Opening Your Eyes Is the Escape Copy

This is an infinite flow group portrait article. I really love the group portraits and will always be loyal to the sincere feelings of the group portraits! ! ! The story in this article is their own. If there is a problem, it must be that there is a problem with my expression as the story recorder. It is because my writing is not good. Just accuse me (it is okay to scold me, but it is absolutely not okay to scold them!!!!)

Very good, I also like group chat🤔 However, the dungeon setting is relatively simple, such as the dungeon of Yuzi. To put it bluntly, as long as someone can see the diary, everything can be understood, and there is no need to use your brain at all🤔 The clues are right in front of us, but they are almost not directly fed to the protagonist group. Although there are many psychological activities of the heroine interspersed in the middle, I want to show how smart the heroine is... But it still doesn't impress the audience deeply enough, because readers from a God's perspective will think that it is natural for you to think of this step. If you want to create a smart protagonist, you must think before the readers and think more than the readers. This is difficult, but if the creation is successful, it will be wonderful. The rhythm control is okay, but for old bookworms, the copy is obviously not complicated, and the plot arrangement is not clever enough (of course, this is compared with other first-level unlimited streams) The fighting scenes are not exciting enough. I am quite looking forward to seeing the team battle. Secondly, the emotional line is still a bit flat, or a bit fast. It is not that it is too fast in terms of time length, but it lacks a propulsive factor.

I stayed up all night and finally read the latest chapter. Every plot is wonderfully written, and the relationship between the Qigui team is also very warm! I hope the author writes more, it's not enough! The author writes so well!

Overall, it's okay, with group portraits, but the author obviously lacks writing skills, the twists are blunt, and some of the plots are far-fetched. I haven't seen the male protagonist appear yet, so I'm still looking forward to it. The chapters in each copy are not very long, and I like them quite a lot. However, the descriptions in the copy are not enough and are relatively shallow. I think the table of contents should be finished. Come on.

This is my favorite article, please don't give up on the author. [Love] [Love] By the way, I want to ask, who is the male protagonist?

Big boost for the author, super super super super super super super good looking! ! ! ! ! (A lot more hehe [love] [love] [love] [love])

It looks good, but the length of each copy is a bit short, not enough to read at all. It would be nice if it could be longer [Cool] Come on!

Nice, I really like [shy][shy][shy], come on, I want to finish it.

It's very interesting. I've finished all the updated exams from yesterday to today. I would like to ask the author whether he updates once a day or two days?

Super super pretty! The emotional line is also very sweet! The heroine is also super strong! The teammates are also super nice and cute!