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The writing is quite good, systematic but not refreshing. It is not suitable for the general environment of Tomato. The low score is normal. Tomato Environment: It's okay to feel unhappy without a system, but it's okay to feel unhappy with a system. Isn't the system in vain?

It's an ordinary plug-in article, and it's a little bit toxic, but it's not a big problem. It is a free book after all. The author should read more about readers' comments on the paragraph after he has finished writing. Don't lose yourself in the five-star reviews. Most of them are just compliments. I know several authors, but you lose yourself in the five-star reviews. In the end, you died and were sprayed miserably. 🤦

It took me three days to finish it. Generally speaking, this kind of writing is considered to be middle-to-upper-class among Tomato novels. The ones about Zhan Shen are suitable for younger people. They gave me the feeling of a Tomato version of Douluo. The specific performance is like my neighbor's kid holding a magic stick, jumping on the ground and shouting about Ultraman's transformation, and waiting for everyone to praise him for his sense of déjà vu. It is called "not forced to pretend". I think this book is more suitable for college students or people who are relatively precocious. It writes about the injustices of the lower class and real society. It is a bit ironic, and it is more real and flesh-and-blood. If it can contain more philosophy, I believe it will be a good masterpiece. By the way, this book should not be written on Tomatoes. Tomatoes should only be full of entertaining articles. Let me mention my personal feelings again. I feel that the first dozens of chapters were carefully polished. Some of the foreshadowings can be seen with care, but they gradually disappeared later and I don't know why. It is normal for the ratings to be low now. There were pushbacks at the beginning, and there were a lot of bad reviews in the middle. If you are lucky, you can turn around in the later stages. Just wait and see!

It's awesome. Although there are many parts that people really can't help complaining about, some of them are handled very quickly, but the intro is too long. If I hadn't been busy listening to the book at the same time, I probably wouldn't have been able to see the rest. So far, it feels like I'm getting through it.

The protagonist's character is very unique, he is reckless but very charismatic. It makes me feel a bit like Luffy before the war. I hope to write a little group portrait, add a character who is full of intelligence and strategy, and bring out the protagonist's recklessness and charisma.

It's wonderful. The new book is so well written. I feel like the rating could reach 9.4 Or above without supervision, but it will take a long time, about a few months? I don't know, but this book is really good. I'm an old bookworm. How long will it take to read it?

Keeping yourself true to yourself and having the self-confidence of cheating allows the protagonist to stick to himself. It's straightforward, without those disgusting old tricks. Just enjoy it all the way down. It's just that there are too few updates, it's best to start with 10,000 per day [laughing]

The author's writing is very interesting, the writing style is also very good, the outline is also good, and there are many jokes in the writing. Although the author is a bit cold, but he writes very carefully, the character structure is very prominent, and there is a lot of foreshadowing 🙂 🙂

Why don't you practice martial arts? Don't you like practicing? You just rely on the entries, right? What's the use of breathing techniques?

Great book, I don't know why there is a beautiful neighbor?