Demoness, Please Mind Your Manners!

Chapter 139 doesn't include a heroine, it's a lot ambiguous, but the heroine's appearance is well described, I'll see if I accept it!!! Until next time!!! Chapter 258: One confiscated!!!

A sad start, without overwhelming strength. The male protagonist has excellent descriptions of the main plot. He is inspirational, moves forward steadily, and improves his strength to become the strongest. It is a good book, but it is not enough to read [smirk]🤭🤭🤭🤭. The chapters are compact, rich in content, humorous and exciting. Also, there are not many female protagonists for the time being. Each character trait is well portrayed, and the supporting roles are also outstanding 👍👍👍👍👍

It can be regarded as one of the rare and good books among the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read over the years. Unfortunately, I don't know why the author has no motivation to continue writing. According to the early structure, there is no problem in writing at least 1,200 more chapters. It feels like there are some other irresistible reasons that affect the author's motivation to continue writing. . . In any case, I still want to thank and affirm the author, it is a rare masterpiece, and I look forward to the day when it will make a strong comeback.

The subject matter is good and the concept is not bad. Although it is a bit drooling, you managed to finish it...

Traditional cultivation of immortality seems very comfortable, and the division of realms is also popular with everyone. It is not like some authors who create a mess of realms and think that they are unique, but they are actually just trying to please the public. The writing is good, there is a main story line, the realm is clear, the protagonist kills decisively, and occasionally upgrades to fight monsters and pick up treasures, kill enemies, pretend to be 13, and there is a good book next to the rare retard. Of course, it is not systematic, and it is better not to have a harem. Men are lustful, but I still like single-minded traditional emotions when reading books.

Come on, I give you five stars. I finished the last book, so come on, this one will be even better [laughing]

Xiangguo is still of high quality and looks good! How many heroines? 😏😏 Is Youmu the heroine?

The storyline is intertwined, and the characters are well portrayed. The overall evaluation is relatively good. Except for some cliched details at the beginning, it can be regarded as a superior work.

Not sweet but quenching thirst, more old-fashioned but still smooth! I can't bear to give a low score, but I really can't convince myself to give it a full score, so I'll give it 4 points! It's okay, no merit and no fault! No big poison! Keep watching!

It's okay. I'd like to give you a suggestion. When writing, I don't think it's too repetitive. For example, Yang Tingxuan's incident happened too many times. Maybe it's because the author wants to highlight the importance of this character, but it shouldn't appear too often.