I Am Really Not the Child of Destiny!

I have been reading the book for so long, so I want to contribute to the rating. First is the normal evaluation: Personally, I think this book has a bit of a Western fantasy literature (I have been reading Family Man frequently), which means that the world view is complete and the world map is grand ← I always have this feeling when reading Qidian book. It is logical and has natural transitions. I see that there are no embarrassing places or poisonous points. The characters have distinct personalities, unlike other novels where you can't tell who is who when several people are talking to each other. The bond between the protagonist and the Sons of Destiny is really nice (knock), and the protagonist is very strong (meaning he often leaps over levels to fight monsters/people). The protagonist group is centered on the protagonist, and the protagonist's special characteristics are always cool (alternative heartthrob succubus physique?) As a protagonist, I generally don't like to read group portraits, and I'm often afraid that non-protagonists will steal the highlights and outshine the main character. There's no need to worry about this book. The perspective of the whole text follows the protagonist closely, and the highlights and cool points are all reflected in the protagonist (in my personal opinion). The family members of Raifujo can stop reading the comments here. Ahem, here's my personal review (fujoshis, please read this): Personally, I prefer the protagonist, so I'm all for it! Summarize some feelings that can be suppressed (quietly) 1. Chen Xi x Protagonist: Chen feels like the Holy Son of the Church of Light. He is gentle, strong and polite (polite), but treats the protagonist differently (a little more close to him). In terms of identity, the two of them are still rivals (rivals cannot become wives~), but Chen has never been hostile to the protagonist. He often "accidentally" meets the protagonist when he is skipping school, and then joins in happily. The small actions between Chen and the protagonist (personally think they are Chen's unilateral micro actions) feel so doting. 2. Fergal x Protagonist: Fergal is the one who gets angry and gets angry. Does the protagonist like to tease him (for the sake of luck) or hide it from the text (white and black) and tsundere? You can't argue with the protagonist, but you can't beat him. What's so annoying is that the second copy can't identify the protagonist, relying on the protagonist's taunting tone and content. What's the unique bond between the two? 3. Adoptive Father Feeling like a scum), but there is some misunderstanding with the protagonist (the protagonist mistakenly thinks that he will kill him, what kind of sadistic script is this?) Pseudo-orthopedics is really touching. The point is that his adoptive father took him when he was 16 years old (the protagonist is 1 year old), and he is just 29 now! I love the protagonist!

Looking at the title and introduction, I thought it was a common quick-traveling Shuangnan, about campus interstellar apocalyptic ancient entertainment circle, but I was really tired after reading too much. But as soon as I saw the academy in the first two sentences, I got excited. It's been a long time since I've seen a Western fantasy setting, and it felt very different. I really fell in love with Kavis, he was very handsome, very smart and capable. The whole school knew about Kavis's half-demon bloodline, so they isolated him and made trouble for him. But the protagonist didn't care, he would fight back anyone who made trouble for him, and treated them as experience packs for training. I didn't feel frustrated at all because of this. Moreover, after a ghost came in, many students changed their views on the protagonist. The school leaders were dissatisfied with the protagonist, and the protagonist also had a big boss dad. It was very enjoyable to watch. There is also a little dragon who is very eatable and protective of her owner. The protagonist's father gives her delicious food and she is very happy to eat. But when she sees that the protagonist's father wants to attack the protagonist, she immediately throws away the food and draws a line. It is very cute. (Ps: I forgot the reason for the protagonist's father. I just remember that Xiaolong had someone to draw a line between eating and drinking. I should remember it correctly) Chen Xi, the knight with the aura of the protagonist, will catch strange points when the protagonist speaks. For example, when the protagonist goes to a restaurant and says that he is eating junk food, he thinks about which dish is junk (in the end, the durian pizza stands out because it is placed on the plate and cannot be put back, so it is too cute to eat it forcefully, so it adds a lot of luck to the protagonist). After being cheated in a duel with the protagonist, there is a vague tendency to become black, the kind of white cut into black, very touching! There is also the newly-appeared Master Fu. Because he wants the protagonist to apologize to his sister, he seeks a duel with the protagonist. He is a bad-tempered player and a big player in breaking defenses. He only provides the protagonist with two lottery draws in a few chapters. However, I feel that when this ghost is over, there will be a lot of changes. I look forward to it. (Ps: But when this incident is over, even if you are forcibly brought here, you will still have to write a review. It is probably another breach of defense) I'm just happy to touch on cp in non-cp articles. It's really interesting. I look forward to updates (✧◡✧)

Good-looking, male videos, pure brotherhood without cp, more group portraits. The male protagonist is strong and good-natured (previously he was suspected of being the son of Super Bat). Protagonist 1: The male protagonist's classmate Bai Qiehui is not a very rule-abiding person but he is upright and honest. Protagonist 2: The female dragon picked up by the male protagonist and positioned as a lively and cheerful daughter. Protagonist 3: The male protagonist's adoptive father, the smiling tiger + the strongest magician + a suspected dark voyeur control freak. Protagonist 4: Transfer student. He has a bad temper and is easy to break his defense, but he is very interesting. He has only appeared recently. The three protagonists, students plus one dragon, are a happy family. I have finished the third copy now, and it seems that there is a bigger conspiracy. I am waiting for the update. It is fun to watch.

This is an article that I am looking forward to following up. Let me start with the article itself. Personally, I feel that the length of battles and daily life is just right, so it does not seem so abrupt. Moreover, it is not the kind of time travel that makes people feel like they are traveling through time but integrated into the world itself. The characters of the protagonist group are all very distinct. The everlasting friendship between the teenagers is really touching. Protagonist Kavis: I personally prefer this character because it has a mysterious color. I am looking forward to the energy contained in his body and look forward to the author's description later. He is also a person who values friendship but does not have the Holy Father. He has his own ideas and is a natural leader (with a little caution, everyone is like this). I hope that the death mentioned in the previous world line can be changed. Protagonist Er Chenxi: Uniquely upright but not rigid (gentle and upright), really studious [laughing and crying] He wants to understand everything Kavis says. The key plot of Oita in the protagonist's halo is really useful. He feels that he will pay the price of his life for the overall situation. Protagonist Sanfergal: The current view is that he is a small firecracker, with considerable explosive ability and not annoying (lively and cheerful). According to what people in the future say, he is also a person worthy of trust and trust. Caron, that dragon: One seems to be the shadow of Cavis, relatively loyal and not very bright (personally) The other can eat and protect people I hope the follow-up plot will continue to be good

Personally, I feel that the rating of this book is low (maybe it's just been released) But this book definitely has a future. Friends who want to read it can read this long review carefully. The protagonist's character is not as mindless as most male videos, but he is not a virgin either. Not a brainless killing finger: He maintains this attitude towards experience monsters against his classmates, and will leave his own "shadow" after thinking about it. Not a brainless finger: He won't say anything about the ghost weapon (it seems to be this name), it has helped him, if he changes his ways (beat by a certain shadow), he will have brotherhood or something, and he will throw it out as a sacrifice. Personal feeling. . . Fujoshi is a must-see (Lei Shuangnan can also watch it, there is no CP, and there is no ambiguity. It means that I am the fujoshi soul). I stand for the aⅡ protagonist. This is the egg between the protagonist and the protagonist's mother-in-law↗↘~Okay↗Okay↘→ah~↗(*´I`*) The overall style of the article is also very good. Personally, I like that the protagonist's heart is really funny, and other people's imaginings are also funny, especially the "junk food" and a certain vice president (no spoilers, you guys can read it for yourself) Then the world view of the article is also very good, a little more complete than the world view of most articles. This does not mean how fanciful the world view is, but it means that it is complete in some details and gives people a very real feeling (I don't know how to describe it, but it is better than many nonsensical world views). Then there are a lot of foreshadowings in the article as a whole. This book should be a long-term development (the author should write at least 1.5 Million words before finishing it) The characters of the protagonist and the protagonist group are also very good (here I mean the characters are relatively distinct) For example, a certain knight has a dull personality. ? (Maybe he is too upright. He does not understand many of the modern words spoken by the protagonist. Then our upright children asked directly without caring about the protagonist's embarrassment.) His own personality is not static, and will also change subtly during his experiences with the protagonist. Changes, especially escaping from school, violating school rules, and writing a self-criticism in advance. This very uncharacteristic behavior (abstract, quite in line with the character) was beautified through personal language art, and he was called a rainy day (it was really funny when I saw this paragraph) Another example is a certain dragon. This is a foodie who knows how to repay kindness. He was easily bribed by his adoptive father with food (but he is not brainless, he is a semi-intuitive animal). Another example is a certain young master who initially came to trouble the protagonist, but he has a more upright character. After finding out that it was a misunderstanding, his relationship with the protagonist became much better (but this still cannot be made up for. The fact that he was dragged out of the school by the protagonist, the child took the blame that was not his~) Then there is the adoptive father, a character that I personally like the most, a genius among geniuses, probably because he can't raise a son to break the defense. This man's character is very interesting, so I won't reveal more and let you guys find it in the article for yourselves. I know, there must be some people who can't read the long list of words above (more than 1053 words can't be read, is it because I don't work hard enough?) So I will briefly say it at the end, and I recommend reading it (boys, don't scare yourself→↗scare→↘yourself→~↘, no cp) The characters are very distinct, and the whole book is very entertaining. I feel so good when I take this CP. The world view is much better than some nonsensical ones. The twists in the article are not so blunt. I recommend that every stinky babe should come in and read it.

It's super good-looking, and the protagonist is the kind of protagonist who has a very juvenile feel, just like watching a hot-blooded juvenile manga. The main characters get along very well. Currently, there is a knight who is becoming more and more unruly, a tsundere young man who easily gets angry, a particularly cute foodie dragon, and a boyish protagonist who we like to tease and has a slightly playful personality. All in all, it is very cute and the setting is also very good. There are not many flaws in the plot. There are a lot of foreshadowings laid so far, and everyone's image is very distinct. Looking forward to the follow-up and main story. I feel that this book is considered a first-class work on Tomato. The author will update soon. Expect! Ah, yes, in this game there is an adoptive father who cannot take care of children but loves them very much (?). The shadow who first called him father and then brother. (Narcissus and orthopedics are good. Bushi) The knight of justice who was "blackened" by the protagonist. (Chen Xi, you are really a bad person.) In short, there are all kinds of good things. It can be used for family, friendship, and love (this enclosure is cute). All delicious. I! Overtake! Like! In short, I haven't seen such a boyish protagonist in a long time. Who knows! That kind of vitality and high-spiritedness. Great, it's a teenage protagonist, we can be saved! All in all, highly recommended. Crazy recommended. By the way, crazy reminder. The author must not be a eunuch, oh oh oh, if you are fooled, I will never let you go in this life! (Don't make me kneel down to beg you.) Quick fire! Quick fire! Quick fire!

I didn't expect it to be so high before watching it, and I tied it in one go^^ The first is the character creation. The author's control over the character creation is very amazing. Each character has its own shining point, is lifelike and has its own uniqueness. It's like putting a group of people in a room. What actions and words each person will make will appear in their mind even if they don't have to write it down. The plot arrangement is also very compact and will not make people feel bored. The relationship between the Destiny's Children and the protagonist was also very, very well grasped. It made me smash my ten bowls... It didn't feel deliberate at all, everything developed naturally. Whether it was friendship, family or the cp that I secretly knocked on, it was very, very delicious🥲. Kavis's character building has gradually become three-dimensional from the young age at the beginning. Maybe he does not have the gentleman-like qualities of Chen Xi and is not as strong as his adoptive father, but he has been trying to find a way to live well, and he does not regard the children of destiny as tools to use. He is really praised. When he treats Xiaoying later, even if he is not accustomed to his own identity, he still shows the gentle side of his character. What a good baby. I would like to make a request. I hope that these children of destiny can continue to shine on their own paths in the future, and not suddenly become the protagonist's vassal, because every baby is a good baby, and the characteristics of the protagonist can really be seen in them, making people feel that even without the halo of the protagonist, they are still the protagonists of their own lives. Next, I will praise these wonderful babies, Destiny's Child! Chen Xi's appearance as a gentleman at the beginning is really fun. I have a very fond impression of this kind of character. I was very moved to see Chen Xi change a lot for Kavis. I was really panicked when I saw it in black and white. I hope he can have a good ending [I almost cried] Baby Caron was indeed uncomfortable to watch when he first appeared, but please give our baby some patience. He is really a good child, and his interaction with Cavisi is so cute. Cavisi should hug him more. I hope this poor baby will have a good ending! ! Needless to say, our good daughter, daddy's love for you is not in vain, you are such a good daughter! ! ! And I hope that my adoptive father's misunderstanding can be resolved, and at least let him know how hurtful he said before! This cannot be blamed on our baby Kavis, please apologize to me and get back together🥺 The Destiny's Children around me are very cute. I hope to see a lot of friendly interactions with Kavis＾＾ There is another question, I am really curious whether the author is a man or a woman [almost crying]

The protagonist is very cute and cute. It's the first time I have seen so many grandmothers in a male video book (although I have to admit that they are really good...). The warm and harmonious but frantic daily life has a strong sense of life and looks warm😋The only elegant aristocrat who is often remembered is a fried puppy. Fugal is indeed a reliable friend. The gentle and attentive Napoleon Morning Meow, a naturally stupid but smart cat with long reflexes at first, was eventually led to a path of no return by someone. Kroll, who is greedy but loyal to his master, has a little cotton-padded jacket as his granddaughter. The black-haired, black-eyed Cthulhu cat is the best. As an alien soul, I heard someone's joke when I first arrived in this world. I was frightened for more than ten years. Kavis did not have the aura of the protagonist but still followed the protagonist's footsteps. It was so miserable for the beauty who was very talented in pinching faces. He knew nothing about raising cubs but was inexplicably confident in himself. On the surface, Ai didn't care but silently looked at the rape. The two fathers and sons couldn't come up with all kinds of lame excuses to give him a gift. Zaza Huhu, the poisonous child who only thinks about his brother, was happy and excited for a long time because of his brother's recognition and being named, and other things that Cavill didn't seem to think about. (Carolen: He has become the shape of his brother...) The other supporting characters are also very cute and talkative. Overall, they are all good and cute babies 🥺

This is one of the few western fantasy-themed novels in Tomato! ! The pig's trotters character really poked at me, and the character traits caught my attention. [Attention] Meow Meow Meow, I felt like I was watching a Korean comic... I haven't seen the heroine for the time being. I was very relieved. [I almost cried] The plot is also very passionate. There is no such classic bloody villain scene [eating melon], the use of the brain is just right for me 👉👈 very reassuring, no need to worry about overusing the brain [Adoration] Everything is good, the only drawback is that there is too little [crying] wuwuwuwuwu [almost crying]

It's beautiful. I especially like the interaction between the protagonist and others, especially his adoptive father. It has a unique taste. It tastes like coffee with chili powder. It not only has the mellowness and fragrance of coffee, but also contains the surprise and excitement of chili. It makes my heart happy and makes my life endless.

Does the author want my long review? [Laughs] Overall, it's very, very good. I haven't seen such a smooth and non-toxic article for a long time. There is no delay in the whole process. The plot is very reasonable. The early arrangement and the later stage explain why and why, such as why Chen Xi grew up with the protagonist, the source of the protagonist's ability and the strength of the protagonist's adoptive father. , But I feel that one bad thing is that the protagonist is similar to the Creation of the Abyss. His sacrificial weapon has not been used for a long time, and he has no sense of existence. The good point of the plot is that the strength of the protagonist group is online, and the IQ is also there. There is no male part, and it is very easy to fight. Author, why don't you just create a double male protagonist [laughs] Also One problem is that the protagonist's group improves their strength too slowly. That realm is really too slow. Shouldn't the blood of the demon god improve at the same speed as the dragon clan? Also, the protagonist has read so many books, why are there still so few tricks? Moreover, the system has no sense of existence. It is good or bad, and the help of time travel is not that big. Characteristics, because he has too few functions and cannot communicate, I think it can strengthen the system and the presence of the abyss, and I think the white mask at the back does not refer to the mask of God, so God is the protagonist, why can't the protagonist master this weirdness? Generally speaking, good reviews, smooth and no heroine, very annoying, IQ is online throughout the whole process, great Updates have been stopped. Forget the new ones. Why can't I post on another platform?

The plot feels great! Just like reading a Western fantasy comic, you can imagine it just by following the author's description! However, I feel that there is still a small problem... That is, I didn't understand the entry point of Kavis's first dungeon. Why did they enter the dungeon inexplicably, and it happened to be only Kavis's class that suffered. It's really strange [face covering] [face covering] So I hope this problem can be fixed later, otherwise it will feel like an impression. In the end, this book is really great! I like Ai Ba and Xiao Long in it the most. One is silently focused on beating up the bully of his son, and the other changes with the change of Carl's camp in the timeline, following each other like a shadow. Zundu, I like it so much. Keep up the good work, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

What a pity, the first time I raised Wen, I lost Wen Yang [crying][crying][crying] The front part is very interesting, and the subject matter is also very novel. The father who is both stable and crazy, the children of various fortunes, the savior's charming white knight, the passionate young aristocratic young man, the protagonist of Long Aotian's panel... It is really a very good group portrait. And I really like the card drawing, it is full of special effects, and I really like the cheats that have a source and are not just written on the brain. There are many hints about the origin of the cheats in the previous chapters, which makes people feel reassured and excited. Especially the teleportation result that can't be stopped, it's really fun to keep falling down. It's really like a logical trap that I've imagined before. I really love it. It has a sense of resonance in my mind, and it hits Simba [Adoration]

I was attracted by the introduction, and after reading it for a while I thought it was quite interesting. I blindly guessed that the reason why the Sons of Luck turned black was because the protagonist was injured or escaped, etc. Anyway, I am looking forward to it [laughs] Come on, author!

It's really beautiful! ! ! It's heartwarming and funny without sacrificing intelligence. I love this kind of passionate group portrait. Everyone has their own shining point. Everyone's interaction with the protagonist has their own unique character charm, but also has a unified warmth! Here's another pure enjoyment version to eat CP: Chen Xi (firm-innocent-knight): Under the shining stars, you are my only destiny Fugal (arrogant-irritable-young master): Although you always cheat me, I never thought of leaving you. Caroln (loyal-disorder-exclusive younger brother): My brother is the best in the world! ! ! Current main characters: Aiweike (adoptive father): What should I do if my child is rebellious? Kroll (Xiaolong): Kavis is really great!

It's a good-looking book. The writing is good, the subject matter is novel, the plot is okay, there are no surprises, and the growth line of the protagonist group is also well written. It's a pity that I accidentally killed the book. I wish the author's future books will be popular, although it is indeed a pity.

Very nice! I was really deceived by its name at first. I felt that the name was a bit earthy and boyish, but it was actually a very tasty western fantasy group portrait. I personally felt that it was a pleasant novel. Regardless of what others think, I enjoyed it anyway. The friendship between the three people was really cute, and of course the shocked Omode (maybe I made a typo, but I forgot how to write it, so let's leave it at that). The protagonist and his adoptive father, who wants to be a father at the age of 16, are even more delicious. There is also the greedy baby dragon Kroll, this one is really the cutest of the cutest, the cutest of the cute! ! ! So cute little red dragon. Meow meow meow meow meow meow meow. How could there be such a cute little dragon? The character of this protagonist is also very good. I can't describe it very well, but I feel very comfortable watching it... The world view may not be said to be particularly stunning, but it can also be said to be wonderful. Anyway, it is very good-looking.

Add a good review, Xifan, there are around Kavis 1. A sunny and cheerful standard hot-blooded comic with the protagonist of the Holy Light series 2. The arrogant and easy-to-explode people separated and occupied the high ground of IQ and gathered together to become the second generation of rich people. 3. The big-eating king's silly and die-hard friend's life story remains a mystery, the fire dragon companion 4. A male mother who is powerful and has a profound background but loves to pretend to be a family drinker. More to be unlocked, multiple flavors to choose from, go!

It was such a good book, but I was sad to stop following it. It was obviously really good, and I also wanted to see Carolyn reconcile with the protagonist. I hope the author will continue writing it! I have been waiting for you too! 😭😭😭

The continuity of the plot is very good, the story is novel, the relationship between the protagonist and other characters is smooth and natural, the world structure is complete, the main copy is not delayed, the foreshadowing is filled in, it is relaxed when it should be relaxed, and it is dark when it should be dark. Top grade

More soon, faster, God knows how I feel when I'm stuck on the most exciting part and can't look down ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ But this book is really good to read. Whether it is the friendship between Kavis and the Son of Destiny or the love for his younger brother, it shows that he is a person with affection and intention. Not only the protagonist, but also the main characters are very well portrayed and have flesh and blood. It is rare for me to see the characters. The novel is developed so quickly, and the plot is foreshadowed, the plot is tight, and a lot of doubts are set up, making you want to keep reading. I love it so much [adoration][adoration][adoration][send heart][send heart][send heart]٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It looks great, I love watching it! ! Author, we like you, we like you! 🥰With a writing talent like yours, you will succeed in whatever you do! [Blowing kiss] The details of this book are well laid out, and the plot is unique and unconventional (although I have read countless Western fantasy books, this book suddenly stood out and became my favorite [laughing]). And unlike many other flat character descriptions in Tomato, the description of this book makes me feel that the protagonists are real and have independent thinking rather than being limited to a certain personality label ([blowing kiss]) Including the description of the magical world, the writing style is really like this 👍🏻 It can really take you into this fantasy world and travel. I can feel that the author has a conception rather than a thought. Wherever you write, it feels really good when you recycle things that you thought were useless and foreshadowing later. It's as refreshing as drinking the first sip of ice cola in the summer. It's exciting👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 Oops, I really don't know how to praise it, but the author's writing is really great. I will be sad if anyone misses it. I was looking for just such a book in Tomato! ! [Crazy]

This father-son relationship is great, I really like their interaction. Aiweike's dank manly scent fills my stomach immediately. This manly scent is really good! ! ! ! ! ! The author, I want to see more father-son interactions, the author! ! ! ! ! My friend who is seriously ill in bed said that his biggest wish in his life is to see the author have a day of breaking news. How can I live without you for such a beautiful article? Why are these days of chasing updates so painful? Author, I really want to gain weight and be bored again——

My favorite Western fantasy novel! I will definitely chase it to the end! ! ! I really like the loving interaction between Kavis and Avic. You two, father and son, really had misunderstandings in the past. Fortunately, you have a big mouth in the back. Please reconcile! ! ! I really can't get enough of the friendly interactions between Chenxi, Fergal and Kavis and their adventures! Kroll, the little dragon, is also cute and loyal to Kavis. I hope your story will have a happy ending [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's good to watch. Kavis is a protagonist I like very much. He makes me feel sorry for Happy. I feel sorry for his pain along the way. Happy's relationship with the fathers of his friends in the early and middle stages. Along the way, Kaka was really tired, especially in the early stage when he didn't talk to his father. These two people choked me to death. They didn't say anything, and the calamity of death was always on Ka's heart. Next, grandma will speak. Xiaoka, you are really cute! ! Whether it's with Chen Xi, Fugal or Aiweike, it smells so good, I can't imagine how many times Haitang Xiaoka will be chewed😋Succubus and Pippi Cow Cat are here😋 Be gentle and careful, and gradually learn how to grow crookedly from Xiaoka, and fall in love with Xiaoka. It's delicious! An old enemy is an old enemy. An old enemy cannot become a wife~ The arrogant loyal dog and the kitten squirt at each other, fall in love and kill each other/. Dark control freak, protective and controlling, this father-son team is great! The father-son team is not serious about sadomasochism and the déjà vu of the male and female protagonists, but fortunately it is serious about it, it's delicious! 😋 Caroln, you really love Carvis! My brother is my wife😋😋 Finally, I hope there can be a parallel world where Xiaoka, Chen Xi, Fergal, Ivic, Caroln, the cute little dragon Kroll and other good people can live happily and without burdens! None of those bad things! Fortunately, after Xiao Ka becomes a god in the end, Ai Daddy and Xi Xizi can both come back. Otherwise, these two real rats cannot be saved. I can't imagine how sad Xiao Ka would be.

This article is so satisfying to me. I read more than two hundred chapters in one day. It's not enough. Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh. The small group of three is simply awesome. I'm curious if there will be new people joining in the future. I'm really looking forward to watching them kill each other in the competition. Is there any manuscript saved by the author for me to climb in and take a look at? The setting of the adoptive father is also dancing on my XP. It smells like a dank male ghost, and his identity is really suitable for writing a slap-in-the-face plot. I am a local dog and I want to see it. I want to see him supporting Kavis. The author's writing is also very good, the plot is compact, and there are a lot of laughs. I couldn't hold back my laughter so late at night that my stomach hurt. I regretted why I didn't gain weight and read it again. Waiting eagerly for updates every day is a kind of torture [crying] [crying]

It's actually a very cute book, and the writing is also very good. Everyone is cute, the friendship line is delicious, the family line is also delicious, and the daily life is generally very happy and cute. Every now and then, I can make my stomach hurt from laughing while watching it. The main plot is actually progressing steadily. Sometimes, I really feel like I am watching a happy daily show! But it's a pity that books have been eaten to death [I'm about to cry] But at the end of the book, the outline given by the author is actually very interesting, and it can be regarded as the end. I wish my wife the best of luck in writing it three times.

This book is really good. I couldn't finish it halfway through. I wanted to look for something similar, but I couldn't find it. I've been looking for Western Fantasy for a long time. This book is still my favorite. I like not only the plot, but also the characters. , Even the name of the protagonist, I think it is the one that best suits my taste among the dozen or so western fantasy books I have found. I now hope that the author can finish this one and then open another western fantasy book. I really like the author's writing style, so I will stock it up for a while. I originally wanted to stock up on books for a while, but I didn't expect that I stopped using Tomato for a while. When I logged on to Tomato again, it was the news that the book had stopped updating. In fact, if I had waited a little longer, I could have personally seen the news about the book being stopped, because when I looked at it, it had already updated more than 440 books. Probably, this book is really my current book. This is my favorite Western fantasy novel so far, and it is also my enlightenment in reading Western fantasy novels. My current evaluation is still the same as before. No matter the protagonist's character, skills or other things, they all hit my mark. It is an article that stands on my XP. Now I wish the author a little happiness, at least it will reduce the trouble of updating the article.

Nice! ! ! Sure enough, no CP or anything is the best! ! !

Author, I really love you. Don't stop working. (When are five pictures a day? Bushi) Generally speaking, the character creation is very vivid and three-dimensional, very individual, and reasoning, but not very depressing. Instead, it is a bit funny. I like it very much. Love you, meow meow meow. A very lovely author, but the statistics are really bleak. I would like to recommend it more, but I find that there are very few people who need novels with this theme, so I can only say that I just let it happen. I really like the friends, relatives, and stories surrounding the protagonist. The description is very fresh and individual, fascinating, and there is no sense of repetition or fatigue. This novel is very sticky. After reading it, I can't get out of it. It also feels very immersive! I just want to let the protagonist take some more rest recently so that he can watch daily life (I'm getting older and can't stand the excitement anymore, so I'm bushi) The author is also very active, and the replies are very active (alive!) Which makes it very interactive. I love it! I would like to thank the author for his efforts and love you [love]! Actually, I have thought about whether I could publish a physical book if it didn't end badly. I will be the first one to buy it (Bite the Author). It is a magic and fantasy novel worth reading. But it feels a bit out of touch, the connection is weird, and the protagonist's personality is not fully written yet (that is, the human society sometimes pops up suddenly at the back). He is such a versatile protagonist (he can fight ghosts at the top and enter the kitchen at the bottom. I mean it can be a little broken sometimes, but I feel that the human society is not consistent, so it depends on the author). Everyone has a distinct personality and can grow. This is very worthy of praise, and there is no confusion at all. The writing is still very smooth when describing some storylines. Sometimes the ghosts are a bit monotonous (just a small part, that's okay). Although there are many problems, they are just small flaws. You can pay more attention to them. It's just a suggestion. Then I'll be fine. Look at my bad habit. I always like to give suggestions in the star shooting. I'll leave a message in the circle later in the plot.