JOJO: Qiao Zhou's Bizarre Adventure

[Stack your armor first] [Purely personal point, don't worry about me] The shortcomings are that the pace is too fast [maybe it's me, the Crimson King], there are too many battlefields, and some new ones are opened before they are finished, and the protagonist's sense of presence is also very low. There are too many stand-ins at one time, and it loses the charm of the original work. Everyone feels that the pace can be slowed down and the story can be told slowly. The advantage is that the author really prepared a lot of substitutes. [How many songs has the author listened to? ] And there is also a battle of wits between the characters. [The above are all personal opinions and are not guaranteed to be correct. After all, they only represent me. If you feel something is wrong, please point it out. I have only read Chapter 30 so far] It's a good fanfic, but that's why I feel like no one is reading it. It's all about the author's love [sending my heart]

Come on, author, my heart has become your shape [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

The content is pretty good, and the plot avatars and other designs are quite interesting, but I don't know what will happen next.

The best jojo fanfic I have ever read, come on, author

The main character has so few roles that I didn't even know he was the main character, but the rest is pretty good. Come on, author.

This book is really beautiful. Lots of memes.

Not bad, quite reasonable Looking forward to the appearance of the substitute for my submission Summary of all forms of avatars (The avatar form cannot be changed, You can only use which form when you evolve into it. But you can deliberately not evolve, For example, after being taken away by White Snake, Deliberately not evolving, stuck in incomplete echo, Use the high agility of complete response to conduct investigations, Evolve at critical moments, And due to the special nature of the stand-in, As long as the substitute is aware of it, Can evolve to its final form at once, Only after the original evolution to its final form, The CD was taken away, You can directly enter the final form. But you can also deliberately suppress the form, After all, this stand-in has the highest panel form. They are the blank slate form after being taken away, After that, I will use the form of Requiem, To a certain extent, The panel of this double's final final form, Probably not as high as the original panel in its incomplete form. ): Melee Stand: Requiem Form Remotely controlled reconnaissance stand-in: Complete Echo Ability substitutes: Echoes of Luck, Echoes of Destiny, Symphony of Destiny, Rhapsody of Destiny Alias: Echo of Destiny Panel: Force E Speed E Durable E Precision E Range D Growth A Ability: Can make any object perform a certain hit movement (priority is greater than the space system, less than the time system) (for example: it will hit even after being erased by bombing the space) Stand appearance: humanoid, with a light gray body, white silk threads and white arrows all over the body, a silver pointer on the face, and white pupils. An evolution Alias: Symphony of Destiny Panel: Force E Speed E Durable D Precision D RangeD Growth A Ability: Can make any object perform a certain movement (the priority is greater than the time system) (for example: it will move even when stopped) Appearance of the stand-in: The white silk thread and arrows turn to silver, the pointer turns to gold, the pupils turn to silver, and the body turns to dark gray secondary evolution Alternative name: Rhapsody of Destiny Panel: Force E Speed E Durable D Precision D Range C Growth A Ability: Can make any object perform multiple sure-hit movements (priority is greater than the time system) Appearance of the stand-in: The body turns into black and gray, the threads and arrows turn into gold, the pointer turns into red, and the pupils turn into gold After using insect arrows Alternative name: Requiem of Destiny Panel: Force A Quick A Durable A Precision E Range B Growth A Ability: Can make one's own attacks sure to hit (priority is greater than time system) (The original ability will disappear temporarily, The ability will not reappear until you exit the Requiem form. Because fate echoes, This double is not suitable for Requiem. Although the two forces will not fight, But to the extent that they dislike each other, So after it became a requiem, The original ability will also disappear temporarily, That is to say, retreat. ) Appearance of the stand-in: The body turns black, the threads and arrows turn red, the pointer turns white, and the pupils turn red After being deprived of his substitute ability, Will leave a substitute larvae behind (The stolen substitute ability can only be used once by the enemy. And cannot specify a target, It will only be random, Random targets include all humans within a certain range except for the original stand-in messenger with Echo of Destiny. For example, after White Snake took the substitute disc, Even if it is inserted into someone else's body, That person can only use this ability once, And the disc will be automatically damaged after use. And before the original substitute messenger evolved to Echo of Destiny, It cannot be taken away as a substitute, And due to the special nature of this substitute, Therefore, the substitute will only awaken automatically when the substitute user turns 18 years old. And if the memory is taken away, It will only take away the memories after awakening as a substitute. That is, the memories after the age of 18, It will not take away the memories before the age of 18. After being stripped of his memories after awakening as a substitute, Even if my memory is taken away again, It will only take away the memories after awakening the substitute. ) Alias: Incomplete Echo Panel: Force E Speed C Persistent B Precision E Range A Growth A Ability: Can penetrate objects less than ten meters thick (disappears after evolution) Appearance of the stand-in: a thick light gray fog (similar in color to the smog in Beijing) After evolution of Incomplete Echo Alias: Echoes of Disability Panel: Force E Speed E Durable E Precision E RangeE Growth A Ability: Can make any object perform a certain movement (the priority is lower than the time system and space system) Appearance of the stand-in: a human-shaped light gray fog with faintly visible translucent lines and arrows, and a white pointer in the fog. Echo of Luck evolves into Echo of Destiny

Good job. Keep up the good work.