Lord of Star Wars

Good-looking and good-looking, not too poisonous or too big, neither poking nor poking Okay, let's just say it's still a bit confusing. I've read Chapter 130, and it's all about battles, but! ! Just those words over and over again, the plot is not very ups and downs, to be honest, it is still a bit tiring to watch.

The characters in this book are very delicate, describing the protagonist's hardships and hardships as he climbs up from the grassroots level, as well as his extraordinary courage. This is how the protagonist walks out of a planet and into the universe step by step.

It can be seen that the experienced author relies on the atmosphere to render it, and even though the process of the novice village is foreshadowing, it is not as meaningless as a bunch of studio articles. It's still the same old problem, the fun bits are like castles in the air, you can't go up or down. Taking advantage of the protagonist's status to rise to the new village as a big pacing is too slow, just like working hard to build the foundation. Tasteless

I have read Attila and Mr. Huo successively, and the quality of the works is guaranteed. However, it seems that the degree of reference to Warhammer is too high, and it may be included in the ranks of Warhammer fan fiction in the future. You can see it from the Chaos Death God, Void Shield, psionic energy and the like. If you want to be more distinctive and achieve the same results as the previous work, you may need to change the similarity with Warhammer equipment later. At present, it seems that the new work still has many shortcomings. At the same time, the technological battle scenes need to be more specific. The pictures of the previous one will be slightly insufficient. I think we can refer to Storm of Eden and Red Torrent in the future. These two movies are in the science fiction genre, with a large world view and detailed descriptions of equipment [laughs][laughs]

Give full stars to the new book Recommended, the author's plot and writing are great Currently, the protagonist, Goldfinger, kills opponents to gain enemy experience. He mainly follows the war route, interspersed with company promotion lines. Currently, the fun and upgrades are very intensive, but there is no private line to fight all the time. I am looking forward to the kind of base bar, you know? Disadvantages: It's a bit short and feels weak in the later stages. This kind of novel is afraid of using the same routine over and over again.

It's much better than other mecha books. At least the humanoid design of this book is well-founded, and it won't make my eyes black like other books.

It's a very beautiful book. You just have to keep reading it without breaking. Once you break it, you won't feel the same when you read it again. So can the author make more updates?

It's good to watch. Originally I didn't like this kind of genre. It always felt like a group drama, but I still watched the latest one. It's not a drama without a female protagonist. It's very good. Without a female protagonist, it looks like a robot.

The protagonist of this book, Li Xin, is quite good. I saw him grow up and train slowly from a young man who didn't know anything about mecha soldiers, and learned how to fight. He has the fighting gene hidden in his bones. He is very combative, and sometimes he is afraid of death. He also understands some worldly ways, and has experienced many battlefields. From land to space until now, I have watched it, and it is quite enjoyable. Although there are sometimes some things interspersed, I think it is okay. Mainly because I like to watch the growth of the protagonist. I feel that this step-by-step growth is very reasonable. There is not much description of the people around me, but it is very good, and the interpersonal relationships are also handled very well. I hope that the author can write more exciting things in the future. This book has great potential, and the world view is also very big to be honest. After all, it is the universe. I hope that we can have a good growth experience like Li Xin and Mr. Huo in another book.

This is the best mecha + psionic (fantasy) + warhammer I've found on Tomato so far. It has very few poison points and the characters have some brains. It's just that the content is a bit watery. The author deliberately describes certain contents in a very detailed way. I don't know whether he is serious or just watery. I hope the author can also classify the following battleships into levels (t1-t2...) And types [shuttle] (wingman) - [frigate] - [destroyer] - [cruiser] (light and heavy and battle cruiser) - [battleship] - [meteor ship] - [star ship] - [star battleship] - [nebula ship] (for reference only). There are also aircraft carriers, space fortresses, planetary fortresses, etc. (Refer to the game: Far Planet and Stars). I hope the author can refer to the idea of ​​"My Battleship Can be Upgraded" (this work is very creative, but the plot is too watery. If you want to watch it, you can only watch it on Feilu, which requires a fee, which is a bit expensive) and leave the power to reliable people to develop on their own. The male protagonist can independently help and secretly develop and explore alone (good for expansion). In the later stage, he will be almost invincible. Then, every dozens of chapters, take stock of the male protagonist's current strength and gains, etc. (Very important). I am a long-time interstellar, mecha, and battleship fan, and have also played Warhammer 1 to 3. I hope the author can live up to expectations, keep the word count short, and not get lost. The highlights of this type of novel are mainly ① the development of forces, ② adventure experiences, and ③ the portrayal of characters, ④ the experiences and lives of minor characters or main characters in different forces (can be made into extras), ⑤ the changes in the protagonist's character image (vision and style) Bureau, etc.), An appropriate blockbuster among the same level, not showing too much strength, staying cautious, ⑥ the search for a tripod-level crew, ⑦ a clear combat power system (very important) and ⑧ an unobtrusive plot. I hope the author will continue to work hard, maintain his status, and rush to the top ten of the overall list! The post is a bit hasty, mainly because there is no comparison, and I really can't find any other better Warhammer articles. I'm sorry, it's not a forced lick, but I can't find a substitute. If we really want to talk about the writing and story, it would be 8.5 At most, but without a substitute I can only give it a little higher. As for the reason, friends who are experts will know. 🤕🤕🤕

How to say it? From my current perspective, this book describes many details more delicately and the transitions are smoother than the previous one by Mr. Huo. In terms of characters, the depiction of the protagonist Li Xin is also clearer than that of Mr. Huo, and the depictions of other characters such as Jiang Lou are also more vivid. The details of the fighting are also worthy of praise. They are more perfect than those written by Mr. Huo in the previous book. The author must have worked hard on this. Then there is the emotional aspect of the protagonist. In the last book, Mr. Huo, I thought the emotional aspect would be over with a few hasty strokes, but in the end, Senior An's description also brought it to an end. I hope the author can be more perfect this time, and there is no need to go into too much detail on other aspects. Come on, author!

As a loyal 40k fan, I think the content of this novel is still very exciting. Cruelty, bloodshed, sacrifice, nobility, loyalty, and honor are all shown. You can say I enjoyed it. It's a pity that if the author could avoid the harem or have less emotional entanglements with girls, it would be perfect. [Cover face]

Next, please watch the interstellar overlord Nicholas-Lee's journey from humble beginnings to legend. His motto in life is that there is no choice but to succeed. [Sinister smile]

Recommended, highly recommended, a rare war science fiction novel. Looking forward to adapting it into comics, animations, TV series, and movies in the future.

It's a very good book. The writing style still has room for improvement. It's a cool book but the plot is reasonable. The characters' IQs are online. The author has enough knowledge about armaments. The entire background setting can reasonably combine technology and spiritual energy. (Chapter 355 remains) Let's see what the author wants to write next~

I finished another book. It was okay in the early stage. A poor boy with no background was possessed by time travel. From then on, he put on a golden finger and began to rise. The environment is still the same as reality, with the vampire class claiming to be righteous, making things difficult for every untouchable and plotting against every untouchable. Every time the pig's trotters seem to be plotted and military merit is taken away, a greater opportunity comes to him by mistake. When the pig's trotters were pushed to stand alone and were sent to more than two hundred years ago by the evil god, the real climax came. The pig's trotters were out of control, and their power grew as strong as a balloon. Until the best in the world. If you like watching mecha battles, the good news of space battleship battles is here. The whole book is quite enjoyable, and the pig's feet are basically not abused. The descriptions of technology are also more down-to-earth and believable. The whole book is basically perfect.

Come on, old author. Guaranteed, worth a look

It's too little, too little. I finished reading it in one go. I just saw Journey is the Stars and the Sea and it's gone. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, who taught me to break the chapters. I can't even explain the hundreds of chapters that follow. How is this going to work? Overall, it's pretty good, but I don't know if the interstellar battle can be written in the future. The first 400 chapters are all ground battles, maybe for the sake of writing. The space storm outside the planet has limited the battle to the atmosphere. Satellites are completely unusable. Many means of modern warfare are limited. It is a bit like a parallel mecha world. It has not developed into outer space and has developed into a black technology world with mecha psykers. The protagonist is a transborn child, and his sense of belonging can only be described as that of a human being. He can be said to be a "common man". He is relatively vivid, not too poisonous, and is handled well in a small way. There are also details about human nature and worldliness [cover face] [cover face] I have to ask for those pictures "I want to make progress so much". They look very good and have a full sense of reality. The battle is also well written, the mecha is dipped in beans, it's fun The original book was written with the intention of giving it a try, but unexpectedly it also gave me a surprise. I don't know about other people. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, but I was worried about whether I could grasp the follow-up. The author will update soon [punch out]

A very nice interstellar novel, the novel is fast-paced and does not drag on. There are no bugs in the plot. The male protagonist has three wives, but he cannot be called the female protagonist, because this novel does not have many chapters about love or entanglements with women, and these three wives have no sense of existence. The protagonist is not a Madonna, but she is not as ruthless as Dark Wen. She is a very sensible and affectionate person, and the author has portrayed her well. It deserves five-star praise, and the author keeps up the good work. [Top post]

I just started reading it and the plot was very smooth. I have read another book by the author and this one is not bad either. I will add one more if I continue to read [Read carefully]

Pretty good. It would be great if I could encounter this book again when it is finished. It's hard to catch up now, even though the author is considered prolific. In addition, I would like to recommend novels with similar themes and styles [smile] It is best to order innocent heroines who are not ambiguous [smile] It doesn't matter if they are not innocent [smile] Thank you [like]

Stars + Warhammer world view, science fiction with reality, it is considered a good article on Tomato.

First of all, this power setting is quite interesting. It is different from the others I have seen. It also adds the concept of chaos. This is the first time I have seen this. This is still a mecha story. Let's continue to read the future content.

The battle descriptions are very detailed, and the daily character descriptions and dialogues are also very interesting. The plot recommendations are neither slow nor fast, just the right speed. I like it very much.

So far, it looks pretty good, and it's a good read. The plot is also very good, not empty and passionate. Grain and grass Do you finally want a god? We mortals cannot understand and do not want to accept it. Abandoned

As an old bookworm who has read hundreds of books, this one should rank in the top ten. The plot, outline, and character descriptions are all good. Compared with the author's previous book, this book's description of the characters' emotions is obviously much more delicate. I rarely read mecha science fiction novels because I was stuck with the previous one. I finished the 400 chapters in less than a week. It was a great pleasure to read, but unfortunately I still haven't read enough. I'll give it a try before reading again.

The writing is very good, the plot and combat arrangements are okay, it is quite exciting, keep it up, but the combat skills are a bit monotonous. Even if you learn other people's skills, they are still the same fighting skills. You can get more skills, various fighting skills, such as different fighting skills in different camps, different strengths and abilities for the protagonists, etc.

To be honest, the early stage was pretty good and it was a step-by-step process, but in the middle and later stages, I felt a little bit indescribable. First of all, from a plot perspective, its setting is novel and full of imagination, building a grand and fascinating world of cosmic war. The story line has ups and downs, full of exciting battles and unexpected turns, which can keep readers interested in reading. However, the pace of some plots is a bit hasty, and some key plots are not handled delicately enough. In terms of characterization, the protagonist has a distinct image, with flesh and blood, and his growth process and personality changes are relatively natural. The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, which add a lot of color to the story. However, the emotional interaction between the characters sometimes seems stiff. But overall, it's still very good to save him a hundred chapters first.

The writing is very good. It would be nice to add a few confidantes as burdens to the male protagonist, which would improve the male protagonist's motivation to move forward.

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