[Satisfying Cultivation Fantasy] [Romantic Pairing Undecided] [No Female Lead Abuse] [Heroine Saves the World]
When the System finally showed up, Lu Yunzhao learned that she was nothing more than a vicious supporting female character.
Lu Yunque, who had taken her place as a child and grown up in luxury, was the kind, innocent, gentle, beautiful, universally adored heroine of this cultivation novel about a woman beloved by all.
The System had come to make Lu Yunzhao follow the plot: keep relentlessly tormenting the heroine and shamelessly flirt with all the excellent men who belonged to her. Of course, all Lu Yunzhao would do was make a fool of herself, making the heroine look like a pure, unsullied white flower, aloof from the world.
In the end, her reputation would be ruined, and she would meet a miserable death, reduced to something neither human nor ghost.
Lu Yunzhao sneered, took the script from the System, and then began to follow the plot "seriously."
But the System gradually began to fall apart.
"Why is this happening?" Its mechanical voice shrilled. "Why is the heroine the one who ends up suffering every time?"
Lu Yunzhao said, "Looks like your so-called protagonist isn’t as kind, innocent, righteous, and noble as you claim."
In the end, the heroine’s character was completely shattered, the plot fell apart again and again, and the Heavenly Dao flew into a rage and sent down a heavenly tribulation.
The System began begging Lu Yunzhao to save the world. After all, if this little world were destroyed, it would disappear along with it.
"Me?" Lu Yunzhao sneered. "I’m just a vicious supporting female character."
The setting is quite interesting, and I clicked on it after reading the introduction. However, probably because I just started writing it not long ago, the plot development is not very clear yet and is a bit off-kilter. The characters are very distinct. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes!
The plot is not bad, but I feel that some chapters are not connected well, and the preface does not match the following. For example, one moment, the heroine is forcibly absorbing spiritual energy to survive the tribulation, and the next moment, the original heroine abuses the male co-star, who inexplicably loses her memory and is signed into a slave contract (mainly, it is not written how this section happened). It feels like many places are a bit forced to set up suspense, and the turns are a bit stiff.
It's good to watch, but the original heroine kind of affected the feeling of reading the book. The foreshadowing and plot are all pretty good.