[Two male protagonists, abo, fishing attack, year, double clean]
[Fake aloofness, true innocence, desperate to save face✖️Naturally stupid, Taiyang is timid but dares to tease]
Sheng Ci's creditor is a cold-blooded commander, fair-skinned, handsome, long-legged, handsome and rich.
The only fly in the ointment is that the other party always suspects that he is a member of a dark organization.
Not only did they try to send him to prison, but they also warned him seriously, "Hide your fox tail, don't let me catch you."
We bump into each other while eating, bumping into each other at interviews, and even bumping into each other when being chased by infected people.
Sheng Ci finally couldn't help but ask him: "Mr. Commander, why do you always follow me?"
The commander's handsome face remained unchanged, "I'm just checking your suspicions."
Sheng Ci raised her lips: "Oh, then why do you have a photo of me in your bedroom?"
Commander: "..."
Sheng Ci: "Then why are your ears red?"
Commander: "..."
Sheng Ci: "Then why did you secretly hug me again?"
Commander: "..."
"Mr. Commander, do you have a crush on me?"
"Mr. Commander, hide your fox tail, don't let me catch you."
Reader comments
The setting is quite nice, and the writing style is also good. It can be said that it is very bright, not boring, and I can keep reading.
The plot line is okay, but the ending is weird and uncomfortable, as if it was suddenly cut in half.
There are too many foreshadowings, and there are so many unfilled pitfalls that it makes people want to commit suicide, but considering the author's state in the middle, it is already very good to be able to write it down. I hope the second book Fu Linchu can give readers the answer.
The world view could be more perfect, but the priorities are not clear enough. Generally speaking, it is which camp the protagonist belongs to, and the relationship trend between each camp is completely unclear, including the chapter about the queen in the middle, which is also unclear. There are also all kinds of messy human experiments, Antarctica and so on. Maybe the author wanted to write that hazy feeling but didn't grasp it well (Laijia, don't listen to my nonsense)
The summary is that the purpose of the author's plot line is not very clear (it seems to be stacked on the surface), but the author's writing style makes up for this very well.
The emotional line can be complete, but the only problem is the plot line. Although I saw some people saying it was oe, it is still too far-fetched. I am looking forward to the next one, but I didn't expect Fu Linchu to be affected by it.
In fact, the author is still very good. Even if he is not in a good state, he still insists on updating it and it is still okay. Support it.
Please five stars, please!
Very pretty! The author's writing style is very good, the setting is really interesting to me, and the plot is not brainless. The protagonist is not a holy father but very witty and not the type of dodder flower. It's good to watch ♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥
I feel that it is very well written, the plot is very novel, unexpected, and very interesting, and the extras are also very sweet. Although the ending is not very clear, giving people a feeling that it is still unfinished, but in fact the answer has been revealed. I feel that it is good to stop here. The attack and the reception are sweet.
No, my dear, this book is very good! ! ! ! ! This is the first time I've seen this type of book. It's really good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This book is really good! ! ! ! ! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! ! !
It's very interesting, the male protagonist is very new, the plot summary is novel, and the writing is solid [Adored]
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Oh my god, I'm so beautiful
It's so beautiful [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The author should work hard to update it! I hope there will be no abuse later.
The setting is quite nice, and the writing style is also good. It can be said that it is very bright, not boring, and I can keep reading. The plot line is okay, but the ending is weird and uncomfortable, as if it was suddenly cut in half. There are too many foreshadowings, and there are so many unfilled pitfalls that it makes people want to commit suicide, but considering the author's state in the middle, it is already very good to be able to write it down. I hope the second book Fu Linchu can give readers the answer. The world view could be more perfect, but the priorities are not clear enough. Generally speaking, it is which camp the protagonist belongs to, and the relationship trend between each camp is completely unclear, including the chapter about the queen in the middle, which is also unclear. There are also all kinds of messy human experiments, Antarctica and so on. Maybe the author wanted to write that hazy feeling but didn't grasp it well (Laijia, don't listen to my nonsense) The summary is that the purpose of the author's plot line is not very clear (it seems to be stacked on the surface), but the author's writing style makes up for this very well. The emotional line can be complete, but the only problem is the plot line. Although I saw some people saying it was oe, it is still too far-fetched. I am looking forward to the next one, but I didn't expect Fu Linchu to be affected by it. In fact, the author is still very good. Even if he is not in a good state, he still insists on updating it and it is still okay. Support it.
Please five stars, please!
Very pretty! The author's writing style is very good, the setting is really interesting to me, and the plot is not brainless. The protagonist is not a holy father but very witty and not the type of dodder flower. It's good to watch ♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥
I feel that it is very well written, the plot is very novel, unexpected, and very interesting, and the extras are also very sweet. Although the ending is not very clear, giving people a feeling that it is still unfinished, but in fact the answer has been revealed. I feel that it is good to stop here. The attack and the reception are sweet.
No, my dear, this book is very good! ! ! ! ! This is the first time I've seen this type of book. It's really good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This book is really good! ! ! ! ! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! ! !
It's very interesting, the male protagonist is very new, the plot summary is novel, and the writing is solid [Adored]
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
Oh my god, I'm so beautiful
It's so beautiful [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The author should work hard to update it! I hope there will be no abuse later.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The baby is beautiful. The baby is beautiful.
Very nice! ! ! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ Is the feeling ending
It's good to read. I discovered this novel too late. The plot is very good. Boss, I want to read Xiao Fu! Faster, faster, more~
I really like it~ These two cute babies should be together all the time [shy][shy]
It's good to read, and there are as many foreshadowings as there are unlucky characters in the story.
The front looks great, but the back is a bit unfinished, but I believe they can create a better future!