After Transmigrating, I Picked Up a General as My Husband

It's okay, but there are some things I want to say 🤦 - Food: In the early stage, I almost wrote about food, and I also wrote about how to cook it in detail 🤦 -Age: At the beginning, the author set the age of the heroine to be 14 years old, and then after a few chapters, it became 12 years old. After reading a review, someone asked the author and said that it was changed to 12 years old. Maybe it was not changed earlier, but after reading the whole article, I just want to say that only a small part is 12 years old. Later, it was said that the age of 15 years old is equivalent to writing according to 14, and finally said that they will get married at 18 in two years. So except for that part, everything else was written according to my 4. -The relationship between the male and female protagonists: Except for the small part where the male and female protagonists intersect when they first meet, there is basically no role for the male protagonist in the entire article. I will occasionally jump to the northwest to talk about what is wrong with the male protagonist and what he is doing. There are 229 chapters in total, more than 20 chapters of the first meeting and then the last chapter 209. The heroine went to the northwest and said they met again, and then they said they were together in chapter 223. In the last chapter 229 they got married. - Marriage: The last chapter about marriage only includes the male protagonist going to the female protagonist's house to pick up the bride, and then going to the capital to hold a wedding ceremony. It makes me feel like the wedding is half done 🤦 It's better to finish writing the scene in the capital and then finish it [awkward laugh] -Then there is a part where it is said that Lan Lan will be accepted as an apprentice to cook. I personally don't like this kind of apprentice plot, but when the heroine went to the northwest and came back, she didn't mention Lan Lan, so she didn't fill the gap... -"Chaochao nodded and waited until everyone left. Chaochao shook his head and smiled!" In the early stage, I felt that the word "Chaochao" was very common. For example, there were two in this short paragraph 🤦 -Then when the heroine accompanied her eldest brother to take the exam in the capital, the eldest brother's family forgot the heroine's birthday. He only remembered it after the heroine mentioned it when he came back. It felt like the heroine didn't value him as much as the heroine (personal feeling) -In the end, only the eldest brother of the heroine got married. The other brothers and sisters didn't get married, and they didn't write a CP. -To be honest, it feels like the male protagonist has more scenes than any of the supporting characters! Especially Nangong Feng's one. The heroine in the middle came to write about him and his wife in the capital. I didn't like this part very much. I only liked watching the hero and heroine. - Han Linglong: She didn't like it very much if she insisted on following the heroine to the northwest. Is this setting up to go to the northwest to meet Xie while having fun with her family? [Awkward laugh] -Then the heroine insists on going to the northwest just to meet the hero again...🤦 -There is also a scene at the end where the heroine, the hero, and some other people go to see the oil factory, and then a worker accidentally throws a pile of wood at the heroine. At this time, the heroine's legs are filled with lead and she cannot move 🤦. Then the hero heroically saves the beauty and blocks the heroine, and hits her back. I want to say, doesn't the male protagonist have martial arts skills, so he must be smashed? He can't hold the female protagonist and move away, and still stay there and get smashed [awkward laugh] I may write this to warm up the relationship between the male and female protagonist 🤦 -Leading the whole village to make money, the heroine will directly confront anyone who gossips or causes trouble. This is not bad... If you don't care about these details, you can still take a look😌

The family atmosphere is super good, and most of them are writing about various foods and businesses. It's really good for the family to understand each other, tolerate each other, and have discussions... The relationship was only confirmed in the last few chapters, and then the marriage was completed. It was very rushed.

It's very nice, especially it doesn't have any cliche or fancy relatives, it's very nice. Looking forward to better works from the author. 👍👍👍👍

Everything is fine, but it ends too quickly... Without too many words to decorate, giving the highest score is the highest evaluation of this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It's very heartwarming, not super cool, but the ending of the male and female protagonists is a bit too fast.

It's so beautiful and the plot is very entertaining

I finally finished it after two days of watching it. It's not bad! It's just that the ending was too hasty. It would be better if the ending was more perfect,

Very good, worth recommending

No extra story? I want to see life after marriage. 😄

It's so good, I didn't even skip a chapter.