A Beggar from the Start, and You’ve Grinded Your Way into the Night Emperor?

Everything about the book is okay, but I don't like to see this kind of woman being so nice to a beggar. Even if she is like a younger brother, a beggar is a beggar. Who would like a beggar if he is a decent person? I hate this kind of plot the most and I can't stand it anymore!

I can see it, but the character named Sister Yun is a bit redundant. The protagonist is a beggar, and with his advanced hiding skills, he can completely overhear some secrets to advance the plot. You said that the protagonist attracts Sister Yun based on her appearance, I think it's okay It turns out that Sister Yun has a crush on the protagonist because the protagonist looks like her brother It's a bit humorous. Sister Yun and her brother are addicted to gambling and have completely different personalities from the protagonist. Moreover, there is no description of his brother's appearance in the article, not to mention that he looks almost the same. I don't understand how the protagonist resembles her brother [Thoughts]

The protagonist is very much like a native and has little knowledge. After knowing that he can practice martial arts, he always thinks that if he is successful in martial arts, who dares to provoke him? Is there anyone outside who doesn't understand?

Looks good, come on Ning Yu punched out, and blood rushed into his right arm crazily. The face of his fist was as black as ink, and the muscles in his arm swelled, like a black dragon ready to strike. The fist wind roared, bringing up a violent wave of air, and the air made a sharp explosion. Zhao Hu's pupils shrank suddenly, feeling the terrifying power of this punch, and his heart suddenly sank. His face was full of horror, and he hurriedly crossed his arms to block it. However, Ning Yu's punch was too fast and too fierce. It was like a blue dragon emerging from the water, and it penetrated the sky! "Bang!" The fists and arms collided, making a dull loud noise. Zhao Hu only felt an unparalleled force coming from him. His arms were in sharp pain, as if he had been hit by a hammer. In the blink of an eye, his body was knocked backwards by this huge force, and he fell heavily on the edge of the martial arts stage. A mouthful of blood spurted out of his mouth, and his face was instantly as pale as paper.

The pace is too slow. Secondly, there are a lot of poisonous points. There is a story about going to the toilet in the middle of the night to test the skills. It is very interesting. Secondly, you have known someone for a few months and you want them to buy an ancestral home and live with you. You are a scammer and a love brain. The key is that you haven't written a love story yet.

The writing is very detailed, and it can be seen that the author's writing skills are very profound. However, if it is too detailed, the pace will be a bit slow. I feel that the plot can be sped up a bit and the interesting points can be connected. Come on 👍

The book is okay. The protagonist is a good person and a hero. The protagonist likes to help the weak, eliminate violence, help others, and relieve people in need!

It's all the same, today's novels,,, to pass the time, to pass the time

Nothing new, just the same old routine

It's not bad, the plot is okay, the protagonist is decisive in killing and a little stable, so go for the author 🍉