Strange Tales of the City

I hope everyone will comment on my book after reading it. If you have any questions, I can answer them when I have time. I will try to answer every question when I have time🤔 This is my first time writing a novel. If there are any bad points, please tell me. I will try my best to answer them. My family members have commented a lot after reading this. It's okay to say nothing but scold me. There are too few comments and I don't have the motivation to write.