The Bad Thing About HP and Grindelwald Being Alumni

The character of the protagonist is really gentle [crying][crying][crying], a top male mother, who has always taken care of everyone around her, has a pampering and doting attitude towards those around her, and also gives pocket money. She is a mutually recognized friend of Albus and Gellert. There is a chapter in which Gellert found Albus chatting very affectionately against someone's shoulder outside the window. Gellert originally minded it, but after finding out that the person was the protagonist, he immediately said, "It's okay." Gellert, a possessive person, didn't mind Albus being intimate with the protagonist. He really regarded him as Albus's "good girlfriend" and his good friend. He is the white moonlight in everyone's heart. He is gentle and sensible and makes me feel bad [cry][cry][cry] After reading the extra chapter, I read it again. Now that I have read the beginning, I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and Gellert at the beginning of the main text is different from the extra chapter. The extra chapter tells the story of the two of them before the experiment exploded. I feel that their relationship is quite good. The potion is also what the protagonist wants. I drank it voluntarily to repair the friendship with Gellert, but I re-read the beginning of the text and felt a big difference. At the beginning of the text, the protagonist met Gellert. He was unfamiliar and scared. He felt that he was not very familiar with Gellert, and he was very concerned about being treated as a guinea pig. I feel that the main text cannot be related to the extra story and can only be regarded as a beautiful possibility.

Very nice! There is a love story about ggad from a spectator's perspective and there is also the protagonist's own story (I hope the protagonist and Villiers are a couple! It's so cute! Call Gai Ge and take a look at what it means to have a wife who is young enough to act coquettishly!) I really like it! Come on, madam!

1: Long live the male mother 2: Long live the little sun 3: Long live emotional stability The little angel Ariana is still alive. The plot is very warm and comfortable to watch. The plot is really heartwarming. My heart has been warmed by the little suns~~

It looks good, I will give it 10 stars! At first, I thought the protagonist would be a typical white-collar boss, but in fact, he is actually the pure Jasmine White Moonlight who has been pure white all his life. He does not stand out as a leader on his own, but has always worked under Gellert. He has a very, very, gentle personality. The narrative is also a steady flow, without deliberately changing anything. Every rescue comes naturally, such as Ariana, Tom, etc. Come on GGAD, the protagonist is a common friend of the two, so his life seems a bit miserable. He has to accept two complaints at the same time and reconcile two people at the same time. The emotional description between Dumbledore and Grindelwald is also particularly delicate. There is no awkward feeling of forcing them to get back together. Even though A Liana has deviated from her original trajectory, but the two still parted ways because their ideological choices were different from the source. After the separation, the analysis of the two was particularly profound. Even though both of them were thinking about each other, they were still in a stalemate for more than thirty years. It was not until the new order was about to come that the two were willing to talk in detail. The protagonist has no emotional line, but the alumni group is a very, very good family. At first, it seemed that there were signs of becoming good brothers, but later this line should be abandoned. At present, it is, well, come on Narcissus, come on The protagonist's position in the group is also that of the parent. Whether it is Nurmengard or the Green family, they are the ones who take care of the children. This is very good. But the protagonist fell on the eve of the new world. I don't know what the follow-up development will be. I look forward to it. I hope it will be longer. I can't get enough of it. Congratulations on the completion of the article. Unexpectedly, the end of the article is very dull, but it seems to be natural. There was no resurrection, no sensational plot, just let nature take its course from the extraditer to the god of death, a very, very good ending. Reading the daily words carefully is full of longing, hello to Astra, and hello to everyone. I hope there will be a million words of extras❤ I really want to know what happened in Nurmengard after the death of the protagonist, and what happened to Tom, and the original story from family to generation, everyone wants a story.

Wow, I finally have a story about this era. I really like the story of Lao Ge's revolution, the various emotional pulls between him and Dumbledore, as well as the future of the wizarding world, and how it can be well connected with the Harry Potter era. After all, when I read FB, I really felt that it was quite inconsistent and out of touch with the HP series [crying]. I am looking forward to the different butterfly effect that the unexpected appearance of the male protagonist in the author's novel will have on the plot [blowing kiss]

It should be from the period of Tomato's first GGAD book, and the protagonist Durmstrang is also rare. Astra fits the way I think about purebloods, especially in a family full of PUAs, and she has a gentle [loving] personality. Can I ask what the protagonist's future development direction is? Is he a saint or a Hogwarts professor? Follow or break away from the plot? Finally, it's really nice to watch.

The character of the protagonist is very good, gentle and warm like the warm sunshine of an autumn afternoon, like a quilt that has been burned by the sun, comfortable and full of sunshine, like a lazy cat taking a nap after eating, it is very attractive! The rating is just too low😁 I think this book is very good Fits all my fantasies about a future partner

I really like this book, but it's a bit lacking now. Astra is really gentle and healing, but the occasional inner drama brings a huge contrast in cuteness, especially the daily life with the Dumbledore family. I could read a hundred chapters without getting tired of it. Every character is well written. The little angel Ariana, the goat boy Aberforth, the gentle but a bit out-of-touch Albus, and the arrogant Gellert are all written in a realistic way. I just want to say: I love you, my dear, just like a mouse loves rice! Please update three chapters every day, please [smile][smile][laugh]

This book is really well written and [gives my heart]. When watching the first half, you may feel that Astra is too cowardly and accommodating to others. He is not the kind of passionate and driven protagonist. But I think this is what makes Astra special. Gentleness and kindness are the first impression, but the author arranged a suffocating family for him. At first, I didn't understand why he didn't resist when he was already very strong, which made people hate iron. It's so sad to read about Camille's death now, it made me burst into tears [almost crying]. The writing here is super delicate, Camille's deep maternal love imprisons Astra and pulls him, (why is it so brutal [I almost cried]). When (💩trash) Jason will be offline? The author must make Astra happy [almost crying] I also hope that ggad can he [send my heart]

Emm... I don't know how to put it, but it's really good-looking. The protagonist is really gentle. Arianna is not dead. GGAD is also very good. The protagonist and Livier (it seems to be this name) are also very good. Are they a couple? It's really good-looking. The author should update it quickly. It's not good enough. It's not good enough at all [crying]

1️⃣My favorite type of protagonist. Bai Yueguang is beautiful, strong, gentle, weak and sickly. She has her own debuffs, but she is tough, thoughtful, smart and calculating. 2️⃣The descriptions of the original characters are very restrained and appropriate. There is no excessive praise or disparagement, and the stance is relatively neutral. Regarding the characters who have had regrets in the story, the author's description is also very good, and the process of saving them does not make people feel strange. 3️⃣The story timeline of the entire novel spans a very long time, and the pace is relatively slow, but the emotions are very gentle, not boring, and will not make people feel like they have grown up suddenly. It allows readers to fully immerse themselves in the story. 4️⃣The reason why there is no perfect score: When the novel comes to the end, it really feels like the story line has completely grown and is running around randomly. In fact, I already knew that the protagonist will definitely die when I read the middle. But what I want to see is the protagonist dies, being remembered by all relatives and friends, crying for him in pain, and finally the protagonist is resurrected and returns to them, and everyone spends a happy time together. It's not that after the protagonist dies, he becomes a ray of soul guide. He can't see his former friends and can only guide them in their final death. Then in the end, his soul is polished to the point where he is close to an indifferent god. Hey... I feel that the last part of the story is completely about the protagonist, not his personal growth. This kind of thing is so different from the human being that it makes people doubt whether this is really about loving the protagonist? I have never seen anything worse. I'm so sorry. After I posted the comment, I became more and more angry... Why did you arrange this kind of ending for the protagonist? I don't understand? ? Will all the love and ideals in the early stage just go away forever? Why is it that the protagonist is written as a human or a ghost? Does it mean to depict such a beautiful protagonist in the early stage, and then destroy it for us in the end? The rhythm in the early stage has been so good, why can't the protagonist at least live a normal and happy life with his friends and relatives?

I couldn't help but comment after I saw it halfway through. The characters in my wife's paintings are vivid, three-dimensional and full of emotions. The relationship between gg and AD is complicated and they care about each other, but they are both very awkward. They want to say something to each other but can't, hoping that the other person will speak first. Astra's complicated emotions towards her mother are vividly expressed. Although Camille is not a very qualified mother, she will keep little secrets for Astra and will go out of her way to buy sweets for her children. This is much better than selfish Jason. To sum up, my wife's article is really nice [sending my heart] If there is an afterlife, Astra, stop worrying so much about others and live for yourself [almost crying]

Such a gentle protagonist. I felt a kind of pessimism but also vigorous vitality from him. I really like the plot where the author arranged for Astra to rescue Ariana. Thank you for keeping Albus' family in this book.

Full marks, I think HP is an almost perfect book. When I first started watching it, I was actually looking forward to the plot of Astra's death, but after he actually died, I couldn't let him go. I had to attribute this behavior to my bad nature. Yes, he should have been alive. After I finished reading this book, I realized that there was a touch of sadness from the beginning. I'm not surprised by his final outcome. Finally, I recommend you to read this book, calm down and read it together The flowers are finished, and there's more! GGAD is so addictive~ I was a bit annoyed with the protagonist and Villiers at first, but it completely disappeared later on. Ok Astra is beautiful

I really like this kind of long-flowing writing. The image of Astra is really profound, and each character is very full and three-dimensional. The plot is also great and the characters in it really made me do it. Everyone loves it. Super super super super beautiful! ! !

The author has created a great character for the protagonist. It is very interesting to read. I finished all the chapters in one day. When I saw the protagonist's experience, it was really painful and I wanted to cry. I felt sorry for the protagonist. I saw many people in the comments discussing the problem of dual male protagonists CP. After reading the book, I felt that the protagonist was already having a very hard life. So in fact, it doesn't matter whether there is CP in the end. What is important is that he has a happy ending and a happy life in the end. This is what I want to see. The journey of the protagonist is really not easy. As long as he is happy, I think it is better than anything else. The author is also very diligent in updating, even updating three times a day. The writing is also very good, and the analysis and analysis of many things are also very good. In addition to the original characters, the relationship with the characters in the novels is also very well written. Many people don't like the way of getting along, but I think it is very consistent with the protagonist's character, and some plots are also very loving at times. All in all, it is one of the few good HP books that I have seen so far. It is worth reading. That's all for now. I will update the new chapters later and add some feelings after reading it. Try to make a long review [crying]

I've seen 41 so far and it feels pretty good. I went back and looked at it again. It says there are two male protagonists, so does the protagonist have a lover or not? Or maybe it's just Dumbledore and his pair of CPs This book is a very good book for me. The protagonist is also the plot of the story. I like the composition of the protagonist. But I am the kind of person who prefers no CP, but the main character has no CP and everyone else can do it. So I looked back and saw that there was a boy as the main character, so I wanted to ask about it. I hope that if the protagonist has a CP or something in the future, I don't want to bear the pain and give it up. So I want to ask clearly in advance and explain it carefully. Seeing that it is a bit late now, I should have asked clearly earlier. If any reader has seen it or something, can you tell me? I read the review In this bottle, some people talked about the protagonist and one or another person made a very good comment. So can anyone tell me? I really like this book I also really want to know whether the target male protagonist above is the CP of the target protagonist, or whether it is the CP of Dumbledore or other characters. As for other things, we need to look at them later. I will add follow-up comments again This book is highly recommended. It's very good. The writing of the protagonist and the story are very good. Anyway, I highly recommend it. Well, I've seen a lot of people criticizing a certain guy's CP. Let me guess whether the protagonist's CP is him or someone else's CP Basically, the two male protagonists will not mark the supporting roles, so it feels like they are really the protagonists. Or just to get something together This is the first time I've tied it, and it's been so long. It really shocked me In summary, I want to know if the protagonist has CP What a short summary

The protagonist has a gentle personality and clear organization. It is not a brainless novel. The description is super detailed. He is the same generation as Grindelwald. There is no CP yet. The character is stable and the character creation is multi-faceted. It is worth watching. Highly recommended. Highly recommended [Love] [Send Heart] [Shy]

It's a very nice book. Although it's a bit late to review it after it's finished, I still want to express my feelings. I can see many shadows of famous works in this book (although there are no shadows of famous book elements in it, I just use my own way of speaking). The description of this book is very ordinary and straightforward, just like "To Live" and "Les Misérables". It's obviously a book. All the characters in the book were put down, but I still felt a sense of loss after reading it. I often imagined the "good ending" in my mind, but I gave up in the end because I felt from the bottom of my heart that this was their best ending. This is a book worth reading slowly. Paying attention to every detail can make the senses more vivid. It feels like a good story that I will never forget in my life.

It's great to watch. The protagonist is well portrayed and has a kind of divinity. It's just too much. I went for the two male protagonists. The CP was stabbed before he could take a hot bite. Then he found out that he had no CP [crying] [crying] [crying]. In the end, the protagonist became the god of death. I "squeaked" like a rat. Finally, I wanted to watch some extra scenes to relieve my pain (by the way, I wanted to see if there was any CP that I could take another bite of), but I was caught off guard and took a few bites of the knife. The motivation that keeps me reading now is that I want to write a fanfic and give them a good ending (especially the protagonist and my unrequited CP)

Cp likes it. It's been a long time since I've seen a healing protagonist. It's great. Wrong, no cp currently Also damn healing. I hope that the protagonist can live freely for himself and be completely altruistic.

Love this setting! It's the first time I've met the protagonist of the same period as GGAD [laughing] and I think the character of the protagonist is very interesting haha. I wonder if there is any cp [thinking]. The author will update it soon. I can't wait to read the next article!

This gentle and heart-wrenching male Mommy, the author's writing is very online. It is my favorite magical world separated from Hogwarts, and I will continue to follow it.

The writing is very smooth and excellent. I have read Chapter 48 so far. Is the male protagonist CP his roommate? I hope my roommate's description can match my warm male mother

This is so damn beautiful! ! ! In Chapter 345, I felt like I was breathing a sigh of relief. Scotela was finally dead, and he finally didn't have to be so tired. As a result, the moment I saw him really become the God of Death, I felt a little heartbroken, really. This is the first time I have the patience to read a book whose story is not very exciting. It has a soothing mood that I like very much. Scotella, you are the gentlest person I have ever met. I want two brushes, three brushes and four brushes! ! ! !

Good looking. The author's language has a plain but happy feeling. Just like the protagonist described by the author in the book, the warm sunset~ In addition, I personally feel that this book is suitable to be consumed with Lana Da Rey's Airplane Cloud.

It's very interesting. I originally wanted to watch it after watching it for a while, but I couldn't help myself. This is the first time I have seen a work from the perspective of a student from the same period as Ge Deng, and I am looking forward to the follow-up. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] The protagonist is set to like it

I've watched a quarter of it now, let me know your thoughts. The characters written by the author are still so heartbreaking and suffocating (referring to this and the previous book Bella's Children), but their excellent qualities cannot be denied. Both books can show the fatal influence of family on children... While reading, I was glad that my family members all loved me quite normally. The whole article is full of laughter mixed with a touch of sadness, which makes it look a bit depressing and heavy. Both protagonists (and the previous book) are more or less altruistic and don't care about their own thoughts... The author is too good at portraying such characters (surprise). I hope the author is mentally healthy (?)

The writing is very interesting. It is one of the few books written in the same era as Albus. It gives people a sense of immersive warmth and happiness (the writing style is particularly good and it is very comfortable to read) But how can I put it, the characters written by the author seem to be somewhat solidified. Example: Gellert Grindelwald is a dangerous, aloof, forward-thinking character who is a changer. In the plot, there is a behavior of "climbing windows, almost not liking/hating Aberforth, Villiers and others". These "tsundere" characteristics enrich the character's duality, but the problem arises here. The author is a little too focused on description here. Originally it only served a rich purpose, but the more important emotions were not fully described. So in conclusion, the author's characters written in large letters seem to be too single! ! (The same goes for other characters, like Villiers and Victoria, which feel too "reckless" to me) Personal thoughts, not nitpicking! ! (Personally, I would rather Astra become more powerful, rather than have a more powerful alter ego) I have to say that Astra has been controlling me for a long time, I love it so much! !

Astra softens the entire magical world. He is a variable, but he also exists. He makes ggdd's love last forever and makes the whole world different. Astra's gentleness is revealed to everyone, and he makes all hidden dangers end in his era. HP is absolutely top level!