Bears Haunted: Get the Golden Antlers at the Start

The psychological journey, character traits, and dialogues are all very good. It is an emotional book. What attracts me most is the inner struggle of the protagonist in the face of death, the resonance that the emotions between the characters give me, and the farewells when parting. In fact, I still feel regretful when I see the separation because the protagonist has to separate from Naya, but after thinking about it, maybe this is the best ending. We always have to separate, from our friends, from our relatives, from our childhood. We are saying goodbye to the world. This may be a regret. Only by accepting this regret can we grow. In fact, even if the author didn't write the last sentence of the conversation with Naya, I wouldn't have said anything because I have grown up. Although I was relieved, I still had regrets in my heart. When I saw that conversation, my regretful heart suddenly felt comforted. Although regret is the main theme of life, I still yearn for a perfect ending. This is my childlike innocence, so thank you to the author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Overall it's okay. First of all, the Fantasy Forest section is better, the emotional line is relatively "smooth" and not too abrupt; the plot after Naya comes out is well arranged and more attractive. There are also poisonous points, such as the understanding of "sign in". Personally, I feel that it can be replaced with "task goal: golden antlers", but in fact it requires "(observation of) golden antlers". In this way, the protagonist's misunderstanding is more excusable. There is also the section of Raiders of the Lost Ark. The protagonist has many solo scenes and is not interesting. It is unnecessary, at least there is no need to lose sight of the main characters of the original work for several consecutive chapters. If you want to highlight the protagonist's abilities, you just need to add a touch to the plot. However, these are not big issues and can be skipped without causing any harm. Then, I feel that we can add a little bit of inner drama about the original character's "complaints" about the protagonist into the plot, and the protagonist can also add some characteristics, which may make the protagonist's integration more smooth. (I want to see the extra story about the protagonist writing a novel) Finally, it's easy to get bored after watching too much of today's daily routines. Can you introduce two plots earlier? I look forward to Naya's participation in the next few movies. The above is just my personal opinion, and everyone has different tastes. To know whether it is good or not, you still have to read a few chapters yourself.

It's a very good novel, and the description of the details is okay, but if it's just that, how do you feel about it? Well, the relationship between the protagonist and Naya is progressing a bit too slowly. Of course, if you can update a little more and see that the relationship between the protagonist and Naya is established, that one will be even better. There are nearly 200 photos. Well, the protagonist has not yet established a relationship with Naya. You have more than 230 photos so far. It's just holding hands, and it's still very unfamiliar. And this novel, well, it may have fulfilled some of my childhood dreams. Just like what I lamented in the novel, people will eventually be trapped for their entire lives by things they can't get when they are young.

Two days of peaceful nights in the five regions, and three or four more chapters without relief. After three hundred years of tossing and turning, looking back, there has been no update. Killing immortals and killing mortals to refine Spring and Autumn, even the five stars will not change. In the Spring and Autumn Period, when the young man returns, Naya will return. Never give up if you fail, the author must work hard to update. In the past, the Three Kings returned to Qingzuka and worked overtime to raise readers. Many difficulties come with the morning, and I hope you will update endlessly. It is against the will of heaven on Yitian Mountain, please don't lie down, author. In the past, the venerable master was defeated by his opponents, but today I only read two chapters. There are thousands of immortal enemies on the upstream river, but you will be more renewed if you stick to your true heart. Now that the four regions are attacking the sky, he will definitely recommend it to his generals. In the crazy cave, the way of breaking the sky, lie down, lie down, don't lie down. A hundred years have passed by in a blink of an eye, I hope my childhood will never end! Author! Stop lying down! OK? (≖_≖ )!

The writing is very good and not boring. There can be not only love but also friendship between men and women. The protagonist and Naya are a good example. When it comes to love, I think the two girls Zhao Linsuo and Luo are better.

There aren't many articles about bears. I haven't read many of them, and I can't comment on them very well. But for me personally, this book is very good. In terms of the emotional descriptions of the characters, not to mention in fan fiction, it is also very good when looking at the whole tomato. [Adoration] [Adoration] Currently, there is only one female character named Naya. I don't know about the future yet, but I hope it will be a single female protagonist. The protagonist has a positive outlook on life and has a close relationship with Naya. Anyway, I was disappointed. Finally, I hope that the author can not limit himself to the anime Bears, but can write more about the daily interaction with Naya and develop it in other places. [Code to live][code to live][code to live]

I saw a lot of book reviews complaining that the title of the book does not match the content, saying that the protagonist interprets signing for the golden antlers as snatching the golden antlers, which is too outrageous. Let me tell you my opinion on this. First of all, as an ordinary young man who travels into a dying body, the system is the only way for him to survive, so he has to hold on to the hope of life. Secondly, the protagonist is not clear whether "checking in" means getting the golden antlers to check in, or checking in at the location of the golden antlers. He does not dare to gamble with his life, so he comes up with the idea of ​​snatching the golden antlers. This is normal. After all, the protagonist is a young man, and he is not an old bookworm who is familiar with Internet literary routines. However, it is a small mistake that the author did not handle well here, which led to misunderstandings by some readers. It is suggested that the author could add some thoughts of the protagonist on the word "check-in". As I said above, this will make the plot transition smoother, but the novel is generally very good. Let's talk about the emotional line, one word: sweet! The protagonist's first encounter with Naya and his psychological changes are also written in a relatively detailed way, which is very consistent with the psychology of an ordinary young man who transforms from a man who is obsessed with survival to one who is willing to sacrifice himself for others. The subsequent daily interactions with Naya also reflect Naya's transformation from a tribesman to a modern urbanite. The transition of the plot is very comfortable, and the emotional initiation process between the protagonist and Naya is also well written, reflecting the ignorance of love in youth. As for the plot, some people in the comments said it remains unchanged. I suggest you carefully read the plot about Dudu again. Isn't this a change from the original drama? I can accept the author's adaptation of the plot, after all, I am reading fan fiction. It is suggested that the author put a "?" After "Seizing the Golden Antlers" in the title of the book, which should reduce many readers' doubts. Finally, this book is neither a cool novel nor a villain novel, so please don't read it with the idea of ​​a cool novel or a villain protagonist. For those who insist on reading this book, I think they all miss their childhood. I also hope that the author can keep writing and not end it halfway. Come on! [Emphasis added! I want a single heroine, but I love Naya! ] I have been writing this comment for a long time, just hoping that the author can write it down. After all, there are very few fanfics about bears in Tomato that suit my taste, so I decided to post a comment to increase the popularity of the author.

The writing is excellent and captures the reader's interest. Personally, I think this is the best Tomato novel with Naya as the heroine. I prefer the daily interaction between the protagonist and Naya at the end. It is the best part so far. I hope to add more daily scenes between the protagonist and Naya outside the main plot. The description of Naya is very lively and lovely, as if she is really in front of me (childhood white moonlight! The only problem is that there are too few chapters updated so far, and it's simply not enough to read. Love to watch, more updates

Not bad, not bad. It is much better than many bear-infested novels I have read. It only writes about a fantasy space, but many details are integrated very harmoniously. It really feels like there is such a movie, and the rewards given by the system are not obtrusive. It is only more than 60 chapters now. To be honest, it feels very good. Fantasy space used to be read and broadcast every day, but now it has been more than two years since I watched it. I hope the author will work harder! [Pouts]

It's so good to watch. This is the best Boonie Bear fanfic I've ever read. It has a single heroine and the childhood goddess Naya. The emotions are described very well. It's delicate and I like it. There are only a few flaws, just a little bit watery, but it's still very good.

So far, it is the most realistic, most immersive, and most realistic work I have ever seen. It must be long-lasting. The author [sends my heart][sends my heart][sends my heart]. Don't be obscene. The childhood dreams next door have been sealed (although it's not good-looking either, but you have to be vigilant)

This book can be considered the pinnacle of the novel with Naya as the male and female protagonist. It's not like other authors who just get along for a while and then fall in love or something. Instead, he taught Naya step by step everything in real life. Just for this reason I can give you five stars.

Among the fan fiction in The Bears, this novel can be regarded as a high-quality one. Overall, it is good. For now, the grasp of the plot is good, and the emotional part about the protagonist and Naya is quite normal and not abrupt. I just don't know when Naya will appear again? Maybe until she is eighteen years old? (Haha) It may also be the finale (sad). It is not easy to see a novel about the Bears, and it is a high-quality one. I hope to see the finale! Finally, I wish the author good health and all the best, don't tire yourself out, and insist on finishing this novel perfectly. Don't let us down, don't let the story freeze at that moment, don't let us down😞, I hope we can all see the perfect ending of this novel!

Naya! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Code to live][code to live][code to live][code to live][code to live][code to live] The author should know who we are for [smile] and I feel that the author's writing style is good and the writing is very beautiful.

It's very interesting [Admiration]. If you write more about Naya's daily life, it will be perfect. As for the system, the author can actually slowly downplay the system in the later period. It mainly writes about Naya's daily life, and the author will write more about it. It's not enough [almost crying]

It's so beautiful, much better than a certain yandere novel, that one just stained my eyes.

It's very interesting. Naya has more plot. Naya must be the heroine, she must! ! !

This is really the best Naya fanfic I have ever read, and it directly brings Bai Yueguang to life in his childhood. The author's portrayal of Naya is really amazing, and her character is not broken at all. Her pure, sensitive and a little lonely feeling is revealed from every line. When reading, I always feel that she is sitting in that forest, quietly listening to the wind. The emotional line between the protagonist and her is also very comfortable to write. There is no industrial saccharine, but the daily relationship slowly heats up. Watching the two of them stay together in the woods, the healing feeling is really full. I even kind of hope that the author can write more about their daily life, but I can't get enough of it. The story as a whole is also very emotional. Watching it reminded me of the feeling of watching "Fantasy Space" in the cinema. The feeling of childhood gone forever came back to me. The psychological portrayal of the protagonist is also very good. From the resistance and struggle when he first crossed over, to the gradual bond with this forest and Naya, the growth line is particularly complete. The only slight regret is that the character development of the protagonist in the early stage is a bit discouraging, and occasionally the description of some fighting skills is a bit long-winded; and the ending is a bit hasty. I always feel that the protagonist still owes Naya a good confession, and it is a bit disappointing after reading it. But overall, it really outweighs its shortcomings. It's the best emotional line and character creation among the Bears fanfics I've ever read.

The novel "Bear Infested in Tomato" is a story about a three-person battle between two people. I really hope that I can keep writing it in its current state until it is finished. The noisy wind teased the girl's hair playfully, and the sunlight swayed with some bright colors. Naya's lips only undulated slightly, but the slightly teasing words were indeed sent to Gu Feng's ears accurately and clearly by Feng'er. "If you don't stay in the Fantasy Forest, you will support me?" Xu was teasing the ends of the scattered hair, and his raised hand blocked Gu Feng's sight, preventing him from seeing the girl's eyes clearly. The sun shines through the gaps between the leaves and shines around Naya, and the Xu wind whirls along with the rustling of the leaves. It is a beautiful picture, but it is a scene that cannot be described by adjectives. He was stunned for a moment, perhaps because of the words in his ears, or perhaps because of the scene in front of him. But maybe it was because of his hesitation that Naya just turned around, waved her hand in front of her face, and left as if saying goodbye. "I'll support you!" Without hesitation, Naya turned around suddenly. The waving hand stayed in the air, and the eyes that had been covered before were clearly shining. Her eyes instantly turned red, and she ran towards the boy in front of her without thinking. Hug each other and cry. Bury your head into your chest. Gu Feng felt as if he had embraced the whole world, or more like he had his own world. That feeling fascinated him and he couldn't bear to let go. For a long time, Gu Feng felt a warm and moist wind blowing by his ears, and a reply as soft as a mosquito's voice. "Um....."

I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and watch half of the progress in one go. If I don't dare to read it, I'm afraid I'll just finish it. I don't have to read it, and the money is not much. I'll give you a reward of 5 yuan, just take it as a little encouragement [Like] [Like]

Among the novels I have read, the emotional line of this book is already top-notch. The emotional development with Naya is not abrupt and natural, and it is quite comfortable to read. The only two shortcomings are that the protagonist is a bit comical, but only a little, and the author needs to update it quickly!

To be honest, the score of this book is not as high as I gave it. I listened to the story of the protagonist in nearly one night. The story is over, but the story is still going on. The role of the system is almost nonexistent here. I like this emotional line very much. It is very slow and I see traces of love. From the initial disdain on the recommendation page to the current emotion, the author does not have very good writing style but he wrote a good story and the ending of the story is perfect. I said I'd take you out This time we come back for a trip Evaluation: The language processing is not very good, the emotional line develops very slowly, and many places are very childish, but this is childhood, with a single female protagonist, 3.7 Points worth watching

The author's writing is indeed very good, but it is a bit short, and the ending is a bit rushed. At the same time, the protagonist and Naya are not announced together in the end, which is a bit uncomfortable. But it's already very good! Keep up the good work, author! ! !

It's good. It didn't feel that good at first, but it gets better as it goes on. Occasionally, I can save some daily problems. It feels pretty good. But the author, don't forget that you are writing about Bears. I hope to watch a movie once in a while and then have a daily life. I hope the author will work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง

The writing is very good, and it has finished the plot of the bear infestation that I wanted to see. At first, I thought that the protagonist was going to have a life-and-death duel with Naya, hehe (ºº) It's good to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's good-looking, and the emotional line is delicate. New readers should not be put off by the character development of the protagonist in the early stage. (It's a person who was suddenly pulled into a different world, his parents died, and he can only live for a year. Suddenly someone tells you that he will cure you after completing the task. Everyone will go crazy.) The following is really good-looking.

Overall, it's good. There are some flaws in the front, but I just skipped the middle. It's okay, but it's okay in the back. I can continue to write about it. For example, Naya is jealous because of Beth. This is the best book except that the heroine in The Bear is Naya! ! Author! Still owe it! Naya! A confession!

This book will be my highest-rated book. Although it has extra points for childhood, it is undeniable that the author's writing is powerful and the characters are perfectly created. It's like they're in the real world. Except it's a little short. [Laughing evilly] The final ending is also very perfect. After all, it starts with Jungle Book and ends with Jungle Book. [Praise]

The writing is very good. In the early stage, the protagonist's desire for life is used to make him join the protagonist group and enter the plot, without being blunt.

This book is well written without being childish in the same way. This is the second good book I have read. The first good book is "The Herrscher of Capturing Knowledge at the Beginning" This is what I think