One Person, One Sword, One Mortal World

Chapter 139 doesn't include a heroine, it's a lot ambiguous, but the heroine's appearance is well described, I'll see if I accept it! ! ! Until next time! ! ! Chapter 258: One confiscated! ! !

A sad start, without overwhelming strength. The male protagonist has excellent descriptions of the main plot. He is inspirational, moves forward steadily, and improves his strength to become the strongest. It is a good book, but it is not enough to read [smirk][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker]. The chapters are compact, rich in content, humorous and exciting. Also, there are not many female protagonists for the time being. Each character trait is well portrayed, and the supporting roles are also outstanding [like][like][like][like][like]

The subject matter is good and the concept is not bad. Although it is a bit drooling, you managed to finish it...

Traditional cultivation of immortality seems very comfortable, and the division of realms is also popular with everyone. It is not like some authors who create a messy realm and think that they are unique, but they are actually just trying to please the public. The writing is good, there is a main storyline, the realm is clear, the protagonist kills decisively, and occasionally upgrades to fight monsters and pick up treasures, kill enemies, pretend to be 13, and there is a good book next to the rare retard. Of course, it is not systematic, and it is better not to have a harem. Men are lustful, but I still like single-minded traditional emotions when reading books.

Come on, I give you five stars. I finished the last book, so come on, this one will be even better [laughing]

It can be regarded as one of the rare and good books among the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read over the years. Unfortunately, I don't know why the author has no motivation to continue writing. According to the early structure, there is no problem in writing at least 1,200 more chapters. It feels like there are some other irresistible reasons that affect the author's motivation to continue writing. . . In any case, I still want to thank and affirm the author, it is a rare masterpiece, and I look forward to the day when it will make a strong comeback.

The storyline is intertwined, and the characters are well portrayed. The overall evaluation is relatively good. Except for some cliched details at the beginning, it can be regarded as a superior work.

Not sweet but quenching thirst, more old-fashioned but still smooth! I can't bear to give a low score, but I really can't convince myself to give it a full score, so I'll give it 4 points! It's okay, no merit and no fault! No big poison! Keep watching!

Xiangguo is still of high quality and looks good! How many heroines? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Is Youmu the heroine?

It's okay. I'd like to give you a suggestion. When writing, I don't think it's too repetitive. For example, Yang Tingxuan's incident happened too many times. Maybe it's because the author wants to highlight the importance of this character, but it shouldn't appear too often.

The first five hundred chapters are very well written, and the traditional fantasy is very good. If the writing is better, it will be a book on the level of enlightenment. I hope that I will write more carefully in the future. Come on!

I can't get enough of it. The sudden "finale" explains the future development of the story, but what about the details? [Shocked] I still want to know how the world will change after the success of killing the Piaomiao Sect. Looking forward to the author's return [sending heartfelt wishes]

The writing is quite good. The most intuitive shortcoming is that the plot is a bit difficult to judge. It is very slow when looking at the map, but it is normal when looking at the realm.

I have read the first two books by Xiangguo, and I feel that this one is also well written. There were some plot points at the beginning that were very uncomfortable for a mysophobic person like me. I also mentioned it to the author, and the author also revised that part. I am also very grateful to the author for listening to the opinions of our readers.

The writing is very good, but the biggest regret is that there are too few chapters, not enough to read.

It feels good, much better than other novels on the Tomato market, but there are many places that are too cliche. It feels like a novel from many years ago. It is quite comfortable to read, but this book should not reach too high. I am looking forward to the next book.

Not bad, not verbose, not licking the dog, the progress is not slow, keep it up, I am optimistic about you

It's okay. The plot rhythm is good. It's not very brainless or charming. I just don't know who Hongchen is in Yihongchen.

It's okay, comrades can go and have a look.

The plot is compact and fascinating, and the writing is also good, but it's a pity that it has no beginning and no end!

It is a well-written book, with humorous content and a rigorous and interesting storyline. However, the author may not be able to continue writing, and the ending has been hasty and left many things unexplained. . This is the most hastily ending novel I have ever read. It's a pity.

It's a very good novel. The storyline is quite good, and the structural logic is reasonable. The content is not too poisonous. The protagonist has a distinct personality, not to mention his combat power and intelligence. The supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood and emotional. The only flaw is that this is a eunuch novel. What a pity...

It's a traditional fantasy novel that's non-toxic and enjoyable to read. The protagonist is both good and evil, but the number of words is a little too short.

I picked it up from two old books. From the current point of view, although it is an old theme, it can still inherit the humor and humor in the content.

The writing is super good, but the author is a bit stupid. He stopped writing halfway through and started a new book. I can't understand it. This is the best one I've ever written.

Well written, powerful and readable.

Not bad, there are ideas, novelty, ideas and writing style

I haven't read fantasy for a long time. The front part of this book is pretty good. I hope I can improve the back part once I have the ability.

Although the fairy cultivating genre has changed the soup but not the medicine, it's still pretty good-looking!

It's very interesting. Although it's a bit different from the previous books, it doesn't affect the content.