The Magical Boy from Bears

You're cultivating immortality and I've tolerated it, but what's the meaning of another sad-face mask?

The author wrote the heroine Zhao Lin very well, she must be yandere

Generally speaking, it's a very good book. It's good for me anyway. I can listen to it when I'm bored in my spare time. It's very good, but the strength of the protagonist is really too weak. I feel like I can bully anyone. Those ordinary people can threaten an immortal cultivator with a gun. I hope the author can make some changes. Don't you think he has extraordinary abilities? At least for ordinary people, he has the same strength as others. After all, the various big bosses in the later stage are very difficult to defeat due to his bear presence. They have all kinds of technologies. If you make the protagonist so weak now, how will you write it in the later stage?

No wonder not many people read it. I used it in the wrong place. When writing novels, it is generally more acceptable to use the third person.

It's pretty good so far, but there's one thing I don't understand? , Because I don't know much about it. Maybe I haven't come into contact with it. What is this mask? What kind of system is it? Or which anime, movie or TV show is it from? I went to check it, but couldn't find it.

It probably gives me the feeling that the protagonist is writing a diary to recall the past. Of course, the author may be a novice, but there are advantages to writing this way. The diary in the first person will allow readers to face the novel in the first person, that is, they are immersed in it; unlike the previous ones, the third person is like facing the novel from the posture of God. This unintentional writing will also have a novel feeling

No, buddy, why don't you sleep and wear a mask? I'm just kidding. The mask is the real body.

I have no choice but to look like a passerby, am I reading the original work, the restored work, or the original work?

Great author, come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is okay, it's definitely enough to pass the time.

Who is that dark shadow?

The protagonist has basically not changed at all, but it can be viewed as a review of the plot. The protagonist's cultivation is a low-end version. It can be viewed as Naruto. To say that he cultivates immortality is to praise the protagonist.

The first part was okay, but the second part made me feel a little dizzy. I felt that the main character was more like a supporting character than a main character, and I slipped away after hearing Chapter 77.

Forget about cultivating immortals. Just look at it every day. It turns out that cultivating immortals is not as good as practicing martial arts.

Come on, it looks great!

Come on, the author has written very few novels about bears, let alone well-written ones.

The book is okay, but the rating is too low

It's very well written and very nice. You can take a look.

Except for a few typos, it's pretty good.

It's better to have more female protagonists

It's the first time I've read a novel in such a long time that it still has facial expressions. The innovation is pretty good, but I couldn't read it properly.

Don't be a yandere 😱 Now that I have kidnapped Bang Bu from Zero Zone Zero, I think I can kidnap Suzu and Elen from Zero Zone Zero.