloppy, which caused the originally laid foreshadowing to not follow the normal plot, so it seems that the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. So I still think that if the ending is not tied here, but can be extended, this book may be better. (Representing only personal opinions, please do not criticize) This is the fourth book I have read on Tomato

Latecomers stop, the number of comments does not match up! This book is a masterpiece of fantasy classics! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The canon within the canon is the document in the book! [Cover face] Those who come here should think twice! Don't read novels in a hurry!

It's pretty good. The writing is humorous and funny, and it's not deliberate, such as letting the spirit carry the protagonist to pass the test, such as being the first in the outer sect. The author's writing is very strong, and his IQ should be relatively high. If he keeps it up, he has the potential to become popular, but there are a few updates.

An excellent book. It feels a bit like when I first read the Mahayana system. It is a fine free article. It is not a novice and the writing is interesting. However, it was criticized very badly because of a joke about respecting women. My score should be above 9.5, But 8.9 Is really a bit low. Forget it, I can accept death from poison, and one person can play two roles, but I can't accept having an external incarnation. .

Yes, a novel that allows people to read more than 700 chapters and is so interesting deserves five stars. As long as you read the introduction and title of the real book and find it interesting and the subject matter you want to read, then you can definitely start reading it with confidence. Everyone is busy in life and reading it is relaxing. And this book is funny from beginning to end. The overall plot design and the cultivation part of the plot are good. It is funny but also has logic and foreshadowing. It will definitely not let you down. The only flaw is that after reading more than 450 chapters, there are a dozen or so chapters where the plot is overly mediocre and can be skipped. Everything else is good, I will leave a review after reading it. After reading the review, I commented: It is a refreshing novel, with a happy ending, all the foreshadowing is recycled, and it is an excellent work on the system of cultivating immortals. However, the ending is a little rushed, and the storyline is well designed. There are no repetitive plots in the main plot after more than a thousand chapters. The whole chore is quite interesting, and the overall shortcomings are not concealed. It can be rated as a good work of 9.5 Points. It is better than many books on the market where the comment section is full of fans of the human machine/author and the 9.6 Rating is artificially high. After eight or nine hundred chapters, you can clearly feel that the progress of the drama is accelerating and the pace is getting faster. The fairyland part of the plot that I thought could be unfolded slowly and laid out well and then written for hundreds or thousands of chapters was compressed to one or two hundred chapters and completed quickly. During the completion process, all the foreshadowings and "paradoxes" laid earlier were recovered and reasonable explanations were given. It was not hasty but also a little hasty. It would be better if more chapters could be expanded in the fairy world in the later period, and the rhythm of the previous and later plots would be consistent. However, most people who read Tomato usually give up after reading a few hundred chapters and don't reach the end. This book is completely enough [laughing and crying]

Okay, okay, this book is quite good to read, but I don't know why the rating is so low. If you make a blind guess, you may think it is a harem novel, with all kinds of girls given away, but the author has written many girls, so there is no need to say anything else.

The author writes so carefully and the plot is so good. Why is it only rated 8.9? The score is simply lowered by malicious ratings. This book is one of the few good books I have read. The plot arrangement is very reasonable, unlike most books nowadays that follow a pattern. It's funny, has multiple female protagonists, lots of interesting stories, and the plot is smooth without any unreasonable parts. I hope the author will write better and better in the future, and please update more frequently!

The author's writing style is really great! Every sentence is like a carefully crafted work of art, which makes people feel like spring breeze when reading it. Your articles are not only logically clear, but also emotionally sincere, which can always touch people's hearts. It's so awesome! ! !

I saw the update, overall it's okay. After enduring the strong poison at the beginning and reading the rest, I felt that the writing was well-written. Better than the first book, I actually want to give it three stars because the beginning is really poisonous. How did you come up with this sentence that there are men in the world who respect women so much? It's extremely poisonous, please change it a little bit, bro.

The rating is still low. With such an awesome main and supporting character setting, coupled with the writing style of a master, I give it a score of 9.5. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I'll give it four stars. It has a lot of poisonous points. I can't stand it even if I don't watch it much. It doesn't kill decisively, and there is no justice. It's funny, but in fact it's still the same kind of trick that has no limit, but it's a good read for a newbie.

Among the more interesting fairy tales, the beet system of kidnapping the wrong person is the most novel part, and of course it may also be the biggest poisonous point. In addition, although the setting of the protagonist, a righteous genius, changes his vest to join the evil ways, it cannot be said to be very new, but it is indeed an interesting and interesting aspect. Perhaps it is mainly due to the contrast between the protagonist? And the heroines of this article... I feel like it's already turning into a stallion article () Recommended for those who like watching contrasts, fantasy, and stallions. If you are short of books, you can read them to relieve your boredom.