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Surprisingly not bad. Now my motivation to continue watching is that I really want to see the scene when Chiba fights with them in reality. It stands to reason that if Chiba wins the second stage, then most of them are still in the first stage. Isn't this the same as being beaten by them in a dream and beating them in reality? I was very curious about that scene. And for Chiba, he has fought most of them several times, so he should be familiar with their moves. It has a great advantage over the other party. Then say what they said to Chiba. Something like don't be careless when going to the bar.

It's beautiful, and the main character's setting is super nice! The descriptions of winning and competing experiences are very good! ! ! There is no rigid feeling, and the process of the protagonist's strength improvement is very natural. It can be said that most of it relies on his own efforts. The daily descriptions do not have the feeling of being very 13 King. In short, I recommend it~

Oni Jujiro was stronger than Byodoin in the beginning. When he first entered U17, Oni was the one who beat Byodoin to the back of the mountain. It's very well written, why did you cut it?

①The author has read the comics carefully ② There are no positive comments about the exact five-dimensional data, and many of them are a complete mess when writing about the exact five-dimensional values. ③The protagonist's strength growth and progress are relatively solid.

It is rare to rationalize the plug-in through your own efforts. It is much better than those system articles. I hope the author will work hard.

Very well written. It's rare to see such beautiful writing in this place. The protagonist progresses based on his own strength, puts in hard work and sweat, and works steadily. The settings of the small details are also very interesting, and it is worth reading slowly. It is really a rare good article! PS: I saw that Dada has updated a lot recently, and I feel like Dada is really working hard! Dear, don't be tired, but don't be idle either. Come on and update [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's really beautiful. It's not like the direct transmission of system texts, it's more real and rare masterpieces.

It's rare 🍅 to see a fan of Net King that suits your taste. It's still from the previous generation. The writing style is also good, and the content is good. It's good-looking, but it's so short. Come on, author, work hard, and work hard!

It's well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

Come on, it's super pretty [adoration][adoration]

High-quality online fan fiction The writing style, writing power, and rhythm are outstanding among online fans. Advantages ① The entry point is very good. I started in the second grade of junior high school in the Silver Age and became a late bloomer. I only wrote about one season of junior high school competition. At first, I was really unhappy that the second grade of junior high school was still an ordinary strength. However, the author's writing skills, upgrade route and entry point advantages completely overshadowed the ordinary strength in the beginning. Compared with the Golden Age, the rhythm of the Golden Age is too slow. It takes three years to write about the junior high school competition. The second is that the upgrade route is difficult to do. Either you start strong at the beginning, or you start with an invincible start. If you write about the average strength of the Golden Age, it will only drive away readers. Even if you upgrade very fast, there will be pressure to put it on the shelf at a certain point. If you write like this in the early stage, the upgrade route before it is put on the shelf will often be like a roller coaster. The content of the group portrait competition in the Three Kingdoms is very difficult to write and the content is very bad. In the golden age, there is no way to make up for the regrets at the beginning of the third country, which is not good either. Advantages ② The upgrade route and cheats are well designed. The cheats extract future junior high school players for dream battles and improve talent absorption skills. You can write some battles with anime characters who have fan base in the original works, attract too many fan fans, and avoid the situation of no fan base in the Silver Age. The design of the upgrade route is also the same. The main visual focus is on the protagonist. After the National Second National Competition, there is no need to write down the time for the group portrait competition. Instead, focus on the protagonist to write about the upgrade and the protagonist's character creation and design. The early upgrade feeling is full and not so unreasonable. Furthermore, the strength training system is based on NetKing's internal settings, making it more immersive, rather than using external settings. Advantage ③: The indigenous protagonist is well designed by combining cheats and entry points, which avoids the disadvantage of not knowing the plot of the original work, and allows you to write a real anime protagonist instead of a fan classic nanny protagonist. He can have family and friendship instead of being a house-snatching nanny Disadvantages: slow updates, no results, and eunuch skills.

The setting of this dream stadium is very good Excellent product with no shortcomings in every aspect

It's okay, but according to the description, the main character seems to be a spiritual type. How did he become a powerful type?

So far, it seems to be a high-quality product in the Internet King category. It looks pretty good, but the number of words is too small and I have to keep it up. There is another book I read recently, The Internet King is in Lihai, Proud of the World on Top of the World, which is okay, but the number of words is too small.

Author, this is so good, please work hard

The writing is very good, but it is not updated anymore, which is a pity. I hope the author will update it soon and enter the world!

It can be regarded as a relatively high-quality work in the Net King series, but the updates are too slow and a bit unsatisfying [smile]

It's so well written. I haven't seen a book that suits my taste for a long time [Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, it's not an extravagant genre, it's hard work and has the flavor of the original comic.

The writing is beautiful, why is the score so low? Although there are a lot of private properties. But this is fanfic written.

So far so good

It looks good, come on, come on

Unexpected wonderful

Why is it gone? Don't go

Japan has dreams. You can definitely go to a foreign team

It's a very interesting Internet King novel. It's a little different from other Internet King fandoms. It's very unique and the key points are also very well written. It's just that the reading count is a bit low, and I'm afraid the author has run away. Recommend it. The author's writing is very good. He writes about the protagonists Yukimura and Tezuka during their last diamond age, and connects them with the future Yukimura and Tezuka through dreams. The key is that the author's writing is very good.

Come on, come on, come on [love] [love]

Very well written.

Rare works of Internet King

Come on, author, don't write down