The Complete Spectrum of Great Aberrants

Points system The writing is smooth, a few chapters are difficult to understand (the order of sentences is too confusing), the rest are error-free +0.5 Novel subject matter and novel system +1.5 The plot is too smooth, and the overall plot is tense in the early, middle and later stages +0.5 Most of the supporting characters have brains, and a few are ignorant. However, there are powers in the world view, and the possibility of being reversed by manipulation +1 The combat part is quite satisfactory, no obvious errors +0.5 Adapt to the crowd It is suitable for those who like to see the protagonist develop quickly, fight well, have urban superpowers, suppress the system (not too obvious, and appear in the later stage), swallow up upgrades, etc., But for those who like to see details and don't like flat characters (the characters in this book are really flat, the whole family of good guys are good guys, and almost the whole family of bad guys are bad guys, especially the Miao family, which is amazing, and Cao Qianhu. I feel that the author wants to change Cao Qianhu, so he is a bit like a little villain in the early stage) Later, he repented and helped the protagonist, but the writing style describing the change was too poor. Generally, it was written that xx's mood changed from anger to gratitude, etc.) People can freely choose to appreciate it or not. The author values readers' opinions and insists on not making any changes to the outline in principle +1 Follow-up comments after being replied by the author: To be honest, I actually feel that I try to be as objective as possible when commenting, and intuitively rate my own feelings, but few authors give me comments. This time the author gave me a review. I didn't feel very excited. Instead, I was asked to review the review. Some parts were still not rational and subjective. Before, I always thought that I could just write random comments. I was just expressing my emotions by giving ratings. But I didn't expect the author to take these comments so seriously, so I understand that my comments on the book should not be so casual. The author said that every suggestion should be carefully examined and studied, and I also understand that I should be more cautious about comments. I hope the author's books will get better and better

The plot is smooth and the writing is slightly flawed, but it does not affect the overall layout. The entire article still has its own rhythm, its own thoughts, and the characterization is also three-dimensional. Tomato is a rare good book. Come on

The writing is very engaging and the subject matter is quite novel. But there is an immature suggestion, or personal preference, I don't know if it can help the author. I feel like the work lacks an anchor point, in other words a main line. Of course, that's not to say that the book won't look good without a main line, but without an anchor, what the protagonist does may feel a little meaningless and without progress. Just some immature ideas, come on!

It's a pity that this book, 🍅's Urban Power + Cthulhu, is probably the best one, and as a result, fewer and fewer people are reading it. The author is completely out of love and has written a million words. It is not easy.

The protagonist is well-organized and atmospheric enough, and you can forgive him just because the person who wants to kill him is an idiot...

Is the author really a newcomer? The writing is very sophisticated. Just read the first ten chapters. The structure is neat, the background details are attentive, the characters are well described, the plot is full of tension, and the setting is novel. Well, it's that kind of all-round excellence. Among the novels about urban superpowers that I have read personally, they are second only to strategic angels. It's just that the "jiazi" in the title of the book is puzzling, and the relevant concepts are not mentioned in the introduction or text. The "Decisive Killing" label in the introduction almost made me miss this book.

Darkness controls the world, but the heart longs for light. Different from ordinary urban supernatural stories, this article is full of killing and weirdness, but it can also feel a trace of eternal humanity. The writing is capable, the ideas are clear, the abilities are changeable, and the plot is special. Definitely can't put it down!

Review again, this book is worth reading. The background is similar to the development of the constitutional monarchy of the Ming Dynasty to the modern era of advanced technology. There are superpowers, and the source is something (the author may have laid a foreshadowing, and how the thing came into being is not mentioned); the abilities are divided into a hierarchy, and the modern departments and official positions are similar to those of the Ming Dynasty or more ancient times. In the modern setting, it feels a bit fragmented, but the plot is okay. I hope the author writes better and better.

When I saw the introduction, I thought it was about zombies again, but after reading it again, I realized that it was completely different. The protagonist is so perceptive that others can learn it immediately after using it once, and he can also fight back.

Super beautiful, a rare quality grass jelly in tomatoes!