Eternal Immortal Realm

This book is still acceptable. It is not intellectually depressing and can be read by those who like a relaxing pace. However, there are also several problems. One is the title of the book. This type of book title is too traditional and obscure. It would be better to change it to one that has a direct gimmick. Second, the sense of anticipation in the early stage is relatively poor, and there is no golden finger to wait for. Third, the opening is weak, difficult to infect readers' emotions, and too bland. In addition, the second point does not have strong expectations, so it is difficult to retain readers. There are too many books now, and readers have no patience at all, and no one can remember the titles of the books, and fancy titles are meaningless.