Pick up Leaks and Become Immortal

It's a traditional Xiuxian-style novel, but there are too few updates. The protagonist has a good personality. I hope the little author I raised this time won't die, and at least it will be finished [laughing] It's really okay. It's also good to listen to before going to bed.

Beautiful pictures! Excellent manners! A soft breeze of elegance! Invigorate the fragrance of summer! The beautiful face brings out the brightness of the season! The refreshing fragrance! The scenery dyed green with the seasons! The graceful and gentle melody is accompanied by wonderful and fresh pictures! Picturesque! The fleeting floral fragrance! Quiet and beautiful years! Showing the splendor of romance! The fragrance of the soul! Showing its unique charm! Give it to people! A unique surprise! Like! An intoxicating and tender song! With the breeze! Entering the heart! Beautiful lady! Smiling peacefully, eyes full of tenderness, fresh and beautiful, and fragrant! Not to be copied! Beautiful graceful face! The light and gentle unique charm full of floral fragrance is like the agarwood of time! Full of fragrance! Use smiling indifference! Express the feelings of life! Use the most beautiful singing voice to interpret the most romantic tenderness!

Nice! ! ! I don't know why so few people watch it

Why are there so few people who read it? The author is trying to see if he can make two chapters out of one chapter. Otherwise, the number of chapters is too few, or he will just keep reading. It's rare to see this kind of immortality novel that is serious about cultivating immortality without being frivolous. The plot is not procrastinating, and there are no previous routines. The emotional line is also delicate. Come on, don't give up [Blow kiss]

The protagonists accompany each other to grow and become stronger. Very pretty.

The story of two teenagers supporting each other is a little too fast in the later stages.

This is the fastest cultivation among the novels I have read. Some are not as fast as human cultivation, but as the author's first novel, overall it is good. I look forward to the next one!

It's very interesting. It's rare to see a novel about two teenagers supporting each other and getting close to each other. However, the punctuation is not quite right, there are a lot of typos, and there are basically no colons. I hope the author will try to change these places [Sending my heart] The rest of the plot progresses too fast

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Like it very much. Recommended to readers.

This short article is worth recommending.

It's interesting, keep working hard, come on

It's pretty good, fast paced. The three views are also correct.

It's not bad, I finished listening to the book, upgraded to Immortal Literature, and the two male protagonists have been accompanying each other. I just feel like there aren't a lot of emotional descriptions. The shortcomings have also been mentioned in other reviews. The ending was unexpected, and it felt like the plot was over as soon as it started.

Good, good, good, good

It's a very good book about cultivating immortals, full of human touch, less fantasy, and more about ordinary people's feelings. Very fast and smooth.

Not bad, practice went smoothly.

Like like like

Not bad, worth watching

A very nice book

Ah ah ah ah beautiful

It looks okay. It feels a bit like Wen Zou Zou.

At the beginning, there were two spiritual roots. Why did it become single spiritual roots inexplicably?

Overall not bad. It's just that the pace is too fast later on

Fortunately, I like it. The two protagonists are both the darlings of heaven [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Although it's a bit short, it looks good

Very nice, I like this style of novel.

It's a bit rushed at the end, but overall it's good and the writing is refreshing.

Very interesting, the story is very logical

It's a good little sweet story, going both ways, but the ending is too hasty.