Harry Potter: Lily's Dark-Haired Daughter

(Holding flowers) (Spinning) (Spinning) (Sliding) What a great write-up! Great, great! I was thinking before that why Petunia likes Lily so much but has such painful emotions towards Lily's children. Maybe they just lack an opportunity to become a family, but now Vivian has done it and they are very happy (language system collapses)

My eyes were almost swollen from crying... The Mary Sue I imagined: Tiantiantian In fact, the author wrote a Mary Sue: sad... QAQ It's very exciting and very exciting. It's really exciting from another perspective, but I suggest fans of Lion House and Harry Potter not to watch it...

This book is really beautifully written and tells the story from an unexpected angle. Lillian is Lillian, she is not the rumored "Harry Potter", nor is she the "Savior Who Lived". Moreover, the writing of the Malfoy family is also very good. They are pure-blood nobles, and their upbringing will not allow them to act like crazy people. From what the author writes, looking at the Weasley family from Malfoy's perspective, it is indeed difficult to comment. It is really sad to have a child and no money. From the perspective of onlookers, they are indeed crazy. They don't even know that the protagonist is suffering from hypothermia and is dying. The subsequent plot really made my breasts clear. If you have any misunderstandings, just tell me directly... It's really beautiful! ! ! It's just that the chapters are a bit short, so I beg the author to update it quickly! ! !

I felt really uncomfortable when I read it. Just watching it made me realize how annoying it is to not understand people. The author wrote it so well. Mom is hungry for food.

It is well written, but the content in the story chapters is repetitive, and the main plot is often stumbling, and there are also problems with the title. Sometimes Vivian is called Harry, and if I am not mistaken, Vivian should be the gender-changed Harry, right? So far, it seems that there should be no "Harry Potter" in this book, only Vivian Dursley, but because of this, there are many confusing places in the subsequent stories. For example, in the latest chapters, Vivian turns to talk to Hermione from the troll and calls her Harry. In my opinion, it is as awkward and strange as Vivian talking to Hermione but calling Harry's name. Apart from these details and problems, everything else is really good. The emotional delicateness and novel plot are all great plus points, so I look forward to the subsequent plot chapters! Anyway, come on, come on, come on! I believe you can write better content.

The angle of this fanfic is different from the previous ones and is very novel. It does not completely follow the original plot. It completes the background that is not shown in the original work according to the setting of the heroine. The story goes in a logical direction. I recommend it to fans who don't particularly like Gryffindor. The Gryffindor in this fanfic brings out and amplifies the shortcomings in the original work. The idea at the beginning is good, but it's difficult to write, and it's normal for the ending to suck.

Once again, the timeless pairing of heroes and beauties, knights and princesses! ! (′▽`ʃ♡ƪ) A taste of Japan

It's really sad that even the names are deliberately mistaken. Praise her for her bravery.

To judge objectively, the feeling of powerlessness and gloominess in the early stage is well written, but the middle part doesn't feel as good as the first part. The powerlessness and confusion feel like a little dodder. The later part feels better.

It looks great. I would like to ask if the author of this book is Xiao Long?