Yun's Cultivation of Immortality: Ancestors Draw Cards to Bless Immortality

The male protagonist has very few scenes, very few, very few. If you like the kind of male protagonist who has a few close wins in front of you, I wouldn't recommend it. The male protagonist only teaches them in their dreams and does not act as a thug. This is the first time I have seen this in a family story. In other stories, whenever something goes wrong, the male protagonist has to fight for them. In addition, this one and the family are strongly supported by the court, which is more refreshing. The timeline is not particularly short, and it won't be said that the male protagonist is cheating, or the flow rate of the whole time, etc. I can understand that the male protagonist wants to escape from the system space and have freedom. I just hope that the writing does not deviate from the behind-the-scenes flow and make it like traveling around the world by himself. Also, I am a little worried that the male protagonist's ultimate goal is to return to the earth, because I personally prefer to settle down as I have come and have no worries in the original world. Another thing that makes me a little regretful is that as the writing goes on, people in the family become immortal, and the souls of the deceased will return to the male protagonist. It seems that the family will become like this every time. I think it is a little regretful to have a little bit of sword, and there is nothing wrong with it. It has to be made into an immortal style, which gives me a feeling of forced reunion. It is a bit flawed, but some readers can't accept a little bit of sword, so they may think this is good.

It's tied. The author probably wanted to write a particularly grand worldview, but due to lack of writing power, the characters he wrote were not three-dimensional and a bit messy. The death of a family character should have been written more tragically, but because of the setting of Incense God Realm, the character The plot is relatively bland, and it does not express the grief of life and death. Moreover, the hooks are relatively large and the combat power is a bit messy. If the author still wants to write a family novel in the next book, he can look for some high-scoring family novels to improve his writing skills and reduce the hooks appropriately. Of course, If this book is from the perspective of Shuangwen, it is more qualified. In the later period, it has been cheating and high-profile, and the family's reputation has continued to increase. It conforms to the Shuangwen routine and does not have the problem of being depressed for too long and leading to suffocation in other Shuangwen. It is more suitable for book friends who like to read Shuangwen. It is recommended that the author writes less For some plot killings, you are more suitable for writing the kind of exciting articles that are fun all the way to the end. The plot killings really don't seem to be very tragic. In short, they are not cruel to people. However, the world view is not bad. It just needs to be refined and the characters and combat powers are sorted out. Four stars encourage it.

Come on, I've read a lot of novels of this type, and this card-drawing setting gave me a brand-new feeling, but the excitement was gone as soon as I saw it, which made me so happy! It feels so uncomfortable to be neither up nor down [smile] [cover face]

It is a very interesting story about family cultivation of immortality, which vividly depicts the image and characteristics of each member of the Yun clan. I really like reading this kind of fantasy cultivation novel behind the scenes. I hope that the protagonist Yun Jiang behind the scenes will show more of his abilities later: for example, the Yun clan members light three sticks. Burn incense and recite a mantra in your mouth (Please ancestors give me strength😇) → Invite God; the Yun clan members kowtow three times and recite silently (Ask ancestors to lower their eyes and destroy all enemies 😌) → Divine punishment; the Yun clan people recite words and worship (please ancestors come and protect Yun clan 🥺) → God descends. Thank you to the author, it's a very nice book.

The behind-the-scenes articles are pretty good as traditional behind-the-scenes novels. At least I don't even want to give three stars to other behind-the-scenes novels I've read. But the reason why I don't give it five stars is mainly due to the shortcomings of the behind-the-scenes novel itself. The plot is too easy to be dull, the protagonist's appearance rate is destined to be low, and the overall excitement is not enough. If you watch too much family development, you will feel tired. I still really want to give this novel a five-star review.

It's so beautiful. Finally, the family with the golden finger is not suppressed and develops cautiously, but is snatched away for inheritance at any time, or becomes a spiritual treasure and is refined into a human elixir.

I hope to see updates and iterations. The family story should be the kind that continues one after another. If it is a story of several generations, it feels almost meaningless. The past generations should pass away slowly, and the rhythm of the story can be better adjusted.

Come on, it looks pretty smooth so far. I feel like a female housekeeper is about to appear, so I'm a little nervous, and the description of the emotional line is really lacking. Do you know two generations of mistresses? , I don't know the marriage status of other tribesmen, there are still two old bachelors in the first and second generations, but I have arrived at the new map, and I feel that the next development will be very exciting and happy! ᯠ _ ̫ _ ̥ ᯄ ੭

Okay, so far it seems quite interesting. The protagonist sleeps in the family tree as an ancestor who is neither a relative nor an acquaintance. He draws cards and gives away skills and experience when he has nothing to do. There are also various resource cards and mythical beast cards. I haven't seen any yet.

The family is developing steadily. I like this growth rate very much. It's cool and not brainless. There are rich characters and more and more types of characters. Moreover, the skills of cultivating immortals are connected to modern times. It's really fun.

Give yourself a thumbs up, Jie Jie Jie

I am a system person. I distributed the system to my tribe and I have read many chapters. The protagonist is temporarily unclear. I don't know whether the book is the protagonist or Yunlong is the protagonist. It's a slow-moving plot, and many of the introductions are intermittent and a bit complicated. Overall, it's pretty good. I haven't finished it yet. I hope I might have a different experience later.

It's quite nice, but it would be better if there were fewer cards and more details. I think the most surprising thing is that Yunhe was sacrificed for Yunhuohuo. With so many tricks, would Yunhe be worse than Yunhuohuo? If Yunhe falls into the world, he can definitely become the empress and use the Yanhuang card. It's not impossible to use Yun Huohuo, but I just don't think it's necessary to use the Three Heroes to pay tribute. Here, I wish the author can be more complete and get better and better.

At present, Chapter 150 is very comfortable to read, and it finally feels a bit normal. In the book I read before, the main character had some chance and was the enemy of the whole world. I really don't know how a country in this kind of place can last for tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years without being destroyed. The customized card is too outrageous. It's just a mouthful. You can just call it whatever you want. You can just call it a wishing card. And the level is meaningless. Anyway, no matter what level, all the functions the protagonist wants can be realized.

Yes, it's a pretty good novel about a family behind-the-scenes story. It's very good.

The plot is well arranged, and the various characters in the novel are well designed. The protagonist is not the kind who likes to mess around. The author is very obedient and active, and his writing is also good. Although many people have already written this type of article, the author has given it a bit of freshness, which is a bit different from others [Bookshelf Plus 1]

I saw Chapter 135 and finished reading it. I thought it was quite interesting. Why is the rating only 6.5?

I feel like this family article is already very good on Tomato 🍅, but I just don't understand why the rating is only 6 points [thoughts]

So pretty! It made me cry. I read the book from beginning to end without missing a single paragraph or chapter. I am no longer that reader who notices skipping paragraphs and chapters.

It's quite good, more refreshing, less conspiracy theories, it won't suppress you just because you are strong and talented, and there is no intrigue among the forces.

Sounds like a good way to kill time.

Excellent vegetarian meal, Jie Jie Jie

Deep love will not last long, wisdom will be damaged

Very good novel

Starfish, a good family story [laughs]

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but there are so many low-star reviews. There was a woman in the front who was awarded a dance inheritance card. Why didn't she have any role at all? Did she forget it, or should she appear in the fourth volume?

The author needs to add incense to form a body area to fight with his descendants [Thinking]

It's so beautiful, I don't know why the rating is so low

The descriptions of various characters in the family are a bit sparse, but the plot development is still very enjoyable.