Boonie Bears: Claiming the Golden Antler from the Start

The psychological journey, character traits, and dialogues are all very good. It is an emotional book. What attracts me most is the inner struggle of the protagonist in the face of death, the resonance that the emotions between the characters give me, and the farewells when parting. In fact, I still feel regretful when I see the separation because the protagonist has to separate from Naya, but after thinking about it, maybe this is the best ending. We always have to separate, from our friends, from our relatives, from our childhood. We are saying goodbye to the world. This may be a regret. Only by accepting this regret can we grow. In fact, even if the author didn't write the last sentence of the conversation with Naya, I wouldn't have said anything because I have grown up. Although I was relieved, I still had regrets in my heart. When I saw that conversation, my regretful heart suddenly felt comforted. Although regret is the main theme of life, I still yearn for a perfect ending. This is my childlike innocence, so thank you to the author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Overall it's okay. First of all, the Fantasy Forest section is better, the emotional line is relatively "smooth" and not too abrupt; the plot after Naya comes out is well arranged and more attractive. There are also poisonous points, such as the understanding of "sign in". Personally, I feel that it can be replaced with "task goal: golden antlers", but in fact it requires "(observation of) golden antlers". In this way, the protagonist's misunderstanding is more excusable. There is also the section of Raiders of the Lost Ark. The protagonist has many solo scenes and is not interesting. It is unnecessary, at least there is no need to lose sight of the main characters of the original work for several consecutive chapters. If you want to highlight the protagonist's abilities, you just need to add a touch to the plot. However, these are not big issues and can be skipped without causing any harm. Then, I feel that we can add a little bit of inner drama about the original character's "complaints" about the protagonist into the plot, and the protagonist can also add some characteristics, which may make the protagonist's integration more smooth. (I want to see the extra story about the protagonist writing a novel) Finally, it's easy to get bored after watching too much of today's daily routines. Can you introduce two plots earlier? I look forward to Naya's participation in the next few movies. The above is just my personal opinion, and everyone has different tastes. To know whether it is good or not, you still have to read a few chapters yourself.

It's a very good novel, and the description of the details is okay, but if it's just that, how do you feel about it? Well, the relationship between the protagonist and Naya is progressing a bit too slowly. Of course, if you can update a little more and see that the relationship between the protagonist and Naya is established, that one will be even better. There are nearly 200 photos. Well, the protagonist has not yet established a relationship with Naya. You have more than 230 photos so far. It's just holding hands, and it's still very unfamiliar. And this novel, well, it may have fulfilled some of my childhood dreams. Just like what I lamented in the novel, people will eventually be trapped for their entire lives by things they can't get when they are young.

Two days of peaceful nights in the five regions, and three or four more chapters without relief. After three hundred years of tossing and turning, looking back, there has been no update. Killing immortals and killing mortals to refine Spring and Autumn, even the five stars will not change. In the Spring and Autumn Period, when the young man returns, Naya will return. Never give up if you fail, the author must work hard to update. In the past, the Three Kings returned to Qingzuka and worked overtime to raise readers. Many difficulties come with the morning, and I hope you will update endlessly. It is against the will of heaven on Yitian Mountain, please don't lie down, author. In the past, the venerable master was defeated by his opponents, but today I only read two chapters. There are thousands of immortal enemies on the upstream river, but you will be more renewed if you stick to your true heart. Now that the four regions are attacking the sky, he will definitely recommend it to his generals. In the crazy cave, the way of breaking the sky, lie down, lie down, don't lie down. A hundred years have passed by in a blink of an eye, I hope my childhood will never end! Author! Stop lying down! OK? (≖_≖ )!

The writing is very good and not boring. There can be not only love but also friendship between men and women. The protagonist and Naya are a good example. When it comes to love, I think the two girls Zhao Linsuo and Luo are better.

There aren't many articles about bears. I haven't read many of them, and I can't comment on them very well. But for me personally, this book is very good. In terms of the emotional descriptions of the characters, not to mention in fan fiction, it is also very good when looking at the whole tomato. [Adoration] [Adoration] Currently, there is only one female character named Naya. I don't know about the future yet, but I hope it will be a single female protagonist. The protagonist has a positive outlook on life and has a close relationship with Naya. Anyway, I was disappointed. Finally, I hope that the author can not limit himself to the anime Bears, but can write more about the daily interaction with Naya and develop it in other places. [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

I saw a lot of book reviews complaining that the title of the book does not match the content, saying that the protagonist interprets signing for the golden antlers as snatching the golden antlers, which is too outrageous. Let me tell you my opinion on this. First of all, as an ordinary young man who travels into a dying body, the system is the only way for him to survive, so he has to hold on to the hope of life. Secondly, the protagonist is not clear whether "checking in" means getting the golden antlers to check in, or checking in at the location of the golden antlers. He does not dare to gamble with his life, so he comes up with the idea of ​​snatching the golden antlers. This is normal. After all, the protagonist is a young man, and he is not an old bookworm who is familiar with Internet literary routines. However, it is a small mistake that the author did not handle well here, which led to misunderstandings by some readers. It is suggested that the author could add some thoughts of the protagonist on the word "check-in". As I said above, this will make the plot transition smoother, but the novel is generally very good. Let's talk about the emotional line, one word: sweet! The protagonist's first encounter with Naya and his psychological changes are also written in a relatively detailed way, which is very consistent with the psychology of an ordinary young man who transforms from a man who is obsessed with survival to one who is willing to sacrifice himself for others. The subsequent daily interactions with Naya also reflect Naya's transformation from a tribesman to a modern urbanite. The transition of the plot is very comfortable, and the emotional initiation process between the protagonist and Naya is also well written, reflecting the ignorance of love in youth. As for the plot, some people in the comments said it remains unchanged. I suggest you carefully read the plot about Dudu again. Isn't this a change from the original drama? I can accept the author's adaptation of the plot, after all, I am reading fan fiction. It is suggested that the author put a "?" After "Seizing the Golden Antlers" in the title of the book, which should reduce many readers' doubts. Finally, this book is neither a cool novel nor a villain novel, so please don't read it with the idea of ​​a cool novel or a villain protagonist. For those who insist on reading this book, I think they all miss their childhood. I also hope that the author can keep writing and not end it halfway. Come on! [Emphasis added! I want a single heroine, but I love Naya! ] I have been writing this comment for a long time, just hoping that the author can write it down. After all, there are very few fanfics about bears in Tomato that suit my taste, so I decided to post a comment to increase the popularity of the author.

The writing is excellent and captures the reader's interest. Personally, I think this is the best Tomato novel with Naya as the heroine. I prefer the daily interaction between the protagonist and Naya at the end. It is the best part so far. I hope to add more daily scenes between the protagonist and Naya outside the main plot. The description of Naya is very lively and lovely, as if she is really in front of me (childhood white moonlight! The only problem is that there are too few chapters updated so far, and it's simply not enough to read. Love to watch, more updates

Good-looking, good-looking, still good-looking! There are very few Tomato Bears fanfics with high scores, and the author's book can be considered a masterpiece among the high scores. The selling point of this book is the emotional line between Gu Feng and Naya. Compared to other harem novels where you fall in love with each other within a few chapters, the emotional line in this book can be said to be delicate and smooth, from the separation in the fantasy forest to the reunion after the treasure hunt, and Gu Feng's careful care of Naya in modern social life. It is very real and has no poisonous points. I hope the author can continue to write about the daily life and relationship between the two, and you can refer to some romance novels. After all, as a novel with a single female protagonist, the adventure plot is not outstanding. I think many people come here for Naya, at least for me. Naya is a goddess in many people's childhood. If the relationship between the two is discontinued, a large number of readers may be lost. It is recommended to intersperse emotional scenes between the two of them in the adventures of the Bear Infested movies. Of course, it does not mean that other female characters cannot appear, such as Zhao Lin, who can be friends. Also, the title of the novel can be changed. Since Naya is for sale, it should be reflected in the title. In fact, this book has appeared on the recommendation list many times. I didn't want to read it at first, but I clicked on it because of the high score of 9.2. Mainly because Golden Antlers reminded me of Naya, but I didn't expect this book to be a single heroine of Naya. I also want to thank the author for letting me see Naya again and allowing my childhood memories to continue. So, as the author of your most successful book, it's not too much to put a little more effort into it, right? It's not too much to update a few chapters every day to maintain quality and quantity, right? I hope the author will persevere, and the top number one bear fanfic will depend on you! Don't disappoint us fans of you and Naya!

Not bad, not bad. It is much better than many bear-infested novels I have read. It only writes about a fantasy space, but many details are integrated very harmoniously. It really feels like there is such a movie, and the rewards given by the system are not obtrusive. It is only more than 60 chapters now. To be honest, it feels very good. Fantasy space used to be read and broadcast every day, but now it has been more than two years since I watched it. I hope the author will work harder! [Pouts]