HP: Lily's Dark-Haired Daughter

(Holding flowers) (Spinning) (Spinning) (Sliding) What a great write-up! Great, great! I was thinking before that why Petunia likes Lily so much but has such painful emotions towards Lily's children. Maybe they just lack an opportunity to become a family, but now Vivian has done it and they are very happy (language system collapses)

My eyes were almost swollen from crying... The Mary Sue I imagined: Tiantiantian In fact, the author wrote a Mary Sue: sad... QAQ It's very exciting and very exciting. It's really exciting from another perspective, but I suggest fans of Lion House and Harry Potter not to watch it...

This book is really beautifully written and tells the story from an unexpected angle. Lillian is Lillian, she is not the rumored "Harry Potter", nor is she the "Savior Who Lived". Moreover, the writing of the Malfoy family is also very good. They are pure-blood nobles, and their upbringing will not allow them to act like crazy people. From what the author writes, looking at the Weasley family from Malfoy's perspective, it is indeed difficult to comment. It is really sad to have a child and no money. From the perspective of onlookers, they are indeed crazy. They don't even know that the protagonist is suffering from hypothermia and is dying. The subsequent plot really made my breasts clear. If you have any misunderstandings, just tell me directly... It's really beautiful! ! ! It's just that the chapters are a bit short, so I beg the author to update it quickly! ! !

I felt really uncomfortable when I read it. Just watching it made me realize how annoying it is to not understand people. The author wrote it so well. Mom is hungry for food.

It is well written, but the content in the story chapters is repetitive, and the main plot is often stumbling, and there are also problems with the title. Sometimes Vivian is called Harry, and if I am not mistaken, Vivian should be the gender-changed Harry, right? So far, it seems that there should be no "Harry Potter" in this book, only Vivian Dursley, but because of this, there are many confusing places in the subsequent stories. For example, in the latest chapters, Vivian turns to talk to Hermione from the troll and calls her Harry. In my opinion, it is as awkward and strange as Vivian talking to Hermione but calling Harry's name. Apart from these details and problems, everything else is really good. The emotional delicateness and novel plot are all great plus points, so I look forward to the subsequent plot chapters! Anyway, come on, come on, come on! I believe you can write better content.

The angle of this fanfic is different from the previous ones and is very novel. It does not completely follow the original plot. It completes the background that is not shown in the original work according to the setting of the heroine. The story goes in a logical direction. I recommend it to fans who don't particularly like Gryffindor. The Gryffindor in this fanfic brings out and amplifies the shortcomings in the original work. The idea at the beginning is good, but it's difficult to write, and it's normal for the ending to suck.

Once again, the timeless pairing of heroes and beauties, knights and princesses! ! (′▽`ʃ♡ƪ) A taste of Japan

It's really sad that even the names are deliberately mistaken. Praise her for her bravery.

It looks great. I would like to ask if the author of this book is Xiao Long?

To judge objectively, the feeling of powerlessness and gloominess in the early stage is well written, but the middle part doesn't feel as good as the first part. The powerlessness and confusion feel like a little dodder. The later part feels better.

The emotional description is very delicate and the plot is very smooth. When will I be able to settle the accounts with Dumbledore? The Potter family's inheritance has not been paid yet.

It's really, really good. I'm really looking forward to Vivian's magical life and whether she can change the world in the future.

A different perspective, I think it fits the normal plot, it's nice to watch

I was really moved by the family scenes in it. It was all the author's fault that I had to hold back tears during class.

It's really good. It's a look at the HP world from another angle. In fact, when I read the original version, I always thought why the so-called holy pure-blood family seemed so stupid, especially Malfoy. It might be caused by the so-called hostile perspective. However, this book really writes the feeling of the nobility in a very flavorful way, and it is really worth reading. (Note⚠️: Well, it is not very friendly to Gryffindor and Dumbledore, so be careful)

Vivian is super cute. Although she is weak, she can bravely stand up to others for the one she loves, which is great!

A different perspective, super beautiful👀

6 Ah~ This is written 6 ah~

It's very interesting. The story of Harry Potter is written from different angles. The characters have very distinct personalities. Even the supporting characters have their own thoughts. [Like] [Like] [Like]

Super pretty! Fairy goods, fairy goods! After reading it, I clicked on the author to read something else, but unfortunately I only have this one at the moment!

It's very interesting, but there are always some mistakes in the characters' names. I hope the author can proofread the article when he has time. Sometimes I need to rely on context to figure out who this person's name is. Vivian is really cute. She is really growing up. She is a very sincere and cute little girl. And this is a rare HP story that does not rely on the protagonist's own efforts. The students of Hogwarts have made their own contributions in this, and it is not just adults who can make changes. Of course, because it is a fan, this book may not be suitable for people who like Ron, McGonagall, and Dumbledore. Because it is from Vivian's perspective, she is an ordinary little girl who grew up in the Muggle world and was happy. She had no yearning for Hogwarts at first, but because of the title of "The Boy Who Lived", she was pinned to be Harry Potter, the great savior. She was forced to separate from her family, but she was not Harry Potter, she was Vivian. So from the perspective of the protagonist, it's hard not to feel disgusted with the person who caused such a thing. I personally think it's quite reasonable. So the feeling of this writing style is that it belongs to the interpretation of the dark version of Hogwarts. If you like this kind of interpretation, this book is still worth reading.

It's really beautiful [Like] I actually cried when I saw it [Cry]

I read some comments saying that Vivian's later descriptions no longer become independent and become a spoiled wife, but she even becomes dependent on others. But as far as the few chapters I have read now, her background is insecure. The pain given by the name Harry as a child made her abandon the name and power. She longed for the love of her family so she willingly became Vivian. Some people commented that she did not lack love, but she did not lack love because she was Vivian Dursley. She was forced to leave her loving family and come to the magical world full of unknowns and even fears. Her heart should be extremely uneasy, and she might also have a little bit of rejection of magic. She desperately needs something that can give her a sense of security. Of course, this is what I see now, and I will talk about it later after I finish reading it...

I really like it, please give it more and don't abandon it [Adoration]

It's very, very beautiful. I haven't read a novel with such delicate emotions in a long time. Such a beautiful book! Why isn't it popular? ! !

I have only seen entering the school so far, and I can't help but come here to score. It's a very interesting perspective, looking at the magical world from an ordinary person's perspective. Although it is said to be Mary Suven, it is not unacceptable.

I cried so much at night

Are my tears free of charge?

Super pretty Woohoo, the plot is really super delicate.

Vivian, good baby