Douluo Dalu: From the Start, Twin Life and Destruction

It's well written and very interesting, but the updates are a bit slow. I originally wanted to read it, but I couldn't help reading it. After reading it, I didn't want to pick it up anymore. I hope the author will work harder, and my suggestion is that I hope I can write the story of Douluo 2, 3, and 4. Douluo 2 tells the story of the protagonist and Qian Renxue's child! Give our Huo Yuhao a little love! , I used to like Tang San when I watched Douluo 1, but I hated Tang San a little bit more when I watched Douluo 2. How can I say it? Tang San in Douluo Er is a bit sinister. It's just that no one suppressed him. I think it was a bit bloated. But I think the protagonist of this book is his brother, who should be able to suppress him, and Huo Yuhao is so miserable. Except for Tang Wutong, the daughter of Tang San, none of the people around him have become gods. Except for the lonely soul beast. If it weren't for Tang Wutong, it would be like sitting at the same table with Ma Hongjun. Too bad Well, another suggestion is that this Douluo fan book is about life and destruction. The protagonist will definitely inherit the god of destruction. But I think the protagonist can be the kind of creation god who merges the two gods, and the normal one will be very strong. In this way, the subsequent space-time turbulence will be resolved, as well as the battles with other god kings and the creation of the great god circle. The protagonist must be firmly in the first place, so Tang Wulin will be much better. This master is also very miserable, and he has to deal with Tang San, who is a trick on his son.

I have read many similar fanfics, some are against Tang San, some are hugging Tang San, and some are in the same kingdom with Tang San or, as in the original text, they are Tang San's brothers. This article really describes the brotherhood very delicately! The protagonist has no cheats, and he was a very ordinary person before time travel. Maybe there is no other article that is so enjoyable to read, but after reading too many invincible articles, this kind of long-lasting flow sometimes makes people more sympathetic! I didn't give full marks because some of the previous settings were very vague. It's said that the protagonist doesn't know the world of Douluo. Judging from his normal performance, he really doesn't know much, but occasionally something like the iron-clad Su Yuntao pops up. Also, if you want the protagonist to be like the original, many settings are not written, such as Tang San's external soul bone! Or maybe it was twins, Tang San had them. You also have a group attack. Although it is a healing type in the group, why not be more imaginative and use a soul bone to derive some attacks, weapons and so on? Because after all, the soul beast you absorbed also has certain attack methods, right? There is a trump card when the Clear Sky Hammer cannot be used! Would this be better?

Keep up the good work, author ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Why are the good books gone? Hope I can stick to it

More updates? More updates! More updates!

In fact, you don't need to care about other people's evaluations. Write about yourself well and feel free to feel guilty. The writing is really good. I think highly of you as the author.

If the expectations are correct, the protagonist here should be the twin gods of life destruction, members of the God Realm Committee of the three major law enforcement gods in the God Realm.

The author's writing style is really good, but there are some places where the details are too redundant. Overall, it's very good.

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's so well written, I'm afraid I'll be buried in it and I'll give it a low score.