After Adopting a Poor Heroine, He Died Tragically in Front of Her

It's so cool. It's the first simulation. The protagonist burns everything he has in order to save his sister. Even though he has become a cripple and can only survive in a mortal city, he still relies on his bonds to fight towards the battlefield of immortals and demons. His strong will supports the protagonist. Even if he only has one arm left, even if he has vomited black blood for several years, and even if his internal organs are almost spit out, he can still kill through the battlefield. This is love! ! Five stars, must be five stars! ! I can't be the only one who can read this book, come in here... Come in and read it! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Generally speaking, this book is well written. Although the first act is very confusing and a bit difficult to understand, the second act with the witch's story highlights the author's strength. Guide the witch who only has fear to gradually progress, and Xu Xie becomes the witch's light. This setting is not only full of warmth, but also skillfully shapes the characters and relationships, making the story rich in depth and appeal. The plot of the third act in the world of martial arts, whether it is the plot design of accidental and inevitable intertwining of Wu Yingxue's unintentional rescue, or the grand narrative of leading A Niu and others to form a survival army to fight against the demon, all demonstrate the author's strong narrative ability and imagination. The rapid growth in writing is a highlight. The description of the environment is immersive, making readers feel as if they are in different worlds; the details of the characters are described in detail, whether it is the protagonist Xu Xi, or characters such as Xu Moli, Witch, Wu Yingxue, and even Daniel and Aunt Zhang (especially Daniel) are given fresh vitality, as if they are vividly written on the page. I hope the author will continue his efforts and paint a more touching world.

This book is so beautiful. It's completely non-toxic and makes people laugh till their noses are bubbling. I highly recommend it. My brother is so cute that I can't help it.

The lack of relationship story in the first chapter was perfectly solved in the second chapter. I won the hemp and finished reading it in one go. It can be said that the writing is very good. At least there are no problems in the plot. Some criticisms are only about the power system, such as why the sister can kill the high level with a low level all at once (there is no explanation after reading it), but I personally feel that these do not affect it; The first chapter tricked and killed some people who wanted to read a good article. Some people felt that it was poisonous, self-motivated, and forced to sensationalize. But as I said, this is the reason why the chapter is not enough and lacks plot stories, and the pace is too fast (but it will not work if the pace slows down and the story becomes dull). In fact, this book follows the style of cultivating emotions and adding soft rice (actually, it is hair knife) , but I like [like]), it is not Shuang Wenlong Aotian (at least it was not [face covering] at the beginning). The plot rhythm of the first chapter is fast and lacking, so it seems to be very "self-moving", but it also depends on the person, at least I think it is harmless, but these are perfectly solved in the second chapter. The author is very good at telling stories. The overall story of the second chapter is very well written step by step. If I have to say the shortcomings, it may be that it is too bland and lacks big ups and downs. However, it is also one of the most perfect chapters written so far (because there are only two chapters at the moment). I would like to suggest that it would be very interesting if there are some big scenes and that kind of dihua, and some side reactions are still very interesting. Final Rating: Excellent work Suggestion: maintain standards, pay attention to details, and do not have any logical flaws (in terms of strength system)

The plot is quite good, quite interesting, and the simulated world is still very interesting. However, the author's writing style is a bit awkward. It feels like it is written for a purpose, so it seems a bit deliberate, but overall it is still good and I can continue to read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's so good-looking. The protagonist breaks through the Nascent Soul when he is on the verge of death for the sake of the heroine. He kills several demonic elixirs by himself. No one supports the demon invasion, which provides the protagonist with space to show off. It's so good-looking and good-looking. You must watch it [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The best funny novel of the year. The protagonist is so outrageous. The first copy made me laugh. The magic cultivator called me a cheater. He was such an unbeatable Xiaoqiang.

I read more than 200 chapters in one go My favorite among the 4 story units so far is the third one As an alternative kind of fast travel, I have always believed that this form of story should not be too long or too short. Too short and insufficient paving, too long and complicated The first story (Xianxia Plane) is too short. Although it is also quite touching, it always feels like it ends all of a sudden without much progress. The second story (Magic Plane) is much better than the first, but because the characters are too monotonous, there are only two heroes and heroines, so the image still feels too thin. The third story (martial arts plane) is just right! There are male protagonists, female protagonists, supporting roles, and extra roles. In the same huge world background, these small characters are like stars guarding the sun and moon. The author's sublimation at the end caught the swordsman off guard. After chewing and savoring it, it feels reasonable again The fourth story (sci-fi plane) conflicts with the main structure of the third world. It is too long and has too few characters. It is the only one among the four units that I skipped some chapters. I still hope the author can use more care In terms of writing, the author is already very good. It just lacks a little bit of excitement in the arrangement of the characters and plots (the male and female protagonists are fine, but we just need to see if we can add some supporting characters and make the villains more three-dimensional - even if they are bad, they should be bad and have their own characteristics, not like they are copied and pasted) Judging from all the chapters so far, 9.2 Points are well deserved. Here are five stars to help me a little bit. (Send three free gifts and six flowers to wish the author a happy New Year's Eve!)

This book is particularly good. [Like] The main character has lost all his spiritual power and has only one day left to live. He screams about bonds and family ties, and then he sits up in the middle of a dying illness and slashes at a bunch of golden elixir demon cultivators. It's so much fun.

It's well written and the characters are well drawn. But there are currently 2 problems: 1. The combat power system has been broken, and the main storyline has not been seen yet. A little attention to the current situation of Blue Star can instantly solve any problems. But it's not impossible to save it. For example, in the later stage, you can write a technological plane or something to introduce the concept of dimensionality and compress the combat power. 2. At present, 3 harems have been released in the 180+ chapters, and the increase speed is a bit too fast. It's not that I don't like to read it, as the author himself said, the place for love is limited, and I personally don't like too much harem. As long as there are too many, it will inevitably not be able to take care of them all, resulting in them becoming a vase in the later stage. If possible, write more about daily life, and even let the supreme people participate in the simulation appropriately (according to their understanding of reincarnation, without retaining strength and memory). It would also be good to write about stock trading (party struggle).

Those who have never tasted S can try it. One second, the foundation building was beaten by the golden elixir, and the next second, the brother sacrificed to the sky and killed the Nascent Soul in an instant. The protagonist is still fighting after the oil is exhausted, he gets up and kills 10 golden elixirs in an instant, and finally dies tragically in front of his sister. It is suspected of being a love story on a female channel, and love can defeat all enemies in the world. The unlucky villain encounters two villains.

There is nothing much to say except that it is wonderful. Every simulation and every description is a breakthrough in the author's writing, especially the third simulation, "Aniu" and Shiwandashan. The feeling of being immersed in the scene and being able to completely immerse yourself in it, it hurts... It hurts so much! I completely think that an anime can be produced based on this. Personally, I think that the third simulation is really apotheosis, especially the scene of A Niu's sacrifice. The description is really fascinating. Each story has its own sorrow, romance and insights. I hope the author can come up with more exciting stories. If I have the chance, I hope I can also provide some materials. I will continue to follow up!

Provincial flow: simulated astronomy, fantasy invades reality, many female characters, no harem, no Shura field, excellent writing The simulation that revolves around the female character is actually a different kind of astronomy. Each simulation is a world, and after the simulation ends, it is connected to reality. The simulation is a type of "VR", which is more immersive than text simulation, and the characters are more detailed. In fact, you can basically guess the structure of each story by looking at the title, sugar + knife + sugar. Because I know that we will meet again later, the knife does not hurt much, but if it is really be, I will not read it. There are many female characters. Needless to say, why is it said that it is not a harem? Because the female character's feelings for the protagonist are dependence rather than love. It cannot be said to be a harem in the traditional sense. In fact, changing the gender, the sister becomes the younger brother, the female disciple becomes a male disciple, and the female princess is replaced by the young prince, has almost no impact on the plot, it is just that they happen to be female [Chigua] The reason why it is said that there is no Shura field is because although the female characters have some competition around the protagonist, they are at best like "who is the mother's favorite child". The writing style is quite good, and it has the flavor of commercial writing. It would not be surprising to see it adapted into comics or short plays later.

The text is very good, and the simulation is also very novel. It is not the other kind of simulation that only looks at text, but personal experience. I have just finished watching a world, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. I hope it will not be a mess, not end, and not eunuch. I don't ask for how good it is, but I hope it can be finished smoothly.

It's a great book. As a quadriplegic, I can empathize with it at the beginning. It's a time-travel simulator. It would be great to have such a thing. The author's writing style is very delicate, and there are many profiles of emotional expressions. It is very comfortable to read and very natural. The character of the protagonist is my favorite, from the first story Things, selfless dedication to my sister, I understand the emotion very well, 'That is my only relative, why not do it to make her better?', And through each story, the emotion is also an increasing trend from a macro perspective, from the individual to the feelings of family and country, and the survival of the race, step by step There will be no feeling of being fake and empty. I slowly get to know the protagonist from the perspective of the reader. After understanding the character characteristics, what he has done and insisted on has no sense of separation. The protagonist is really the kind of person only in books, a noble person, a pure person, a person who has escaped from vulgar taste. Personally, I want to be that kind of person. I am good but have selfish desires. I am willing to give, but I have concerns. I am not perfect and have my own evils. But the protagonist is so perfect, and it is the kind of natural and peaceful perfection. His kindness is not abrupt at all, just like a proletarian warrior! I have been reading books on Tomato for several years, and I obviously feel that the overall writing level of the books in the past two years has been improving. It is more comfortable to read with less poisonous points, but I still did not expect to be able to read such fine chaff in the world of Tomato. Maybe it is because I am ignorant. I have finished reading the third book Across the World. Thank you to the author for giving me five stars.

How can I put it, from the first simulation to the third simulation, the content and writing style of the three simulations have improved to the naked eye. The first simulation was very short and the emotion was not enough, but in the third simulation, the length is very suitable and the subject matter and writing style are better. At the same time, the most important theme is The title begins to sublimate. The first simulation has no great meaning, only the emotions between brothers and sisters. The second one rises to the arrogant gods and mortal people. The third one is the most realistic arrogant officials and the people who cannot afford to eat. The writing becomes better and better step by step. You can see [Note] The third simulation, except for the length, is very good in writing and content. If you want to read it, stick to the first simulation and it will be very good.

Let me talk about the conclusion first: a book that surprised me, but the stamina of each simulation was insufficient. I have finished reading the first two simulations so far. The first simulation is quite satisfactory, but I like it quite a lot. I don't care about the plot including the criticized male protagonist's implosion. The author of the second simulation must have made reference to that comic. The characters are too similar, but it doesn't matter. I think the writing is very good🤓👍 Sanwu's writing is on point, but the sugar is obviously not enough. The biggest charm of Sanwu is to express love by sticking to you with a plain tone and expression. The witch does express her love with companionship, but physical contact There is too little description, and it has been emphasizing that the heroine thinks that she is an object in her heart, which affects the perception a bit. Although the setting of the omnipotent witch who only wants to be a human object is very interesting, it is not reflected at all. This is a particularly big manifestation of the lack of stamina. The simulation plot is very interesting, but after the simulation, the interaction with the heroine is not sweet enough, and it feels a bit embarrassing. Moreover, it is not enough to feel refreshed after the simulated heroine chases her. It feels like it may be related to the identity of the male protagonist? I feel like it might be easier for people to feel comfortable if the setting is like students. Overall, I want to see more Shura Fields! ! ! I want to see the sweet interaction between the male and female protagonists after the simulation! ! ! ! The heroine confesses her love to the hero! On base! Anyway, let's have more sugary dramas! ! ! The simulated knife is for better sugar distribution later! ! !

This novel is simply amazing. The plot and character descriptions are very rich. The two current female characters vividly show their unique personality charm. It also shows that the protagonist burns everything to brighten the lives of the two female characters.

The author's writing style is very good, the plot is rigorous, and the character creation is very online. It can make people think of a living witch or the empress sister. I hope the author will make the plot more and more exciting in the future [Please update] [Blow kiss]

A novel worth reading. You can add your own ideas to the cliched plot. Although it is still relatively green in all aspects, it is a rare novel with less poison and good writing in Tomato. In reality and simulation, it feels like it was written by two people [face covering]

Contains some spoilers, please proceed with caution For some people, the chapters about the various simulated worlds described by the author are watery, but for me, it is these small stories that they think are watery that describe the image of the characters in each simulated world. They are real flesh-and-blood characters, not just supporting characters. At present, I have watched the world of cultivation, the world of magic, and the world of martial arts. Among the three simulated worlds, the most touching one for me is the world of martial arts. The mutual redemption between the protagonist and the army seeking survival can make me shed tears, but the description of the heroine of this world is secondary. My second favorite is the description of the relationship with the heroine in the magical world. The existence of the lifespan theory really makes me cry. As for the world of cultivating immortals, although it is also good, it is not as touching as the subsequent two worlds to me, maybe because of the author's writing style at the beginning. Summary: This is a rare and good book. I hope the author will update it more.

It is a rare good book. The first part may be written in a hurry because the author is not very skilled, but the last two parts are the best plot descriptions I have ever read. The warmth is highlighted in the plainness. The Witch's Redemption made my heart warm. How would an emotionless person behave if he loses the most precious "thing"? Exciting The third chapter can be said to elevate this novel to an unparalleled height. I personally think it can be compared with the Zhang Jiao chapter in the museum. The portrayal of the people at the bottom and the bloody exposure of the cannibal society really hit the heart. I hope the author can maintain the quality, and it will be fine if it goes slower. People who really take it seriously can afford the wait. I won't say more, so I give you five stars.

The plot is okay, but the writing is a bit too strong and sensational. Too much emphasis on the gorgeousness of the writing makes it unnatural. You can pay attention to the structure of the plot, don't force sensationalism, and don't make the writing too gorgeous. No way [stunned] Children [OK] It's too grand [Explore] It's too embarrassing [Laugh and cry] The writing style and literary allusions are as good as each other [Like] Most people can't understand [Punch out] The characterization is detailed and vivid [laugh] The emotional description is delicate [Laugh and cry] The description of the environment and the characters are used [Blowing a kiss] to express the author's thoughts😀

It's so beautiful, I burst into tears watching it. The protagonist burns himself to illuminate others [like] [like] [like], he really made me cry to death [cry] [cry] [cry] It's so beautiful! Love watching! Everyone, go check it out. It's not toxic at all, and it's so cool.

It's so good, you must read it, especially the first chapter. In order to make the female sword fairy regret, the male protagonist was paralyzed into mud. He took a sword and beat many golden elixir demons to death, and even beat them into clay. The sword fairy only cried and howled behind. It was great. In this way, the sword fairy could regret it for the rest of his life. He even forcibly sensationalized it to let you know how regretful it is. The sword, it's so shameful. The female swordswoman finally reacted after the male protagonist sent it and turned her grief and anger into strength and killed a bunch of demons. It's great. This makes both of them very powerful. It makes me brainless. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book completely broke my perception. I used to think that books with a Tomato score of 9 or less were not worth reading, and books that were not fattening were not worth reading either. But this book changed my mind. The story describes life in the simulation in a mediocre way, but it vividly portrays emotions. There are no twists and turns in the story. The great thing lies in the choices of human nature, the mutual bonds, the love and justice, which moved me to tears. This book is not a boss's fast food, nor is it a bulldozer, but a little bit of ordinary human nature. Personally, I give it an even score of 9.5, Which is completely comparable to the classic online novels such as "Urban Demon Story"

It's good to watch. Each simulation chapter is getting longer, but I don't feel dragged out. Instead, I feel that the first simulation with my sister is too short. It's a pity that the relationship with the protagonist is very close so far, but there is no such intimate feeling. This sci-fi simulation journey has also reached the final step. The protagonist probably died in the resonance and helped Elle escape from the prison. Then the machine girl who was sacrificed began to grow, transformed into the supreme understanding of everything, ended the existence of their captivity, and then found the protagonist. I hope that the fifth simulation can see a more intimate connection with the protagonist. Unlike the previous four times, the identity of the protagonist belongs to a high-ranking person. I want to see Tie Tie [I almost cry] and see an existence that is not behind the protagonist but standing directly beside the protagonist. Leave me a sticker 😩 Don't let the water flow in your daily routine, don't moisturize things and accompany them silently. I want to see every minute and second spent together be a passionate and unrestrained release of love [send heart] I want to see Tie Tie! I want the first four to be on guard when they see the fifth one, to prevent the protagonist from being monopolized by one person, so that everyone starts to work hard to show their own advantages. I want to watch the post! ! Although I feel that the current description of the protagonist of Master Duanshui will not favor one over the other, but I want to read the post! ! !

Hello author, the book you wrote is so beautiful, especially the first dozen chapters. I would like to take the liberty of asking for your address, so that I can send you my highest tribute as a reward for writing such a good book.

The writing style is good, and the emotions are also well written. It's at a five-star level. Five stars is too early, a bit 🍬, sensational for the sake of sensationalism

The writing is good, the stages of the story are well described, and the concept is getting better and better. The only question is, is the male protagonist a eunuch? Does he have nothing to do with Xingyu after living with a beautiful girl for so long? I was shocked