Goudao************

There is a lot of room for improvement

Good, the logic is clear and the approach is sound and good.

It's pretty good, you can take a look

It looks good. Does the author's protagonist have any children of his own? [Thinking]

Cultivation is not easy, the important thing is the process

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

The plot fits the identity of the protagonist, the structure is clear, and the narrative is logical

It's pretty. Come on.

Give yourself full marks