The Third Senior Brother Seems Useless, Yet He’s Eerily Strong!

Do you all like the system? But I want to write unsystematic articles, and, well, wouldn't it be cool to create my own golden fingers? Really handsome! DIY cheats, and later you can upgrade the cheats to be comparable to or even better than the system! Doesn't this appeal to you? ! And the little junior sister is very cute! _(:з)∠)_

It's a bit creative (although it's an idea with precedent, for example: external spiritual root), but it has more poisonous points, which is average in Tomato, but I won't nitpick too much. After all, I heard that it is a new author. Come on, author. When writing about characters and things, you can compare it to what you have experienced or heard about in your own life, and think about whether what you write is reasonable. (Die Jia: The above is purely a personal subjective opinion, please do not go online, please do not criticize, thank you)

I am the protagonist who has incredible understanding and is proficient in dessert and barbecue, loves to eat illusions, and has an IQ that rises and falls. The content has nothing to do with the title of the book. The title is just two labels for the content. Although the protagonist is low in talent, his photographic memory and understanding are incredible. He only built the foundation after taking more than 50 pictures. His strength is not very strong, and he is manipulated by his master every day. But the protagonist is full of emotions, values ​​his relatives and friends, has a young mentality, is not calm enough in dealing with things, and has self-imagining behavior, which is similar to thinking that what he guesses is happening in reality. There is a sense of contradiction in his pursuit of strength. It seems that he pursues strength but does not pay attention to the speed of improvement of strength.

It's okay, but the slow-burning of fantasy will test the author's writing skills too much. There is also the author who changed the name of a slow-burning novel to a cool novel. Although it may suck, readers will definitely have a bad first impression of you. When others see the name of your novel, it will definitely be like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, leapfrogging is like drinking water, but it is not like that when you click on it and read it. The author wanted to give the male protagonist a big background, but it was explained too late. Originally, this exciting point could have retained a good part of the readers, and at least the ratings could be improved. Also, this book feels like it's overloaded with words. It depends on whether the author works hard or not. The main focus of this book is on the later stages of the book. There are other miscellaneous details about the background of the male protagonist in the follow-up to highlight the interesting points. But I think those who like Junior Sister will like this book, jiejiejie

It's a relaxing and leisurely story about cultivating immortals, harem flow, and making your own golden fingers. It shouldn't be considered a fun novel. The protagonist just thinks about cultivating immortals every day and then enjoys delicious food. From time to time, some villains come to spice up the plot.

It's very interesting, the plot is interesting, the junior sister is very cute, I hope to see the senior brother (bushi) and the protagonist together [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] The protagonist is also the first protagonist I have seen who rubs spiritual roots with his hands. The idea is very novel.

Wisdom teeth, please read this book, I just hope it won't be a eunuch

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It's very well written. The author is very optimistic about you. Come on.

It's a very good article about daily immortality. It's strange that this kind of writing doesn't sound like a new writer 😳.