Game Invasion: I Want to Die and Kill Through the Dungeon

Every character has flesh and blood. Fresh. The story is also very good. I'm so touched. It's really beautiful.

It looks good, the rhythm is tight, and the interactions are sweet. The characters are carefully designed and not broken. The writing is not bad. The author is very active and cute. There are more every day. However, there are some shortcomings. The various emotions and changes in the characters' hearts are not very obvious. The emotional line is a bit light, but the characters in the novel are not It is not the author himself. It will be difficult for the author to analyze their delicate emotions and express them accurately. It will be even more difficult for novice writers. Some of them will be too greasy or middle-of-the-road, so there is no big problem if it is less or less obvious. Overall, it is a very good book. Please give it a try, the author, it will definitely become popular! !

This is the third author I have read after Zhi Ben Jie and Hao Ren who really shocked my heart. I'm very curious about how rich the author's life experience is to conceive such a dreamy world view. The first copy brought me the romance of reading fairy tales. I was tired of reading the horror infinite flow. This book is simply a breath of fresh air. It gives me the illusion that I am not reading but traveling. Xiaoyu's characters are also very full, the plot is compact, and the writing is online. I like [shy][shy] I am willing to be the author's traveler, so I give ten stars

I think the meeting and falling in love between Yu and Xi is quite logical and smooth. I also like the characters of Yu and Xi very much. Yu has a faint sense of death, and Xi has a feeling of harm. It really pokes me when I see him. The taro balls are also very cute, like the two cubs ＿little scorpions＿ , the two little guys Ye and Cheng have a very good relationship. For now, this article is very healthy. I agree with many of the ideas. The descriptions of horror are also very touching, especially when listening/reading in the middle of the night, but I still look forward to what the author has to say. Well, please give me a boost for the author to update! ! ! Here to support you! ! ! Now let me tell you, although it is a bit scary, there will be humorous parts interspersed in it. Don't worry, it won't be too scary [Love]

Lin Yooyu's personality charm, her willingness to live towards death, her kindness to others even though she has endured great pain, her courage and tenacity are very attractive to me. The writer's writing style is also very good and the plot rhythm is great. In short, I highly praise [send heartfelt] I forgot to mention it. My friends are also very nice. It makes people feel warm [crying]

It has a very good subject matter, and the characters are also very rich, but the author's writing style seems very awkward. If the author's writing style was better and not so bland, it should be able to hit a 9.5

Super super super beautiful! Madam, you update a lot every day! ! ! I like it very much! Hope it becomes popular quickly! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The subject matter is more interesting than a simple infinite flow, the world view is huge, the protagonist is neither brainless nor aggrieved (you can't be aggrieved even if you want to die, hahaha [laughing evilly]), the writing style is also very good, anyway, it has reached the passing line in my heart (a noob's writing style will really not be able to stand it [face covering]), I hope more people can read it

It's tied, it's quite interesting, and people constantly doubt the author's background. For example, he studied philosophy, and the ingredients are extremely complex, such as Schrödinger's cat and quantum mechanics. Then various game settings are mixed into the text, and there are many conflicting issues. In the form of a story, I read it and think about it, but it seems that I just want to say something, just scratch my head. Sometimes I am very angry and find it very interesting. But when it comes to in-depth thinking, it doesn't seem to be there, and it doesn't seem to stop at the last minute. Instead, it's a bit like a wild horse, talking about whatever comes to mind, but it can be told in a story. It seems very philosophical, as if it is trying to argue something, but it jumps out and says "no, there is no logic." This mental state is very spiritual, very interesting and very interesting. The only and most difficult thing to accept is one of the characters. I don't quite understand the original intention of designing this character. He is not cute and lovable, but he is too self-sufficient and has no sense of self-esteem. The other characters are also infinitely tolerant of this. There is no growth at all after more than 300 chapters. Even if they have started to add plug-ins, they are still there. I can't see the character's growth and group positioning (no, there is no need for such a mascot, don't scorpions sound good? Don't bugs and puppets sound good?) Of course, it is impossible to delete this character at this point, and she is still a deputy CP. We can only hope that the settings added later will make her less obtrusive. Except for that character (no, this character makes people angry, super angry, and sick of stupidity), the writing is very interesting, but the author has also buried a lot of pitfalls. I hope it will all come true in the end, hahaha. It doesn't matter if it doesn't come true. After all, every big event will have very nervous (crossed out) and very spiritual speculation. Come on, author, look forward to it.

The plot is okay. The heroine wants to die. Less vernacular. It's different from those multi-world travels. Very interesting. Support the author. Please update it carefully

The setting of the protagonist is very interesting, the core of the template is very stable, and the characters are quite three-dimensional. The plot setting is very good, and the logic is not brainless. It is very interesting, including the "unconstrained" setting of various props. Including some settings, they are relatively new and very beautiful \(//∇//)\ Thank you for writing (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's good to watch, but the relationship between the two heroines is too slow. The main plot is still very good.

It's super good-looking. The subject matter is very novel and the world view is huge. When I first started watching it, the various settings made my eyes light up. Then the more I watched, the better it looked. The interactions between Xiaoyu and Xiaoxi with Ye Zi and Chengzi were also very sweet. The family relationship between Taro Yuan and Xiaoyu also moved me very much. In short, I really enjoyed watching it. I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished [Blow kiss]

Nice! I really like Xiaoyu and Xiaoxi, and Ye Zi and Chengzi are also very cute. They are like a loyal puppy and an arrogant cat.

I feel that the heroine's personality in this book is well established, and the plot is also quite good. It is not like the popular setting, which makes people's eyes brighter. It is very good-looking. It is the kind of plot that the more you read, the more you want to read, and there is no water in the plot. Moreover, the author's writing is very good. Why is the rating so low? I can't get enough of it. I've been keeping it for a long time and I'm thinking of giving it a second update. Come on, author, don't stop updating or make it unfinished [Sending my heart]

The writing is very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Xiaoyu and Xiaoxi are very interesting to get along with

The rhythm is good, the world view is huge and interesting, and the two heroines are in a very "good" mental state, I like it very much.

Nice! ! I simply can't get enough of it! It is recommended to update ten times a day [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Yeah, it's very nice, but because it's a new book, the rating is a bit low. The complicated feelings between the two heroines made me so happy [Love] (xp warning)

Look, the world view of this book is already top-notch among female videos that focus on sexual narratives. Even if the emotional line is removed, it is still a very good read. It's just a pity that it didn't become popular. There is no way that the female video market still prefers romance. Maybe the author can try other platforms? [Thinking] I hope this book can be completed smoothly, but this world view feels like it has more than a thousand chapters, and I'm still on System Zero after reading half of it.

It looks good. The protagonist's faint sense of death seems to me.

I really like the double heroine unlimited flow. The IQ of the two protagonists is also very high. I love it very much.

I really like this article. The logic is very good. There is nothing illogical so far. The half-dead mental outlook of the fish is also in line with the current mental state of people. However, the emotional line with Baili is developing slowly. If it develops in this state, I feel that I can write more than a million words. Finally, the most important thing is to update DaDa well [crazy]. You must not stop updating [grievance]

It suits my taste, so I felt deeply while watching it. The writing is very good, the plot and writing style are all right, and the summary is very good. Here you can also see articles that are not just about pursuing temporary sensory stimulation, but are written seriously and down to earth. The group portraits are particularly well written.

It's very interesting. I finally found a book that suits my appetite [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's quite interesting. Maybe because of the character of the protagonist, the plot doesn't seem urgent. It feels unhurried and unhurried. It's very comfortable and not stressful. It's a rare novel.

Super pretty! ! ! The writing is really good, the emotional scenes are great, and the logic is also very good. I like this book! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! The relationship between Yu and Xi is very interesting (really falling in love and killing each other) [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Again, super pretty! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's worth reading. For readers who want to read intellectual puzzles, you can buy this book instead. But maybe some people may find the pace slow? Or something else? However, it is still highly recommended to watch it. After all, if it doesn't look good, I won't watch it [Sentiment]

Personally, I think it's quite good. I've been waiting for the update. Chef, I must work hard and finish this book [][][]