Broken Iron Snake, There Is a Bad Woman in the Card Pool

I read it for a long time, but I couldn't understand it. I just saw from the cracks in the words that I love snakes [laughing evilly]

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Thank you. It turned out that I had the Yin Body, Originium Disease, Pamish Infection, Rainstorm Syndrome, Vocal Cord Infection, Collapse Syndrome, Abstraction, Cyberpsychosis, Fear Gas Inhalation, Homesickness, Urban Disease, Distortion, Slow Shock, Living Corpse Transformation, Hall Girl Transformation, Madness, Honkai Disease, Extraordinary Person Loss of control, hypothermia, kara bug, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, etheric erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life equation. Corrosion and subspace corruption are all cured after reading your masterpiece! Hey hey hey hey hey [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Snake! My snake! !

This book is a masterpiece. If the author's writing style is as good as this, it will definitely be popular. I recommend Snake alone. The protagonist Snake has no OOC, the plot is compact, and has its own main line. It does not simply rely on the original work, but here I will mention a small thing at the right time. My suggestion is, can the author write a side story, classify the main plot, and then classify the side story? After all, I am very curious whether the author will write a story about the 13 Heroes of Fire Chaser. I also really want Ellie to appear, and then force Snake to wear a pink skirt✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿)

Tomato Free 3 system desktop Chinese editing box. It's pretty cool, but there are too many barrages. There are also too many descriptions of this so-called real world. There are too many descriptions of players. There's no need to write so much about barrages, right? Just describe it occasionally. The main focus is still on the protagonist Mebius. Or just do something directly later and let Kinkou expel Mebius from this universe, so that he can leave. Has the iron universe collapsed? Even if the balance doesn't let you in after you go out, that's okay. Wait until the strength exceeds the balance and then come back to kill the balance. If you do this, the protagonist should be able to go to the Teyvat world of Honkai Impact 3 and Genshin Impact. You can also go to other worlds in the sea of ​​trees. Later, after the protagonist becomes a god, he directly leaves the world of the sea of ​​trees and goes to play in the heavens. After all, becoming a god is not the end. If you want to improve your strength, there are many ways in the world.

Bengtie Kachiwen is a very rare fan whose self-made role-playing game meets the standard of strength, and even implements the customary rule of transforming a two-star soul into a six-star soul. Disadvantages: Common shortcomings of Kachi novels. Compared with the game plot, the author has worked hard to make a lot of improvements and opened up many new perspectives. Everyone's attitude towards the heroine is not mindless, which is rare. The ending is a bit disjointed. The author said that the second half is what he is good at, and the first half is about playing with abstraction... Emmm. Actually, the first half is more interesting, but the second half falls into the dilemma of making dumplings forcibly, which reduces the watchability, but the flaws are not concealed. Advantages: The author has really played the game. Snake has super support and Beibeilong has super ADHD. They are all in line with the intensity of Bengtie 3.0. They are not other Kachi texts that force the players in the text to fly as high as a six-star four-star male protagonist. After carefully looking at the skills and star souls, TM is not even as good as Tingyun! Latiao, cut tough, counterattack, and additional attacks didn't take up any of them. It's ridiculous that Xiang Kachiwen's protagonist is not as good as Bengtie Game's own character. Is he so conservative? ! At least the author of this article carefully referred to the character skill Star Soul settings in the game and designed Snake with a normal intensity gradient. This alone is a huge highlight. Lightning Point: Except for not watching the extra episode, I have seen the ending, so there is no lightning point for me to give up. Perhaps the highlight is that Snake and Snake are Beng San characters entering Beng Tie, although it does not affect the viewing.

First of all, the character design is not OOC, which is in line with my impression of Snake. The author's writing style is also very good. There is no uncomfortable feeling at all when reading the article, and the addition of some jokes and the like does not seem abrupt. There are currently more than 100,000 words. If this quality can be maintained in the future, I feel there is great potential [Like]

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The number of words is not that many, but I gained a lot from it. When I read the issue of "existence" in this book, I often think about it. There is a saying called "[Existence itself is meaning]." When I read the end of this book, I seemed to understand a little bit of "existence". In short, I like this book very much. When I saw the end of the main plot, I still felt a little unfinished. Well, whenever I witness a story reaching its ending, I always feel like this in my heart, [How I wish ours would never end].

[Sending Hearts] A very nice article by Mebius! ! !

To be honest, I came here for Snake at first, but as I continued watching, I really felt a different harvest. Maybe it's the same as what the author writes later... From the initial whim to the careful consideration later, each stage has a different feeling and a different experience... No matter it is well written or average, every reader's experience is different. Let me talk about my personal evaluation: Good! It deserves a five-star rating. It only took me three days to read it. It's really good!

I hope the author can keep the original characters and not interfere too much with the highlights of the original plot characters, otherwise it will be really difficult to accept. Many Bengtie fan stories have their own main plot at the front, and they are purely for the highlights of the characters at the back. Come on! Author, I wish you a happy National Day and have fun

The quality of the Xingtie article is relatively high. It is recommended to watch it.

It is so well written that almost all the stories have been rewritten. Unlike other Beng Tie novels where the protagonist has no influence on the plot, is messy, or is boring, this book seems to have rewritten all the stories and laid a lot of foreshadowing. The protagonist also has a very high sense of presence [Sending Hearts]

The tone of the chapters is not very unified, but the characters are pretty good, and the story at the end is very interesting. It's like drinking tea (the first taste of the fresh tea has a hazy aroma, the taste is slightly astringent but refreshing, and the subsequent sweetness is full of aftertaste)

It's pretty good-looking, and the character design is quite consistent, but I don't understand why the time traveler setting is added. If it's for those game jokes, can the system instill the plot? Describing the protagonist's past is also Mebius's past. Without the plot before the time travel, this setting is useless. It also gives me a feeling of players in this world traveling through the past... How can I put it, this setting is a bit uncomfortable, but it is harmless, and overall it is good-looking. As long as the time traveler setting is useful, the most confusing thing right now is where is it? Honsan Earth, Hontetsu Earth, or Izumo?

Come on! The look and feel is much better than many other Honkai Impact fanfics. It focuses on storytelling rather than being strong for the sake of being strong. At least it's not about being invincible until the end and then doing it again and again. The writing is also more in line with the image of a snake.

It's so impressive, even if it's a pigeon, it's worth the price of admission!

The description of the Bengtie character card is still okay. Well, how should we evaluate and describe other places? Hmm... The Bengtie character card is pretty good, and everything else is just fine. It's an okay text.

There's not much to say. I've finished reading another book. I felt very motivated at the time, and the same goes for the rest of it. I was still following the updates every day, but after a while, I didn't want to read anymore. I finally finished it today, and I'm so proud of it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

He created many original stories, which is good

Beautiful, I love snakes

Come on, author, I hope you are single

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good! ! ! !

Good looking, not only high quality, but also large and filling

The story is well connected, the characters are very distinctive and realistic, the characters' lines are perfect, and they are basically non-toxic.

It's great. Although I haven't played Honkai Impact and don't know their story, this article is great.

A great snake book

Great writing, good luck to the author.