Travel Through Duan Yu and Practice All the Way to Become an Immortal

The writing is quite good, and it follows the rhythm of the original novel. Compared with other time-traveling martial arts classics, it has nothing to do with the original novel. Why are you traveling through the book?

I have read twelve chapters and I personally think it is quite good. There are countless derivative works of Jin Yong's martial arts. It can be said that this type of subject matter is already poorly written. I've seen a lot of them myself and followed quite a few before. There were two books that I thought were pretty good, one was The Master of the Demon Cult, and the other was The Little Prince of the Song Dynasty. Unfortunately, I didn't read it anymore. How should I put it, it feels like it still stays within the scope of the original work, without broadening the perspective. I looked at the table of contents behind the author, and I can see that the author is very attentive. Moreover, it can be seen from the table of contents that the author has expanded the plot based on the original work. I think I can continue reading. For me personally, it is quite attractive.

It's still good, at least it's not too poisonous.

The writing of Tian Long Ba Bu is quite good, and there is no systematic way of writing. The fighting scenes are written in more detail and the content is substantial. After a lot of effort, I personally think it would be better to write the setting of Wu Yazi being healed and able to walk, and that they can die a good death. Hope it doesn't end badly

Not bad, much better than some 8 or 9 points.

The writing is so good, why is the rating so low? [Thinking] [What], [Eating Melon] Author, please don't keep updating [I understand]

Good, very rich content

Not boring, rich in imagination, and unpredictable in thinking

Duan Yu, who was reborn in Dali, is not worthy of being reborn unless he takes over the entire southeastern peninsula.

Save the book famine, worth reading

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Interesting Duan Yu

Average, but four stars is not too much, just make do with it [laughing evilly]

Traveling to the world of immortality is a bit abrupt

Well written, nothing toxic

Not bad, very beautiful, very detailed description

Why don't you learn Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu? Practicing together with Beiming Shen Gong, how wonderful it is to practice both internally and externally [Thinking]

Not bad, more emotional drama, but it's almost over Abi tore [what]

Very good, the writing style is very relaxed

Well written, please support me

Looks pretty good

Good, good, good, good

It's okay, but it's a little worse than Duan Yu on another website, because it has more Y Y.

Very good. Can you help dad? Can you help dad? No, no, no.

Very good, not bad, I hope the author will keep up the good work

Yes, I read it in one sitting and it is worth recommending to everyone.

It's well written, I like it very much, and it's so fun to read! Fairy tale for men! !