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The plot of the script is good, and it was well written in the early stage, but it has taken a lot of steps later, and the people who were recruited were taken care of in just a few strokes. It was especially a pity that Aunt Liu who took care of the baby was a good character with vivid characters, and she was taken care of casually. The third time the protagonist met her, he gave her two cakes, and she ate them all. It was very different from the first time she met the protagonist when she got half a cake and chewed it up to feed the baby. Later, she was hired as an embroiderer and she was taken care of casually. It was really a pity. Good subject matter, novel story, but a big step forward

I hope that the protagonist will be courageous, decisive, and not indecisive in the next time. This means that he must be worthy of his status as a time traveler, treat his enemies as unmercifully as ten thousand years of ice, be a vicious time traveler with a scorpion tail, treat his own people like a spring breeze, and give both kindness and power. He must not be a pie-in-the-sky person and treat his own people sincerely.

In addition to the very frustrating first few chapters, there are also system tasks that have the consequences of failure, which is very disturbing. But after the second task comes out, the system is almost invisible, and the plot takes off immediately. The rest of it is very interesting.

This book is suitable for long-term reading, and the details are reasonable and clear. Come on author

It's okay, you can watch it. It's Zhang Jun, right? The author said it was written off. If you write about Zhang Jun later and come back for revenge, haha, I'll just give it 6 stars.

Very good, let's take a closer look

Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, pretty

Okay, this book is pretty good, but the number of words is a bit short.

The protagonist sells fish and then...

Not bad, attractive to watch

The writing is good, I give it five stars.

It's just a little bit underwhelming. The farther back you go, the better it looks.

Come on, come on, come on

It sounds good, but why will his system replenish his bullets in the future? I hope the update will be faster? I beg you

It's very well written. I don't know why so few people read it. I probably stayed up late tonight to watch it [laughs]