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I would like to call the male protagonist the doomsday Hitler, the modern succubus, with perfect speech skills [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is very righteous and righteous, but it is a bit too idealistic. Dozens of days pass by in a blink of an eye, and a team of hundreds of people actually faces many threats every day. There is also the need for food. Water has special powers, but food cannot be created out of thin air. The description is a bit too peaceful. One more star. Although the proportion of the apocalypse is relatively small, the quality of the book itself is very good. It focuses on development. The world view has not yet been laid out, and there are a lot of foreshadowings.

Very well written, cheers author! !

I really like this kind of thing, come on, keep writing!

It looks pretty good so far, keep it up

Not bad, can look forward to it

It's okay, but I prefer multiple female protagonists. The main theme is that good girls are not let go and bad girls are not wasted.

Protect me, I feel like g

It's very well written and I hope you will continue to work hard.

Very well written, keep it up!

Like 👍, how many words are you going to write?

Come on, it feels good

I'm burning

It's really well written

Similar to a post-apocalyptic group portrait article, the world view is very grand, come on! ! !

Not bad! Come on!

Apocalyptic style, very touching writing

Well done. Come on, finish it.

It looks okay, come on

Not bad, very good. Please keep it up.

No nonsense, step by step development

The subject matter is good and the writing is good.

Well worth seeing

Okay, please support the author, come on

Good, good, good, good, good, good So well written

So far so good.

Der~ Please support me with good reviews The subsequent development of the world view will be much better. The part about fighting the Devourer was too rough. What does it mean to each use tools to resist the tentacles? My suggestion is to write it neatly and clearly. For example, a few people use obstacles to stop it, and a few people use ropes to trap it. In the end, the monster still has the ability to resist and no one dares to attack. The protagonist steps forward and kills it with a sword. Referring to the rhythm of the tunnel battle story, your writing really persuades people to retreat. I guess it will fall off a cliff after reading that chapter [laughing]