Type-Moon: Starting with Witch on the Holy Night

Surprisingly not bad, mainly because there are a lot of fate fans inside and outside the site, but there are really few in Demon Night, and even less well-written ones. The few original characters that have appeared so far are basically in line with the original design, and the male protagonist is also very lovable, and he is also a male protagonist with Youzhu's background. Youzhu Chef is super satisfied () It's super comfortable to watch. Come on, the author, Bao will follow up [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

Why is it gone? Grooved tomatoes, when I entered the software, I saw that the sky was falling 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 Hope to win the Easter match

How should I put it, the content of the book is quite good, and it can be seen that the author has polished it. But the writing style is a bit unsatisfactory, of course, not in terms of words and sentences, but in terms of the author's psychological descriptions. It could be a little less, and some more descriptions of the environment and actions. Too many psychological dramas make people tired, and sometimes they don't know what they are doing. And don't arrange too many characters that appear in a chapter. Readers may sometimes be confused about the content. This is Tomato. Most readers are reading in a hurry and don't have much time to chew on the words. Don't look down on us. Also, don't switch the perspective too much. As I said before, the reader will get tired. Add more sweetness about the protagonist and Shiki. After all, everyone only came in after reading the title and the ritual. The fact that Shiki has to read the tens of thousands of words of Demon Night before it is the turn of Shiki will dissuade many readers. If it were me, I would put the engagement letter in the first three chapters. This would give readers something to look forward to, knowing that after the Demon Night chapter is over, it will be Kong Jing's turn, and so many people will not be lost. The author can simplify it a bit, practice his word expression, and refine the text information. I hope the author can see my comment. I wish you better grades as you write, see you later!

Author, my author, why are you gone?

I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist?

Okay, pretty good-looking

Why is it gone? 😢 There were very few fans of Mo Ye, but now I don't have to watch it 😢

What's going on? Why is it gone?

Why did it happen all of a sudden?

It feels good, the pace can be faster