Fall*****

It's really a rare book! The reason why there are so few people is probably because this style is not popular on tomatoes. I have just switched from other mecha books and I really feel a sense of gap when I read it. It does not have a strong and fast sense of satisfaction, but it has a strong story line. If you continue reading, you will slowly find that this book is really exciting. The villains are not just villains, they also have something good that attracts us, which makes the conflicts between them more inevitable and makes the whole story more reasonable. Readers may not like Xun's character at first, but if you think about it carefully, there is nothing unreasonable. She is not a villain. This kind of character is in line with her experience since she was a child, and it is very reasonable. All in all, you will know how good this book is after reading it [Sending Hearts]

This book is relatively new among Tomatoes. It's quite interesting to read. The protagonist and supporting characters have their own personality traits. The setting is also well supplemented. The world view seems good so far. However, there are still shortcomings. In the mid-term, the life experiences of the team members are described in too many ways. Although it does not need to be summed up in one stroke, it can be simplified a bit. This makes it less and less interesting for those who follow the update, leading to abandonment of the update. Also, the scene changes in the later stage are too fast. One scene per chapter is dizzying. There must be at least two or three chapters where the scene changes. The above are just suggestions. The writing is still very nice and worth reading.

Oops, this book feels a bit like a traditional hot-blooded royal novel, and it can be considered a breath of fresh air in today's online literature.

The logic of writing in this book is pretty good on Tomato. I think the part about teammates' past memories is pretty good. It shouldn't be written all in one battle, which wears down the reader's patience. I almost stopped reading that part. It can be seen that the author likes dual-line narratives very much. However, this kind of operation can easily slow down the rhythm of the plot. Some people simply skip or leave when they see the part they don't want to see.

The first 29 chapters are very good. The setting is very fresh, and the character of the protagonist Tian Jingtian is also very special. This world is very attractive. I hope the author can provide a picture to draw out the regions of the earth. Come on!

To be honest, this is not a novel that should appear on Tomato. It's so good.

Dear author, Xu Feimo can arrange the follow-up in half a year. Yes, the new book is quite good. I will always support it~

Very nice, mecha writing is rare

Good-looking, believing protagonist

Established authors should do their own publicity. Good looking 👀. [Praise]

😎Come and take a look, brothers, it's a good book

Wow! ! ! Why do you write this kind of article on Tomato?

The world view is quite big

The writing is very good and the artistic conception is rich.

This is a very novel article that breaks away from the traditional framework. It is a good book.

Flesh mechas might as well be called biological mechas

It looks good and novel, but it feels like the army is not a regular army. Regardless of their identity, they are like bandits fighting each other.

It's really uncomfortable to write this way of typing in and out of the story at the back. It should be put at the back.