(Strange, unspeakable, lingering, mobile shelter]
flood tsunami
A huge turtle suddenly appears
A shell acts as a safe house
Crazy apocalypse, zombies, ice, high temperature floods, volcanic eruptions...
Under the apocalypse, some things are born in the darkness and survive in their own way.
"I have super powers!"
"I have divine power!"
"I have a summoned beast!"
"I have a system!"
"I am the son of luck!"
"You're all wrong, it's all science!"
Struggle to survive in a strange apocalypse
Reader comments
There is no complete plot line, either I am eating or I am going crazy.
So pretty
How should I put it? The plot is too confusing. From one moment to another, which world is the theme, or are they all in the original world? Will he return to the original world? If he cannot return to the end of the original world, it will be redundant. And if he wants to return to the original world, where will he be taken? Another world? So what's the point of him coming here? The plot cannot connect one thing to another. You started with suspense, but you made it a mess. Moreover, the turtle's eyes, the unspoken voice, and the part about the old beggar are too abstract and incomprehensible. People nowadays don't like to be passive when reading novels. It's just like a powerful person is controlling him, which makes people feel uncomfortable and don't want to read further.
Why can't you see my comment?
There is no complete plot line, either I am eating or I am going crazy.
So pretty
How should I put it? The plot is too confusing. From one moment to another, which world is the theme, or are they all in the original world? Will he return to the original world? If he cannot return to the end of the original world, it will be redundant. And if he wants to return to the original world, where will he be taken? Another world? So what's the point of him coming here? The plot cannot connect one thing to another. You started with suspense, but you made it a mess. Moreover, the turtle's eyes, the unspoken voice, and the part about the old beggar are too abstract and incomprehensible. People nowadays don't like to be passive when reading novels. It's just like a powerful person is controlling him, which makes people feel uncomfortable and don't want to read further. Why can't you see my comment?