Clan Cultivation: I Build My Clan Through Card Draws

A card was drawn in more than fifty chapters. Currently, the first clan member to break through in Qi training has won a lottery chance. To be honest, although it can be seen that the pace is slower, it is too slow. Family history is mainly about population, economy, and strength. Why can't the number of card draws be linked to it? The introduction to the immortal spectrum is pitiful, and it does not explain the conditions for how many times you can draw cards. If you have just broken through Qi training now, then you won't break through foundation building next time. I would be bored to death playing this kind of family simulator. Is it because he is suppressing his strength or is the author afraid that he will draw too many cards and lose control of his writing skills? Later, the protagonist seems to be missing, and it is no longer a simple behind-the-scenes scene. Then why I gave it four stars? Mainly because it just looks at the family development and there is nothing wrong with it. If you don't care about the slow gameplay and weak sense of presence, you can read it as a plain family story. It just feels like "it's for reference only, it depends on the merchant's explanation". After all, there are only more than fifty chapters, and the author also said that the early pace is slow, but you can still read later. It seems that the author wants to work harder in the later stage, but you seem to be a new writer, so it is a bit difficult to retain people. After all, Tomato people like to read cool articles (I don't mean to say that you are unhappy with your martial arts and spiritual cultivation). It just has a low sense of presence, a bit of a suppression of strength, and it is uncomfortable to watch.

There was a prince who was a cultivator next to him. When he saw an Orion son's innate cultivation skills, he was ready to steal the golden bell and Arhat fist secretly. The funny thing is that there are several innates in one village and the bodyguards around the prince were only innate.

The male protagonist has very few scenes, very few, very few. If you like the kind of male protagonist who has a few close wins in front of you, I wouldn't recommend it. The male protagonist only teaches them in their dreams and does not act as a thug. This is the first time I have seen this in a family story. In other stories, whenever something goes wrong, the male protagonist has to fight for them. In addition, this one and the family are strongly supported by the court, which is more refreshing. The timeline is not particularly short, and it won't be said that the male protagonist is cheating, or the flow rate of the whole time, etc. I can understand that the male protagonist wants to escape from the system space and have freedom. I just hope that the writing does not deviate from the behind-the-scenes flow and make it like traveling around the world by himself. Also, I am a little worried that the male protagonist's ultimate goal is to return to the earth, because I personally prefer to settle down as I have come and have no worries in the original world. Another thing that makes me a little regretful is that as the writing goes on, people in the family become immortal, and the souls of the deceased will return to the male protagonist. It seems that the family will become like this every time. I think it is a little regretful to have a little bit of sword, and there is nothing wrong with it. It has to be made into an immortal style, which gives me a feeling of forced reunion. It is a bit flawed, but some readers can't accept a little bit of sword, so they may think this is good.

It's tied. The author probably wanted to write a particularly grand worldview, but due to lack of writing power, the characters he wrote were not three-dimensional and a bit messy. The death of a family character should have been written more tragically, but because of the setting of Incense God Realm, the character The plot is relatively bland, and it does not express the grief of life and death. Moreover, the hooks are relatively large and the combat power is a bit messy. If the author still wants to write a family novel in the next book, he can look for some high-scoring family novels to improve his writing skills and reduce the hooks appropriately. Of course, If this book is from the perspective of Shuangwen, it is more qualified. In the later period, it has been cheating and high-profile, and the family's reputation has continued to increase. It conforms to the Shuangwen routine and does not have the problem of being depressed for too long and leading to suffocation in other Shuangwen. It is more suitable for book friends who like to read Shuangwen. It is recommended that the author writes less For some plot killings, you are more suitable for writing the kind of exciting articles that are fun all the way to the end. The plot killings really don't seem to be very tragic. In short, they are not cruel to people. However, the world view is not bad. It just needs to be refined and the characters and combat powers are sorted out. Four stars encourage it.

The protagonist is really behind the scenes. There are 40 photos in total. They appeared twice. They were like giving a few yuan as a nanny and then disappeared.

Unhappy, the system disappeared, and then I drew cards three or four times. Each person only used one card. It was really too light.

It is a very interesting story about family cultivation of immortality, which vividly depicts the image and characteristics of each member of the Yun clan. I really like reading this kind of fantasy cultivation novel behind the scenes. I hope that the protagonist Yun Jiang behind the scenes will show more of his abilities later: for example, the Yun clan members light three sticks. Burn incense and recite a mantra in your mouth (Please ancestors give me strength😇) → Invite God; the Yun clan members kowtow three times and recite silently (Ask ancestors to lower their eyes and destroy all enemies 😌) → Divine punishment; the Yun clan people recite words and worship (please ancestors come and protect Yun clan 🥺) → God descends. Thank you to the author, it's a very nice book.

Come on, I've read a lot of novels of this type, and this card-drawing setting gave me a brand-new feeling, but the excitement was gone as soon as I saw it, which made me so happy! It feels so uncomfortable to be neither up nor down [smile] [cover face]

One glance at AI and you can't see it anymore

Author, please give me a chapter to introduce the background and cultivation system of this world of immortality, as well as where all those messy "Qi" come from. Also, in that card drawing system, does Yunjiang draw it, or can other Yun family members also draw it? Another point is that you materialize the card so that other Yun family members can see it. What is your purpose? Personally, I think it's better to draw cards from Yun Jiang, draw something, and then teach it to Yun Jiang. Otherwise, what is the purpose of designing such a character? There is such a character, but he is deliberately downplayed. Also, is this world of cultivating immortals a game world or a real world of cultivating immortals?