In Time-Travel Online Games, the Attributes of Different Worlds Are Too Low.
穿越网游，异世界的属性也太低了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 275k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
2Reads
104Chapters
15.3kReads · all time
It feels okay. It has a bit of a Japanese feel to it, but there are a lot of details that are not handled very well. I also like to focus on unimportant places. I still need to improve my style. Why is no one reading it?
It's good to watch. I feel like I've regained the same feeling as when I first encountered the invincible theme of another world in 17 years [I understand] There are no complicated routines. The author has portrayed the main characters and side characters very well. The straightforward plot and non-exaggerated rhetoric are just suitable for passing the leisure time [Blowing kisses] [Flowing kisses] [Flowing kisses] There is just a little less interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonists [crying]
After reading it, the overall impression is good, but maybe due to the influence of today's fast food culture, I always feel that the plot is a bit delayed. Of course, I understand the author's idea of portraying the character of the princess in a more three-dimensional way, but I still want to put more pen and ink on Li Mou. Moreover, the Tomato platform is not suitable for this kind of long-flowing style, or you can consider adding some "turbulence" to the long-flowing flow. If you want to quickly catch the attention of most readers of harem novels and cater to the market, start edging. This is a way to quickly increase traffic. Nowadays, some readers prefer plots that can bring a lot of pleasure in a short period of time, and the author may prefer to describe the process of the characters slowly growing up. Personally, I still prefer this kind of "development" plot, but if you want to attract more traffic, you can consider adding more interactive plots between the princess and the male protagonist in the "development" process. The above are just my personal immature views on this work. I hope the author's work will get better and better. Welcome to communicate (●'◡'●)
This paragraph feels too self-conscious and unnatural, but it is still quite attractive to read.
Bone King 2.0 [Awkward laugh] Not bad but not my cup of tea
There are a lot of poisonous points, the plot is novel, and the writing is also good.