Naruto: a Lottery Every Three Years? Then I'm Invincible

"Final Remarks" I'm sorry that I have no way to continue writing this novel. After all, this is just an experimental novel, and the purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! (You can uncollect this book, I have no complaints)

You can add the power of Tom's rules [smile], it won't fall apart even if cut into slices

The author's writing is quite good. It's not as boring as other fan fictions. Maybe it's because I haven't watched all the anime or I forgot most of the reasons and I don't feel the timeline problem [facepalm]. Overall, it ranks first among the Naruto fan fictions I've read. Come on.

I feel that the author's time and logic are very good. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. The author doesn't stress about combat effectiveness. The balance between golden fingers and combat effectiveness is very good. Keep up the good work [sending my heart][laugh][laugh]

This book is really beautiful, and the author's imagination is really great. Not only is the story happy and happy, but it has a single heroine, and the heroine is Tsunade. Moreover, the character setting has not changed, and it is very consistent with the original setting. It is like reading the original work. The daily story is very warm, and the male protagonist's death is not too abrupt. After all, it has been three years. It was only once that it was very comfortable to watch, and the viewer felt warm in their heart. It was neither brainless nor invincible. It made up for all the regrets in the original work. Except that the author often likes to use some long and difficult sentences, there are no grammatical errors. It is really good here. I think 9.3 To 9.5 Is no problem, but this review I really suspect that someone has done it maliciously, and many settings from the world are used in it, including the Thousand Blades of the Demon Sword, and many settings from Under One Person, including Breath of the Sun. It's really fun to watch. The author has to work hard. If you continue to write Naruto fan fiction, you are very likely to Become the second tornado, because it is obvious that this is the subject you are best at. Come on, come on. I have read more than 100 chapters now. This is a rare Naruto fan novel that I can read and even want to finish. It is also the first time for me to write such a long review on Tomato. It is really good! [Top post] The plot got a little boring in the middle of the story. The male protagonist was too invincible, and the emotional drama was really hard to describe in one sentence. It was obvious that the author wanted to write a story about group elephants, but it was too everyday. .

It looks good and has logic. The protagonist is not truly invincible but still needs to practice. The Pokémon are also integrated well. I hope to add more Pokémon battle scenes to give the local psychic beasts a little shock.

This book shouldn't be rated so low. I've watched the Naruto series to death. Overall, it's pretty well written. The rating is probably around 8.9. Whether it can break through 9.0 Depends on whether there are novel plots in the future.

The writing style is good, but the way I like to write long sentences can be changed appropriately. One sentence can be twenty or thirty words long to express two meanings. Try dividing it into two short sentences. This is just a personal preference of mine. The author can refer to it appropriately.

It's rich in content, but this is the first time I've heard that it's for children. Mature time travelers are childish again, but overall it's harmless, and the logic is as thoughtful as possible.

The reason why I read fan fiction is because I want to see the future changed by the protagonist in the book, so I like this book. Please look rationally at the future of the characters who differentiate between original anime, comics and fan fiction. When we read fan fiction, don't we just want to see the original plot change and the original regrets disappear?

A very good Naruto story, and the middle and later stages are handled very well. The poisonous points are almost not considered a masterpiece [eating melon] [like] If you don't like Pokémon, I suggest you don't read. The pace of this book is too fast. It would be several times faster if you have Pokémon.

It's pretty, interesting, and novel, but not many people watch it.

It still looks good, and the emotional line doesn't feel abrupt. There was a comment earlier that the age difference was too big, but it actually looks fine and the logic is okay. It would look better if Danzo was killed directly, but it's okay, it's in line with the plan

Personally, I think this book is good and worth reading. Don't use the original work to criticize. After all, fandom is equivalent to a parallel world [laughter]

The top quality of Naruto's novels can be regarded as top quality among the fan fictions that Tomato generally needs to throw away his brain to read.

Other aspects are very good, that is, in terms of age, although Naruto chased Sakura in school, Itachi killed his clan at the age of 13. The setting of this book is about 13 years apart. Nine years old and 22 years old are really different. And chasing and confirming feelings are two different things, right? Personally, I feel that the protagonist will be more accepting when he is fourteen or fifteen years old.

I understand. I read Naruto again after two years and found that the quality is much higher now than before.

Fine. The only problem is that the relationship progresses too quickly and is a bit awkward. Is it really okay for Tsunade, who is in her 20s, to fall in love with the 9-year-old protagonist? Even if I wait a few more years, it will feel better. But this is the main line of the author's setting, and there will be no other problems if you accept it.

It's very well written. The author greatly appreciates it. I give it five stars to Daniel Wu. The writing is very detailed, and the ability insertion is also perfect. When will Pokémon get a mythical beast? If you want to watch Rayquaza, the best one is black.

It looks really good, and its capabilities are also very good. It would be nice if the update could be faster [smiles]

It's pretty good, especially the single heroine is Tsunade [adoration][adoration][adoration]

After reading Chapter 222, I can tell you that everything else is okay with Obito. There is no other poisonous point. There is no scene directly behind Danzo. It is Obito's big poisonous point. I will change the rating after reading it.

I followed it from beginning to end in one go. The author's writing is very good. The characters' motivations, logic and growth arcs are very complete. The author has truly integrated his own thoughts and passion into it. I hope he can keep writing.

Black Zetsu and all Otsutsuki (except Uraji) have been greatly strengthened. Also, the previous content from World War II to the Five Shadows Conference was a bit too long before the content focusing on Pokémon came out. By the way, Nazusa is not born yet [facepalm]. Overall, you can take a look.

It's very interesting to read, and the author's mentality and attitude are also very good, but sometimes there are missing words or typos.

This fanfic is recommended for those who like slow and reasonable things and like a single female protagonist? I am re-reading an old book. If you are new and looking for fun and brainless, you should not read it. I have read more than 120 books and I really can't stand the slow pace. With Slowly, you can't kill the enemy and draw out various rhythms that are too slow. However, if you get tired of reading mindless cool articles, you can come back and read dozens of them. I hope the author can integrate into Fang Jie's collective as soon as possible. It doesn't matter if he writes about dance with cool articles.

I think if this is the author's first book, the writing is very good, the content is interesting and innovative, and he also knows a lot about Naruto. Of course, there are some differences from the original work, but it doesn't matter. There are just some sentences that are not fluent. It may be because it is the first time to write a novel, and the writing style is a bit green.

Not bad. The description of the relationship between men and women is not obscene. The last book I read was about a mindless harem and it was disgusting. This place is much more refreshing and comfortable.

Yes, this book is okay. It is rare that it is not a brainless Naruto story, and it does not mess with the harem. It is worthy of a big award, and the characters are rich. All the people who should be redeemed have survived reasonably, and the setting of Pokémon is also superb. It is indeed invincible later on, but it is not done for the sake of the plot. Regardless of this or that, it reasonably improves the strength of all companions and creates its own world, which is beautiful. Recommend.

This is the best Naruto fanfic I've seen on Tomato. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .